Fairy Tail: I Don't Want to Be the President

This week's update starts from Tenrou Island. I don't see any difference from the original version. The only differences are the characters who are not at the center of the story. Now the central character: What is the difference between Mira and the original version? The protagonist has worked hard for so long, but if he just marries her, there will be no difference in combat power, and there will be no difference in the direction of the story? In the original version, Mira lost partly because she was held back by her younger sister, partly because she had been decadent for too long and had insufficient physical training. It was an encounter. In the original version, part of her magic power was used for the assessment. Now that Mira's mind has been healed by the protagonist in advance, her body has recovered from physical exercise, and there is no sister to hold her back, how can it be the same as the original version? The current state of presence is completely different from the original version, and the original version places special emphasis on the soul and belief. How on earth could Mira be like this? Was the previous chapter written in vain? What about changes? Author, your plot this week is 80% the same as the original version. The number of words in each chapter remains the same and the amount of information is so small. The plot is inconsistent and the character arc is revealed? Is this how Mira is shaped? What difference does it make if this protagonist has you or not? The growth of other supporting characters can be ignored or omitted for other reasons. Didn't Mira focus on the writing? Do you respect your own book if you write it like this? Do you respect readers' support? In the latest chapters, if the protagonist summons a dragon, others will really be blind, right? When did dragons become so worthless in the Fairy Tail world? The Fairy Tail guild has a protagonist with such a superb group fighting ability. If there are people who can summon dragons in single combat, it still follows the original plan and the same routine. Is it really a direct copy of the original version? Author, have you lost track of your achievements? Did you take this book seriously? If your ability is not good enough, then it will suck. Don't make people disgusting by copying it over and over.

The first part is pretty good, but later on I start to write a lot of emotional scenes that are sweet for the sake of being sweet. If some emotional scenes are interspersed in the main text, they can also be used as seasonings. However, the author treats the emotional scenes as if they are dinner, and it is all an industrial love saccharine that is sweet for the sake of being sweet. The more I read, the more boring it becomes.

The recent updates are basically reproducing the plot of Tenrou Island. Many interesting points that should have belonged to this book have been discarded. The male protagonist, as a military advisor, is basically excluded from this battle. Several key enemies really do what they should do. The enemy's plan is advancing in an orderly manner. He was beaten to a semi-crippling effect. The plug-in that he was suspected to have obtained in the tomb of the first generation president has no effect. Also, there are really too many descriptions and nonsense about fighting. Generally speaking, action scenes should be carried out as frugally and quickly as possible, otherwise the whole viewing rhythm will become very uncomfortable. I don't deny that some explanations while fighting can be very comfortable to watch, but it definitely has nothing to do with this book. Who would have thought that after 15 chapters, the plots of 12 chapters are almost replicas of the original work. Even because of too many descriptions, the viewing experience is not as good as the original work. It really feels like a waste of money. There is also this kind of rhythm. If you write this kind of plot too much, if the author does not change, he will develop a writing habit, and it will be difficult to write that kind of fast-paced and exciting plot. Don't believe me, I have read a lot of novels. Basically, many authors wrote this kind of long and smelly plot in a long way in the last book. As a result, this writing habit has not changed by the beginning of the next book, and then the beginning that is clearly used to attract attention becomes smelly and long. How can I put it this way, although as a fan, it's okay to copy a little of the original plot, but copying the original plot for more than ten chapters, especially when it comes to combat plots, the overly lengthy descriptions and dialogues really affect the reading experience.

Reviews say it looks good, but to me it looks like boiled water with rice. The character has no characteristics and lives his daily life like eating and drinking. The descriptions of daily life are too concentrated and seem very bland with no highlights. The descriptions of other characters are very blank, and most of the time they are conversations between characters. Pre-judgment first, some people will definitely say that this is what everyday writing is like. Although I haven't read many daily articles, daily articles shouldn't be like a running account. It rained today. How did I find my umbrella and how did I get to work? Why should these things that have nothing to do with the plot be described in detail? And it's not just these, there are also a lot of things that I think have nothing to do with the plot. I even remember writing about a day in my life. On that critical day, I only had the special point of hearing other people's adventure stories, and I only mentioned it with a sentence like "I heard their adventure stories." Then I described what I did at work, a long description that has nothing to do with the plot. Alas, it can only be tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away.

