Douluo: Play as a Natural God at the Beginning

The front part was okay at first, but the back part was completely ruined as soon as the soul bone came out.

The character design of the protagonist is not bad, but I have read too many articles about the torturer Gangzi, and I have a deep impression. It is definitely difficult to reconcile Gangzi and Haozi when they appear. If not handled well, it will turn into a licker. It is difficult to create a righteous protagonist, especially the protagonist is a time traveler. Now, most of the background stories of Douluo's characters are known, and he also injured two licking beasts with heavy blows. He wanted to kill Ditian and Silver Dragon King instead of retreating quickly. It's a bit OOC, and Dai Mubai's status in the team is already very embarrassing. Wait for the follow-up.

Without any preparation, a soul bone is directly exploded on a passerby. This soul bone is so outrageous that it can be used as a plug-in in a book. This deus ex machina is also too outrageous 😅

This part of the plot is copied from Naruto: It starts with creating a genius character. No, it's okay to borrow ideas. Why can you copy the plot of the first chapter? When registering for the same school, you should carry a stone while registering near the school gate. The same dialogue says that you only use your body to resist without soul power (chakra). That one is Kakashi and White Fang, and this one is about Tang San Xiaowu discussing the protagonist, so let's change it 😅

Why would you join Shrek if you didn't have this talent? You still have to pay the damn tuition. Teaching is like carrying a rock and running into the spirit fighting arena. You don't get anything you want. You can't get into any major academy with this talent. If you don't say anything else, you can't get into Tiandou or Qibao.

What kind of rubbish is this? If you get a soul bone, you want the whole world to know its use. You even take out the research manuscript. What an AI. What a piece of shit.

What does it mean that the protagonist who is 1.7 Meters taller than the 12-year-old Tang San? If you just glance at the original text, you will know that the 12-year-old Tang San is 1.8 Meters

Do you want to copy it exactly the same? This is no longer a reference, but a copy? Can you still play like this at the starting point?

I just read Chapter 50. Everything written before was pretty good. I thought it was a good book. But in Chapter 50, the protagonist has just obtained the fourth soul ring. Together with the two soul saints Flanders and Liu Erlong, he uses martial soul fusion skills to seriously injure Da Ming, Er Ming and Di Tian. Then he kills the Silver Dragon King with one move, which is as powerful as the Half-Step God King.

It was too poisonous. In Chapter 49, the protagonist, Flanders and Liu Erlong used martial soul fusion skills and killed the Silver Dragon King with one punch.

I'm speechless. At the beginning, I just said that Zhu Zhuqing is an independent woman. The other readers laughed.

It was extremely poisonous. I thought I had found a good herb, but it turned out that the protagonist Soul Sect + the fusion skills of two Soul Saints and Martial Souls killed the Silver Dragon King... And died from the poison.

It feels like someone else has written it again. The last book was the same, but suddenly the style changed.

The writing is really disgusting, The most important thing about this kind of plug-in is to show up in front of people, The best thing is to find a big force to back you, have a backing, and strengthen publicity. Just like the golden generation of Wuhun Palace, before the Wuhun Competition has even started, it is almost famous throughout the continent. It is useless for you to go to Shrek. There are few people and no backers. How can you show yourself to others,

Snippets from other books can be seen from Chapter 1 to Chapter 21. Automatic arrangement started after the 22nd picture. Because the descriptors or prompt words were gradually incomplete, the plot began to collapse.

The front is fine, but the back of Soul Bone is fine.

How to say it? The poison is too poisonous, especially in the Kingdom of Balak, where he is always being treated as if he is in the mortal world. It is also said that even if he has grown up to be a titled Douluo, he does not dare to fuck him openly. What are you thinking about? They have become titled Douluo, why don't they dare to do it? Why don't they dare to destroy your clan? Are you living in a fucking fantasy world?

It's really poisonous. Level 40➕Martial soul fusion. Fighting Emperor Tian. Isn't this nonsense?

How should I put it? Douluo is the sewer in the sewer. Those who have seen the unedited version of Douluo should understand that as long as there is a little extraterrestrial devil in this thing, the world will be destroyed. Regarding the martial soul fusion agent killing the Silver Dragon King, I actually think it is reasonable. After all, that is the World Honored One. Isn't it shameful to kill a low-level narrative layer?

The combat power collapsed. In Chapter 50, I was level 40. I merged my martial soul with Frand Liu Erlong and defeated the emperor.

You are not really planning to pimp Ma Hongjun and Shui Binger, then you really have to run away.

Can you block this author and this book?

No, buddy, what did you write next? Why did it become a secret realm directly?

Douluo: Readers think the author is shit

Level 40 and Liu Erlong Fland's martial soul fusion skills defeated the Azure Bull Python and killed the Silver Dragon King with one punch.

This protagonist is not playing the role of a natural god, but a natural god. He is level 40 and has two level 70 pendants to kill the Silver Dragon King in seconds. What is this if he is not a god? The tribulation of reincarnation has come.

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I saw Chapter 172 I am a pure sz

The front was pretty good, even if the second hit was within the scope of Douluo. As a result, the more mistakes he made later, the more he went to his grandma's house, which had something to do with Douluo.

The more I write, the less it resembles Douluo. Especially after arriving in the uninhabited city, the content has nothing to do with Douluo. It just uses Douluo's name.