Can I Succeed in Rebellion?

The best novel written in the last years of Chongzhen! The best thing is that no one believes it! The Queen and the Prince didn't believe it! You must remember that scholar-officials are scholar-officials. Don't think that they think about problems in the interests of the people! Even the ministers who died for their country! You can't raid the homes of ministers and nobles. If you want to raid, then do it as a guerrilla! If you copy it, you will become a homeless government! I can't go to Nanjing either. These people should wait for Li Zicheng to copy it! As long as there is great righteousness, most people will not give up on their own initiative!

The book is a good book, with a good intention and a very upright butt. However, it has the problem of newcomers, that is, the climax is not strong enough, there is no big climax, and the small climax is not enough to release. You must pay attention to the rhythm when writing online articles. The first 150 chapters of Chongzhen were so depressed in a desperate situation. Everyone is waiting for the plot to be proud. As a book, it can be suppressed, but it must be suppressed first and then promoted. Tolerance is to explode, rather than to continue to endure. The writing is very good, otherwise I wouldn't have ordered it all, but remember to have it in a targeted manner, and read it one by one, otherwise the good idea will be rejected, and in the end it will be tepid and silently forgotten. The decisive battle between Li Zicheng and the Tatars should be a small climax, but this is understandable because it is not the perspective of the protagonist after all. But after the battle of Shunqing, it is problematic to not let go of writing even though the protagonist is already under pressure, even for military training? In the last chapter, Ao Bai was about to fight the Ming army, but the reader just got excited. Is the battle over? The profile seems to be a win, but in terms of the reader's emotions, it is actually a big loss. Some people feel that they have not won. I spent so much space on the play in memory of the teacher, but the climax of the text is not written. It doesn't mean that you are not allowed to express your feelings, nor is it that you are not allowed to remember your teacher. These are both good things, but they must not overwhelm the guest. It would be very bad to create this impression on readers. I don't know whether the author is not good at writing war scenes or just doesn't want to write them. In short, it hurts the readers' emotions to mention it in one stroke. You described that rare king so vividly that it could have dug out the eyes and cut off the nose of the good boy. I was so angry that I thought it was too easy to pass by later. Is it too late or something, I have to explain it. I have been subscribing all the way. I am a 20-year-old reader of the starting point history article. Even my trumpet account is 15.6 Years old. I hope my heartfelt words can bring you some help. Write well and I will give you 7.8 Monthly passes next month.

The first thing is to send capable personnel to send the prince to Nanjing to prevent any unexpected events. On the surface, he demoted capable old ministers such as Li Banghua and waited until Nanjing, but secretly he was entrusting lonely and important ministers to issue imperial edicts. Second, give Zhou Yuji a promotion and reinforce soldiers, horses, food and grass, and replace the guards at later levels as they can, delaying Li Zicheng.

The idea is relatively novel, but it is too wordy. One-tenth of the article is considered to be filled with water. Nothing but water is still water.

It's already 1647, it's too late to play anything. Not to mention reform and copying honors. What you can't do in your hometown in Beijing, you can't do anything in Nanjing, the headquarters of the Donglin Party! The only thing Chongzhen can do is to cancel the Liao salary, win back some people's hearts, win over Huang Degong and Gao Jie, and eliminate those second and fifth sons who took the initiative to surrender to the Qing Dynasty in history. Try to collect loyal and capable officials and gentry in history. Jiangnan is allowed to organize group training to defend the country. As long as it resists the intruders and slaves from going south, it can still maintain a Three Kingdoms confrontation and climb the technology tree to drag down the opponent to death.

The writing is good, but there are too many emotions. I can express emotions about everything.

Are you writing a novel, or are you talking about reasoning?

Brother, stop being unreasonable. It has been the case every day for a few days. We understand. Stop talking nonsense.

I didn't understand your strategic intention after reading it. Is it to hold on to Datong in Xuanfu to gather the border troops? Guan Ning's army has moved inland to Shandong. The Qing army will definitely not be able to defend the capital when it goes south. By then, the capital will be captured, the prince will be captured, and the logistics will be cut off. No matter how big the army is in front of you, you can't stop Li Zicheng.

The writing style is a bit mediocre, but the logic of ideas is much more independent and in-depth than ordinary short-term writing, and the angle is also unique. It is suggested that the regional perspective and group portraits can be expanded to serve as supplementary images for the narrative. Personally, I feel that overall Chongzhen's works are on the higher side. I hope the author will write more

It is impossible to make progress without completing the book.

When Zhu Youjian was five years old, his biological mother was beaten to death by his own father, and when he was 10 years old, his father also died! I became the emperor by chance, but I forgot what my biological mother looked like. I couldn't find a portrait of my birth mother in the world. He had no parents around to teach him since he was a child, and his understanding of the world was extremely lacking. Even Zhou Yanru, the chief minister he appointed, publicly said that "the emperor is the righteous emperor today" that is, the emperor is a man among gods and immortals, and has no understanding of worldly affairs! The building is about to collapse, and it is difficult for him to turn the tide by leaving it to an immature man!