The only difference between the plot of Tenrou Island and the original work is that the opposite characters have been changed, and the subsequent battle plot has basically remained unchanged. The plot of the battle with the black dragon is very exciting, but it still has the same problem as before, a flaw of not knowing the characters of the original plot and letting the giant dragon fight the black dragon. Any character who knows the plot of the original work. There's nothing stupid he can do. It has no effect other than stacking the Fury buff on the black dragon. In an instant, Black Dragon's mind changed from a game of cat and mouse to a fight to the death. After that, we faced the Black Dragon Queen who was forced to seal her. The seven years of sealing in the original book were hard to come by for many fans of the original book. Isn't the purpose of writing fan fiction just to make up for regrets? What exactly has your protagonist changed? The development is basically the same as the original work. It was the Paradise Tower that saved Simon. On the contrary, the existence of the protagonist weakened the bonds between many partners in the original work. Naruto and Pirates before you were not so afraid to write. If the protagonist can really kill the black dragon by himself from the canyon to the world of Fairy Tail, then the protagonist is undoubtedly the strongest in the world of Fairy Tail. Basically no one can survive a move under the protagonist. So it seems that this novel is the return and completion. The plot after arriving in the canyon abandons the author's best description of the emotions of everyday characters. It seems very bland and has no highlights. Let's end it quickly and return to the world of Fairy Tail.

After reading Chapter 291, at the beginning, the story of Fairy Tail itself has been almost forgotten, and many of the characters in it are somewhat forgotten. It is actually a test of the author's skill to read it. I think I am not the only one who feels this way. However, the author starts from the beginning very delicately. The detailed descriptions allowed me to get to know these characters again and recall my impressions of these characters. Moreover, because of the writing style that favors the daily series, it fits the world view of Fairy Tail unexpectedly. The reading experience is very good, and because of the detailed descriptions in the early stage, there is nothing too abrupt so far. At the beginning, because there are many details in the description, this book may be slow to read. Because I started reading the book when many chapters have been updated, I read the early parts in one go, so the reading experience is relatively good. However, if I read chapter by chapter from the beginning of this book, it is actually quite terrible. But now that I think about it, it's worth it. After all, without the large descriptions in the early stage, many of the current plots may not be so exciting. Moreover, the process of the protagonist becoming stronger, although it was a bit weak in the early stage, the process of increasing the combat power so far is not only fast, but also very natural. This may be the old character. The author's aftertaste, many novel authors may be scolded by readers for starting to mention the protagonist's combat power in the early stage, causing the protagonist in the story to suddenly increase his combat power, causing the plot of the entire book to begin to change. So far, the protagonist has improved his combat power, which feels very reasonable and comfortable to watch. It is really interesting to have a military advisor in the reckless man, especially when this group of reckless men are really good to themselves. After all, many difficulties in Fairy Tail are caused by insufficient information and accidents that come too quickly and are not prepared. At this time, a man with mild persecutory paranoia and anger is coming. A time-traveler with a fear of insufficiency comes to help with suggestions. There are many difficulties in the original main plot. As long as the combat power is not too high, you can overcome them in a safe and easy way. This kind of refreshing point is actually quite interesting. I hope the author can strengthen the description of this part in the subsequent plots. Then it's about the love scenes that account for the most part so far, because I have read the author's first two books. How can I really describe the description of love... Either basically none... Or better than nothing. But this book suddenly improved so much, which really surprised me, and it is very good. It is not a simple industrial saccharine or a random harem like stamp collecting, but a very delicate and not embarrassing pure love! It's the kind of pure love where two people support each other and have desires in their hearts! To be honest, I haven't seen this kind of pure love between a single heroine for a long time! Although many people think that there are too many love scenes in this book, I think it is just right. After all, the plot of Fairy Tail will start to accelerate greatly. In this case, it is actually good to put most of the love descriptions in the first half. After all, in many major events in the future, it will not be too easy to insert some love scenes. At present, it is very good to maintain a balance, and most importantly, this is pure love! The pure love of a single heroine! Well, that's all I want to say at the moment. I hope Popsicle can write more. The subject of Fairy Tail is relatively niche on Qidian. Com or several websites next door. Coupled with the selling point of a single female protagonist, it can be said that it has no rivals!

