Xiu Xian: I Can Hang up and Simulate

Could the protagonist please stop "smashing his mouth twice"? This description happens two or three times in every chapter. It's too frequent.

Your writing is featureless and there are so many simulations. Can't you take a look? What you write is really ordinary and good. You don't have the desire to read it. Do you understand?

Bar muscles and mouth, endless, the main character is the same as a psychopath

Keep simulating and repeating. Without the simulation chapter, it would probably be less than 100 words.

This technique can consume up to 70% of your true energy even if you climb a mountain. What the heck is it? Also, other natives have goals - practice martial arts so they can eat meat every day, marry a beautiful wife, and build a big house. You, a time traveler, have no goals?

Studio article, don't read it. The main character keeps tutting his tongue. I'm bored after reading Chapter 27. I can't even stand the poison-carrying strong man.

I just like to read this kind of styleless writing, and give up when I see the paid chapters, and it doesn't take up space on the bookshelf.

This is a fucking magical book, a magical book about hypnosis. I fell asleep before I saw more than 20 pictures last night😂😂😂

Studio fiction? Keep smashing your mouth?

It makes me so uncomfortable. There are too many characters and commas in this one. For example: When I heard this, my eyes lit up and I honestly went over it. This is a bit too many commas. . What's even more exaggerated is the next paragraph: Hu Yi, here, is ranked at the bottom. After coming here, it didn't take long for him to register the name list over there. Apart from anything else, what the hell is "one's"? Also: while walking, I got some instructions. . . . . Why do you like the word "" so much

It's so annoying to smash your mouth, and the endless repetition of simulations, the sea, you are all water. If you don't get good grades, that's what you should do.

This is a real AFK novel, the whole story is about AFK.

This was written using an article generator, right?

It's not fun at all, and it will affect your mood if you watch it too much, 🤑

The article has a bit of novelty in the exploration of martial arts, but the rest of the article is a bit watery and the rhythm is not tight enough.

It's purely self-flagellation and a cookie-cutter account.

Yes, yes, no stop. My head exploded when I listened to the book.

Starting from Chapter 101, there is no simulation, only the promotion of the storyline. It becomes exciting all of a sudden. Don't miss it.

This system has no purpose other than to use numbers. It is both useless and poisonous.

It's like a running account, plus the paid chapters are a bit short. Money is not an issue, but don't make it too short.

The author really portrays the physical weakness of the protagonist to the core. If nothing happens, just smash it and smash it in the mouth. The protagonist is really weak. The story is good, especially in terms of expression. To be honest, if you want to be good at the number of words, you can't be good at a few words. It also affects the reading experience. It's unnecessary.

There is a problem with the author's setting. As long as those cultivators have mortal relatives and friends or communicate with mortals, then most people in the world will definitely know that there are cultivators in the world. Never underestimate human vanity and curiosity, it is like a virus that spreads from ten to ten.

Things get better starting from chapter 40

I live hundreds or thousands of times longer than others. The entire simulator is completely wasted and I haven't used it at all. I don't need a lot of time to practice martial arts. I can also use medical elixirs. I have no friends in the sect. Everything is wasted. I didn't find that the most awesome thing is the incident in the simulator. It's still an experience or something. Come on.

Goldfinger is a simulator with no restrictions at all. It's okay in the early stage, but in the middle stage, readers don't have to abandon the book if they get tired of it. I've rarely seen a book with more than a million words. The whole article is simulated. I lost sight of it in the mid-term

Copy and paste, soulless garbage

Hurry up and go back to work in the factory before the lockdown is lifted.

The author should be a newbie, his writing skills are okay, and there is still a lot of room for improvement. Just don't let the protagonist smack his mouth all the time. Three smacks in one chapter is a bit exaggerated. It feels like the "evil smile" and "touching the nose" of the protagonist in previous novels, which still affects the reading experience. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Writing about martial arts was quite interesting at first, but once I got to the point of cultivating immortals, not only was the plot very cliche, but the most important thing was that the writing was very poor. Was it a different person? I feel quite disappointed.

That's so stupid. You should go to primary school so that you can't tell your cousins ​​apart later.