Although it is a bit long-winded, it is indeed a good book.

We are currently seeing military reform and political reform. But the only thing I didn't see was the soil reform of the Ming Dynasty. In fact, the political atmosphere has not changed much, but it has become a bit open. The liquidation of vested interests is not enough, the local control is not enough, and the cultivation of talents has not been initiated. In fact, literacy-style assault training is relatively fast. There is another most important question. The author has always been vague, that is, money is not equal to food. According to the buy-buy-buy operation, the price of food should soar to the sky. The productivity at that time could not solve the famine problem of the population in the late Ming Dynasty. It will inevitably aggravate the emergence of more people without food and affect the stability of more places. I don't know whether this fundamental issue is deliberately vague or the author is unclear. According to the current situation of the emperor's absolute military power. The domestic KPI arrangements are not enough, the ministers are not motivated at all, and there are too many illusions about the political static in the south. Your current reforms have touched the bottom line of the vested interests. I didn't see the South's response. This is very inappropriate. Their retaliatory means are economic means to control food prices, and political and military means can be based on history. Now I don't want to go to the south. The South is completely static. This is not normal. The military idea is good, but from the perspective of military serving politics, there are too many political deficiencies, such as propaganda to control public opinion, political workers entering the grassroots and the army, and literacy can increase grassroots rule. You can actually do these things slowly by yourself. Hope there will be more and more updates. Faster and faster.

At this point, there is no point in conquest in person. As soon as they left the city, the fighting troops dispersed while walking. The most important thing to do is to transport food and wages to Shaanxi and Shanxi to delay the invasion of the army; at the same time, exchange the money obtained from ransacking homes for food and recruit soldiers to garrison at several important passes in the Taihang Mountains and Yanshan Mountains, without fighting the opponent at all. Li Zicheng has no logistics, and he will have to return to Shaanxi in a few months. When the situation stabilizes, he can sort out the political reform slowly. As for the Guan Ning army entering the pass, it is not necessary. First, they will not listen to you at all, but they will worry about rebellion; second, if the Qing army enters the pass, they will not know what happened to the army.

I agree, this route is a bit unique. It starts from the inner courtyard and cleans up a lot, but I have never seen a gameplay where you directly lift the table.

This book is actually well written, but why is it so disappointing? In fact, I feel that the main reason is that the pace is too slow. I have read Chapter 72, and it is still in the aspect of integrating resources and coordinating materials, and there is basically no progress in other aspects.

The reason why it is not popular is that the writing is too detailed and there are too many explanations.

I'm unhappy. You've been dragging on a battle for three days.

The climax must be written well. If the reader is not happy enough, you will not be able to write it successfully no matter how deeply you feel. You must write about the results of the reform. You must write about the combat effectiveness of the New Ming Army armed with the national spirit. You must write about the despair of the landlords and mites. You must write about a more exciting rhythm.

Is there a Shennong? There are only three months left to hang one's neck on the tree, and the time is too late. People who don't deserve to die are basically dead. Basically, it is difficult for gods to save you. If you say that writing from the first year can turn the tide, I can still believe it.

It's too slow. We're about to be invaded in three months. Are you still stalling on selling land? Three years is almost the same. From mastering the Jin Yiwei, the Forbidden Army, and the Pure Army, he directly recruited groups of people to beat and confiscate houses. Li Zicheng copied 70 million. You can only copy 35 million, which is not too much. Who dares to extort a good family and wait for the house to be confiscated? Do you want me to teach you how to write?

Appendix, eunuch? ? ? ? ? ?

Not greeting the eunuch is a very bad thing, and the pattern is very low

Why are historical time-travel novels almost all about soul travel, and many protagonists still have systems or personal space? It is better to write that the protagonist can travel between modern and ancient times through time and space channels. After all, it is based on Einstein's theory of relativity. It is very interesting to write about the protagonist traveling between modern times and ancient times through time and space channels. This can show the direct collision between modern times and ancient times. There are already many stories about the protagonists rebelling in the early Qing Dynasty, including the Kangxi Dynasty and the Yongzheng Dynasty. It would be interesting to write a book in which the protagonist rebelled between Kublai Khan and Yuan Dynasty in the Yuan Dynasty or Zhu Yuanzhang and Hongwu Year in the Ming Dynasty.

It's not enough. I finished reading it in one sitting.

Good looking but too little

The writing is okay, and the author has a lot of personal life, but it still makes sense, but I didn't see how to rebel, and it didn't feel enjoyable enough. There is also the grasp of the grassroots and the grasp of talents. The reason why scholars are so powerful is that the country cannot grasp scholars at all, so it shares the world with scholar-bureaucrats.

Are you rebelling or just clickbait?

Absolute food and grass. It's a pity that I have no investment opportunities. I'm really convinced.