It can be regarded as the most comfortable Fairy Tail fic I have seen in the past few years. It does not have the arrogance of a time traveler, is not invincible, or has a harem. More importantly, it has a good grasp of the lively family atmosphere of the guild. The last time I saw this kind of Fairy Tail fanfic that could write about the guild was several years ago. Unfortunately, the way it was written simply took away Natsu's role and added an emotional line with Erza. The rest basically kept the original plot unchanged.

Personally, I think it's a pretty good book. It's a daily book, the ending is very slow, and the plot is also very slow. This is the characteristic of this author. Many people think that it is not possible to write this way. On the contrary, I think it's good. Nowadays, there are a lot of fast-paced novels. Rather than keeping up with the trend, it's better to write such slow-paced novels. This is actually a better choice. Everyone's preferences are different, and there are always people who like this style (like me). I hope the author can stick to his own ideas and continue writing. As a student, I will definitely support the author when I go to college.

I dare to say that this is definitely the best Fairy Tail fanfic I have ever read. Even though it has not been connected to the main plot yet, it does not appear to be procrastinating at all, and the emotional line is also very comfortable to watch. Even if you have never played LOL, it will not prevent you from watching it normally.

It's so comfortable to watch. Fighting on missions is a team effort. The protagonist needs to be strong in combat, reconnaissance and reconnaissance, and can even restore mana and health to his teammates. Return to the guild to have friends and love in daily life. Each character's personality and behavioral characteristics are very distinctive. It reminds me of the days when I was chasing Fairy Tail seven or eight years ago. The author's writing style is also very smooth I don't feel anxious at all about the progress of the plot. Even if I speed up the plot as some book friends say, I will feel uncomfortable copying one copy after another Now (520,000 words) this book is completely considered a seedling. Lucy has not joined yet. It is just a period of growth of the protagonist's strength and a period of bond growth. I am looking forward to what the author will write in the future. I like this rhythm so much. I am full of reading experience.

Although it's not much, I've given it all to you.

It has its own unique plot without completely replicating the original work, and the descriptions of daily love and battles are both fascinating and excellent 🙂

I can write about daily life, but I wish there were less romance parts. I still like the main tone, and it feels like this article. The plot of fighting ghosts was also handled very well. I just like the feeling of everyone in the guild working together.

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The author does not need to specifically calculate the training time, because after Lucy joined Fairy Tail, Fairy Tail went straight into high-intensity battles and reached Tianrou Island in one year. After seven years of return, Fairy Tail disbanded in less than a year. After another year, the union was rebuilt and they directly fought against Zeref and Black Dragon. In less than three years, there is no other way but cheating. Any conventional practice is a waste of time. There are only three issues - bloodline, talent, and actual combat. After Lucy's two years of actual combat, the third year of the Great Demon Directing Martial Arts was really boring in her eyes, and she felt that she could pick the final championship team. This kind of practice is not materialistic, but idealistic. She is the only one present who can feel that the opposite team has twice the magic power hidden, and she can analyze magic and combat intelligence with ease. The first problem is that it is difficult for the male protagonist to grow up without actual combat. I really don't want to see this miserable practice. Lucy sings and dances after get off work, makes noises with friends, and takes beauty sleep. She doesn't fall behind in her practice at all. Fairy Tail's training is similar to Dragon Ball's Kame Senryu. Eat well, sleep well, and live every day well. It is the emotion generated by getting along with friends. This emotion can truly be converted into magic.

Logically speaking, based on the combat performance in Fairy Tail, three wolves, six birds, stones, toads, and double buffs are all not enough, right? At the current speed of unlocking them one by one, how long will it take to get the five-color dragon? The battle where the stone was unlocked and the guild won its first duel. Logically speaking, it should be regarded as a chapter where he finally gained fighting strength and felt proud. The result is a very bland and boring performance. And I don't think there will be any fundamental changes after summoning three wolves and six birds. Ordinary beasts can't do anything good. Think about your enemy spitting fire and ice. You summon three wolves and six birds to bite others. It's too low.

