Master Is Too Cold and Cold

The concept is good, but the writing style is not very good, it is quite watery, and it is a bit too wordy and looks embarrassing.

I just tried to look at it and was a little speechless. . . First of all, the protagonist's character should be cold and cold, but when I look at it, I always have a funny feeling of being bigger than Jialong Aotian. Then, the protagonist's level is in the chapter I read. He is still spiritually intelligent, has broken through the three extreme realms, and gone to ancient times. I found a few points here that I particularly want to complain about 1. The protagonist is pretending to be stupid. Wouldn't the junior brother be suspicious? The article says that the Thousand Cranes Sect itself is not a very strong sect, so there must be enemies (if I have to say that it is too incompetent to have no enemies, I can only say that this article is even more ignorant). Doesn't that junior brother suspect that the protagonist is an undercover agent of a hostile sect? Especially after I came back, when the system said this was true, I felt extremely sick to my stomach. 2. The protagonist was discovered, and then Tiandao was furious and wanted to punish the protagonist. As a result, the protagonist actually needed ten seconds to go back. I really can't understand it. In these ten seconds, couldn't Tiandao and the immortals complete a series of actions such as soul searching and killing? You have to force your wits and let a bunch of people push you there to give the protagonist time to return to the city. . . 3. The protagonist wants to train an apprentice, but he is not even willing to spend 110,000 so-called cold points. If I remember correctly, I will recycle 280,000 of the things he was given after success. So, why does the protagonist have to find the method by himself instead of using the system to get the best at once? Is this a forced drama? 4. The protagonist thinks that time travel is a simulator. When he was setting the rhythm down there at the beginning, didn't Beiming's father know how to kill him directly? Also, other people actually started to boo? What's even more outrageous is that it was originally said that big bosses can reduce the pressure on Tiandao, but then they watched a bunch of people lose their opportunities? To be honest, I am really powerless. When I first read the comments, I thought they were pretty good. But what happened? No way, no way, they are all marketing accounts? Later, I looked at the out-of-the-ring value, just starting out? I was shocked! Is it really worthy of being a daily guide? I doubt this discussion will survive long. . . . . . Farewell, I hope the next book won't be this weird. . .

If there are any poisonous points you can say here, I will pay attention to them in the future, even! Can be modified!

Many female supporting characters, no female protagonist, stock trading article, the most poisonous

The protagonist - a tool of the system, is at the mercy of the system, his behavior is disgusting, and he pretends to be aloof, which makes him uncomfortable and the readers also uncomfortable. In order to prevent your own cultivation from falling, you forcefully destroy the breakthrough of your disciple's cultivation. Besides, it will still be five or six years before your disciple's cultivation catches up with you. Why are you in such a hurry? Just go up and give someone a sword. You are such a naughty dog. Plot - Breaking through the extreme realm at the beginning, with infinite visions, forced to pretend to be X, the king is bombing at the beginning, and I don't know how to write later. In fact, this aspect is not a big problem. The most speechless thing is that the first few pictures talk about cutting leeks. . . . It's really hard for people to like this protagonist, why don't the others just play a supporting role for you? Let the protagonist play as he pleases? As for being so slanderous? Also cut leeks, cut off the hair. System settings - the favorability value is high and the coldness value is high. If it is high, it will be high, and if it is low, it will be low. One moment it's 80%, the next moment it's 1%, I just want to ask how the system defines a person's favorability towards the protagonist? One moment, the love is deep, and the next moment, the hatred is real because of trivial things? And this kind of plot that uses numerical values ​​to measure other people's feelings for the protagonist is really unpleasant.

