Starting from Mortals, Cultivating the Tao to the Heavens

Have you read the accounting novel? I have read a novel written in the form of a diary. This narrative novel is more diary than a diary. This is the first time I have seen it. Let's talk about the writing style. The writing style is good, very smooth and not wordy. The logic is okay and there is nothing poisonous about it. There is no emotional drama, and there is no loss of points on the female level. Here comes the problem. One is the plot. This main line is based on the original plot, which is equivalent to watching the original work again. Secondly, there are almost no highlights of the protagonist's golden finger, which means that the protagonist has merged the main plot with the original work, and the plot has no ups and downs. Third, the narration using God's vision has no sense of substitution, which is the most critical. So it's really hard to look at plain water that is bland and tasteless.

The protagonist's gender should not only be male, but also female. On a more serious level, it's about understanding yin and yang. To a lesser extent, I would say weekends. Externally, they form a Taoist couple, Bai Yueguang, and Green Tea Bitch. Collect resources and use Han Li's various role-playing routines to create his elixirs. Every important person in your life is actually me.

Forget it, I'm not interested in watching it. It has been inked for almost 50 years. How long do you have to live physically?

I'm greening myself, I'm sick, I can't stand it anymore, I'm abandoning the book

I dare to say that Zhongdao is the most awesome golden finger, there is no one among them. If you have any objections, please give me a thumbs up! In a few hundred years, the whole fucking world of cultivation will be my clone! What an awesome and arrogant goddess! I am surrounded by thousands of clones of me with different cultivation levels! Goddess, which avatar of mine do you choose? After you choose, give me a clone! My goal is that all the candidates for cultivating immortals in the world are my clones and my women 🤭🌹🤝😁😄😄😄😊😊

Teddy, it's Nangong or something, the author is only at this level, he only has tadpoles in his mind

In just a few thousand or ten thousand years, in the mortal world, all men may be the protagonists 😅

I want to see more than a dozen protagonists play together! Take turns! Stuffed to the brim!

The setting is interesting. After giving birth to a child, you will be an avatar and multiple people can coexist. Why does Mo Juren's wife want everyone? Why is it necessary for everyone to do this? It's just a gimmick, right? It's come to an end.

Give birth to yourself? Crazy! Besides, for someone like Han Li, either kill him directly or stay away. Surrounding him will only turn you into a treasure-delivery boy.

Don't you want to grab the little green bottle? You won't be able to play anymore after building the foundation.

(Full score 10 points) Zhongdao+2 Shuangwen+2 Curiousness+2 Strong words+2 Rhythm+2 Description (-?)

What a dick, he won't even let go of a ten thousand year old female corpse

Great update, awesome👍👍

Why didn't you have a daughter? How much better would it be to arrange for Han Li to have a baby? The relationship between a couple growing up is better than a couple halfway through.

The protagonist is quite awesome and will do whatever it takes to advance, but it's a pity that he can't have a girl.

The protagonist's efficiency in increasing luck is too slow. Why not create more female bodies, and then make Han Li's uncles, uncles, and even his parents all the husband and wife of the protagonist, so that he will not let go of any luck 😅

I haven't seen Panlong, and I don't know if it's good or not. You might as well write about Douluo, and there are too many people to control. At least add a limit. Even if there are 10 to 20 people, everyone has the desire to watch it. There are hundreds of people at every turn, and how can tens of thousands of people watch it? There is also the clone. If you tell him to die, he will die. Isn't this nonsense? Also, the clone accidentally died, and it was like a normal person, feeling no pain at all. This is also nonsense. If these problems are solved, the author's performance will definitely be better. I don't know how much better it will be, but it will definitely be better than now.

I don't understand the role of this golden finger in cultivating immortality.

The pattern was opened, Han Li's mother or his little sister were taken away, and they were getting their own small bottles. Is this still a thing?

The humanoid Zerg have become the explosive force.

I don't know about the others, but I enjoyed watching it! The author doesn't care about other people's beeps. As long as you update, I will follow you! Another 100 is offered! With a little thought, the author will be greatly encouraged!

The shortcomings are obvious. The novel is written like an expository essay, with no sense of immersion at all.

If you accept the setting, this cheat will make people watch it

Such as the title: The intervals between the first few worlds are very long, and the development effect of seed cultivation is very good. It is so obvious that it is too late to fight, and there is also the death line of the Soul Emperor.

The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! Borrowing my precious treasure, I recommend a book that is decisive in killing, nonsensical and clever, and full of joy. "The old man picked up rags in time and made a living by making bad movies", which is hilarious...

Don't mortals write anymore? ? ? Writing about other worlds is not interesting.