I Fulfilled My Wish for Eternal Life in the Peach Blossom Temple

Author, can you please update more? I will copy your book and put it in the library immediately. I feel like this time I have the opportunity to put it into storage and test the water directly. I hope you can send me to Sanjiang as soon as possible, and don't be ignorant. 🙂🙂

The core of the introduction is to rely on people's wishes to improve themselves. This way of writing is boring.

The poison introduced by Qidian now is really poisonous. The eunuch book also recommends it. Get laid off immediately. Damn it.

I don't understand. The cultivation of a physical body is all related to pure yang energy. If you don't understand the magical powers in the last three levels of Xuan Guan Nine Knocks, you can understand the magical powers in swordsmanship. This is a bit nonsense. Logically speaking, if you understand the magical powers in this level, you will be the natal magical power. This is not a problem of 1+1=2. I really can't understand how your brain circuit is thinking.

There are too many poisonous points. If someone beats you up like a bastard, do you still need evidence? Everyone knows you killed someone and you still give bullshit evidence.

All the details are unreasonable! A casual reward is just a few taels! Kill the demon king for 100,000 (not 100,000 demons) and then the royal family will reach hundreds of millions! And the strength and combat power of martial arts are the same as those of cultivating immortals! Then Shouyuan is almost the same as ordinary people! The result is that the life span of the highest combat power and cultivation level in the world is almost the same as that of ordinary people (for example, the founder of the Republic of China, the sixth realm of Cave Heaven Realm, was the strongest in the world, and he died in the early 100s! And everyone makes wishes in exchange for lifespan???

The pace is too fast, and the plot is messy and too compact. A story can be written with so much pen and ink, but without the writing power, there are only five or six chapters of one incident, and there are many poisonous points. I don't know what the fruit of my peach tree is. After all, it is from modern times. When it comes to the fairy peach, I will definitely think of the fairy peach that prolongs life in Journey to the West. Everyone knows whether this tree is their own natal tree or a second-level spiritual plant. , That must be extraordinary, but in the end, an outsider told me that sending peaches is also a poisonous point. Knowing that the gift is valuable, he is afraid that the wealth will be exposed, and he becomes murderous. The funniest thing is here. Facing such a disciple of the Immortal Sect with such a background, he became murderous, but he gave up after verbally promising not to spread it. You might as well not expose it in the first place. There is also another poisonous point, which is also this peach tree. The protagonist started practicing from scratch, and it seems that it didn't even take a year to form the elixir, right? Moreover, he has done a lot of things. He is afraid that others will not know that he has a great opportunity. The protagonist's strength can be taken care of by others and imprisoned. This peach tree alone can attract many forces to fight for it. He has no background and no strength and can still dance so happily. This world written by the author Immortal cultivators in the world are not good gentlemen, and they can even be self-respecting. It also reminds people that life in ancient times was miserable, which shows that there are many cruel and ruthless people on the way to cultivating immortals. It is really unreasonable. This book is suitable for reading in a short period of time, but if you look closely, it is still a brainless and refreshing novel.

Damn, the editor said at the beginning that there was a sense of expectation, but I didn't find any sense of expectation. Is this a cognitive bias?

If the world needs one person to save it, then it should be destroyed.

Good guy, I went to Sanjiang and cut it off. Now Sanjiang is full of bulls, horses and snakes.

Then I started copying books 😍

I voted for the Classical Immortal Cultivation label, and my target was System Flow. Should these two exist together?

No, this is not okay. Brothers, do you have such high requirements for reading? I will talk about what I think is the poisonous point. I clearly want to express that the protagonist's brain is like that of a normal person. He is afraid of being discovered when he kills people. And then before killing people, he has to tell everyone in the city that he is going to leave. I strongly recommend that the author revise this point. When you changed it to the protagonist, you didn't say anything about killing him, right? Coordinates Chapter 32, please, this one is so bad, it will destroy the book. As for the water others mentioned. . . It's so difficult, how should I write it without being sloppy? It's only 40 f*cking updates, can I call for water? I fired up the map cannon. Friends who just got this book, don't listen to those idiots and take a look for yourself. This book has more than 40 chapters and only has the one poisonous point I mentioned. If the author doesn't change it, I strongly recommend skipping it. The pace is pretty good so far, a bit like "I really don't want to make money".

Damn it, I finished reading it in the afternoon and put it on the bookshelf, then cut it in the evening. Difficult to stretch

Basically, there was a thunderstorm in Jindan, but in fact the problem started earlier. The real problem was that the people prayed to kill people. Before that, the whole rhythm was still biased towards the traditional cultivation of immortality. That is to say, from here on, the entire Shouyuan system has collapsed. In fact, for this kind of relatively panel-oriented writing, the necessary numerical intensity control is actually quite important. From the time when the people prayed and their longevity increased by three or four digits, the entire power system has actually collapsed. It is no longer possible for one person to grudge and grudge as before. The protagonist can do whatever he wants. From the traditional cultivation of immortals and fighting, he has made a big step towards running a farm. Cutting books is the result. Facts have proved that the author cannot do it. I also feel that even if it is done, the result will not be good. The audiences of farming literature and traditional immortality cultivation are not completely coincident.

Was it cut? Fortunately, I checked the comment section before reading it Otherwise it would have been a waste of my time

How about the male protagonist? It feels a bit like an evil cultivator, when others make wishes and need to shorten their lives.

Brother, you have already mastered the basics. You can do whatever you say. You can understand it. Writing without results is just for love. There is no reason to continue writing. However, if you write three books in a row, none of them can be said to be a normal completion. If you want to write, just insist on finishing one book, regardless of whether it meets your expectations. Stick to one thing. If you keep cutting it off, it will actually be difficult to write a book wholeheartedly. When writing a book, don't pay too much attention to the comment section. Write according to your own outline and your own ideas, so that you can write comfortably. Come on, don't miss the next book.

It's so important to catch up on the new book issue of Qidian now. I haven't written it for more than two years and I can't find the rules at all. Please do me a favor and catch up on the new chapter for a minute. Thank you in September!

It's a very fairy-like book. If it can be written with more than three million words, it can be upgraded to level 5.