I have seen a lot of people complaining that this book is not good to read, but I think the setting is quite interesting. I can tolerate the small points at the beginning. It is normal for novels to have poisonous points. But in Chapter 170+, the protagonist's sect ancestor tells the protagonist to go out and wander around, saying that under his protection, there is no need to worry about the older generation taking action against him. What's the result? In the end, I only saw that the protagonist had all the cheats turned on and was protected by two top masters (from other sects). He was also beaten to death by others (the older generation) and almost lost his life. Then he took action. Your protection was very thoughtful. I was already on the verge of breaking out after seeing this, but I still wanted to continue reading. I feel that I have already read chapter 170 and I really like this book. What then? Then I saw this awesome ancestor who protected the protagonist from tens of thousands of years ago. He even almost killed the protagonist, a junior who was much lower than him, and was saved by someone behind the scenes (from the dialogue, this rescuer is much weaker than this ancestor). Seeing this, I still bother you, Ancient Immortal Sect nb, he talks like he is playing porn, and his disciples can't protect him (the protagonist was beaten half to death), so why don't you just shit on his head with your own (the compensation for the immortal weapon is so fragrant). Why read novels? Why should I take the blame? So I'll take my leave, and if you like reading this book, don't criticize me. It's not embarrassing, it's really a defense. Some people may think this is an insignificant little poisonous point, but I really can't stand it. All in all, the author of this book has good writing skills, and the descriptions and creativity of many places are quite good. This is why I can read 170+ chapters (I abandon novels that I don't like after 10 chapters). The mountains are high and the road is far. I believe that the author is making continuous progress. I will check out the next book. Come on.

I originally came here for the title and introduction of Gao Leng's book, but I was shocked by the fact. The master is a wet father, and Gao Leng is a joke.

Brother, there is nothing wrong with the setting of the protagonist, but there are too many places to reduce intelligence. I originally wanted to see if it can get better in the future. Chapter 59, I really have no desire to continue reading. First of all, this is a cold system, not a pretentious system. For example, apprentices compete in martial arts to recruit wives. The apprentice's parents were originally killed by the monks. Xiaohong almost killed the mortals at the city gate. Although he didn't hit it, the apprentice would probably feel uncomfortable. Another thing, this favorability level is really worrying. I always feel that it will decrease and increase. , Seems to be lowering the favorability of my IQ. Another thing, you can't move even if you see a female character. Sir, times have changed. This meme is out of date. Doesn't it mean it can't be used? As for when you meet a female character, does it remind you how handsome you are? Of the nine apprentices, you can write that the apprentice likes the master, but wouldn't it be okay if you don't write that all the apprentices are like taking medicine? I hope I can come back and read this book when I have the chance. I feel it will be a good book.

The disciples are all female, and they all have secret crushes on the male protagonist. It's a stallion! Or is it a harem porn story?

Personally, I think that most of the people who comment are primary school students who can't understand and love BB, so it's better to set the fan value, otherwise it will be difficult to become popular if it is recommended. Some people are persuaded to leave because of some comments. Personally, I think what you wrote is okay. Even if it is not food, it is dry food and not a poisonous weed.

Is it so cold?

Good guy. Introduction, no heroine, many female supporting characters. Then come in and read a page of female supporting characters. Brother, you are dissatisfied on three fronts. You like to see the harem and persuade you to quit, you like the single heroine to persuade you to quit, and you like the heroine to be persuaded to quit. Let me take a look at the content first. .

Does the author have any misunderstanding about Gao Leng? Being aloof doesn't mean being arrogant, it's being arrogant. The protagonist is completely arrogant. If someone blocks the protagonist on his way to the Sutra Pavilion and questions him, the true coldness is to ignore him and leave directly. Why stop and teach someone a lesson, and then explain like a shrew? This is so cold.

Chapter 1: Strength persuades people to quit. This is the only strength that can be recommended

One word, embarrassing, two words, very embarrassing, three words, embarrassing

Can this also be called cold? Isn't aloof like Zhang Qiling in Tomb Raiders Notes? Did I have some misunderstanding about Gao Leng? 🙄

This character, all female apprentices, is so disgusting, don't waste your time reading other books, bye

Farewell, this junior's cultivation level is too low to bear this "Supreme Book"

Good guy, I didn't dare to open this book when I saw all the character buildings 😂

Does this book have a female protagonist? I just want to ask you.

If you haven't fallen into the trap yet, don't fall into it. You are already a eunuch.

Support the author, although I only have one vote

Ah, why isn't it updated? I just ordered it all 😰

What? What did the daily drug guide teach me? A eunuch?

I like this kind of update very much. If there is no system, I will be more happy to watch it. I used to watch a lot of female channels with cold masters wearing books. Now I want to try male channels with cold masters who complain about the hardships of maintaining the character.

Boss! One per day! Please update

Good guy, updated two days in a row

Come back soon😭😭😭

Personally, I feel that the writing is quite good. For those who were persuaded to quit in the first chapter, I advise you to practice your poison in urban literature. In addition, I still hope that the author will finish this book well before writing the next one. Come on, author!

Can it be updated? So slow, speechless!