Help the interaction volume of the work (^_^)

Many people say that this book has too much routine, or is too weak, or grows too slowly, etc., But you have overlooked an important point, which is the character of the protagonist. In the excellent daily stories I have seen, the characters of the protagonists are basically lively and cheerful, humorous, gentle and considerate, and fun-loving. The protagonist is too procrastinating, always struggling, thinking about a lot of irrelevant things, and is a bit introverted. If you change to the characters I mentioned above, this daily life will not be bad. To put it bluntly, the protagonist's image and personality are not shaped by the character that the protagonist should have, and if you don't take the initiative to learn, you won't take the initiative to ask for advice, but you don't ask for advice. You go to learn new magic and learn combat skills. After all, we read novels to relax, not to watch something bad happen.

How is this different from the original? The dragon is reluctant to summon. This is a civil war. You might as well not write it, for fear of damaging the building and the union. Fairy Tail will care about this. It's too cool.

I hope the author can stick to his own characteristics and don't need to be criticized for being too slow and slow to grow up. As a Fairy Tail fan, I have read many books in which the power grows rapidly, and after the first 100 chapters, it is already invincible in the world. Then I changed the map to fight against the dragon, and finally defeated everyone without any suspense, and then it became boring. I hope the author can maintain his own characteristics and take a different path as a Fairy Tail fan.

It's been over 200 chapters and I haven't entered the main plot yet. The protagonist is written like a Japanese Asashi hero who always says he doesn't want to cause trouble to others. When he encounters heavyweight fights, he is beaten down time and time again and looks like he has gained a lot after winning. In addition, there is no limit. It's a daily life in the world, and you also have to pay to watch the protagonist have an awkward love relationship. According to the author's level of daily life, he can write about the devil's heart, and he doesn't even have to think about the empire, the century-old mission, etc. In short, I don't recommend latecomers to waste money on subscribing.

It's tasteless, but it's a pity to throw it away... This is my evaluation of this book. The plain trade union life is good as an embellishment, but as the main subject, it always feels too bland... It's not exciting and passionate. I want to jump while reading it. Alas

It is not impossible for the author to shape the protagonist into a realistic ordinary person, but he must grow. Especially if writing a novel is to be enjoyable, the protagonist must grow faster. At least the readers can see the changes in the protagonist. However, the author writes about daily life, and there is nothing exciting about it.

Could the author consider that the protagonist will not take the Sirius Island S-level exam? I have some thoughts 1. The current stage is 783, and the original plot will start in less than a year. Rhodes should not be able to defeat Nazgre at this stage. There is still a gap in strength. After all, he has only learned magic for a few months. 2. It is a bit unnecessary for the protagonist to be sealed for seven years (it should be said that I have seen that all Fairy Tail fans have been sealed for seven years and completely followed the original work. I hope the author can be different). Although there is a cheat in LOL (it should be a cheat, right?), It feels more reasonable to use these seven years to make Rhodes stronger, but it may require writing a lot of original content, which will also be very troublesome for you, the author. 3. The reason why Rhodes did not take the exam was that after experiencing the Ghost War and the crusade against the Six Demon Generals, he was worried that if all the main force went to Tianlang Island, the guild would have a vacancy in combat strength. Rhodes cautiously felt that this was inappropriate, fearing that the guild would be retaliated by the remnants of the party during this period, so he voluntarily stayed. Come down (Rhodes also feels that his strength is not enough, it is too early for S level) This is just my idea, the author does not need to care, no matter how you write, I will subscribe, there are too few Fairy Tail fans, especially this kind of good writing 😁, two monthly votes have been cast

There is something wrong with these two chapters. You took Kana to take the S-level exam, but you didn't feel good about it. It's nonsense that you passed it. Why did you arrange this section? It's reasonable to a certain extent, but as the author, it makes readers uncomfortable. The plot is controversial, which already explains the problem. The reader is not clear about what is written in the article, and the author has to comment and explain his own ending, which is quite price-deprecating.

I have given up hope on you! Haki ice! I want to go dark! Love gives rise to hate! ! I write it myself! ! Steal your job! ! If I can't get it, I will destroy it! ! The evolution of Jade Symptom! Blackened beast! !

Your first two books are not bad. If you really want to be a eunuch for a woman, then I can only call her a coward.