Xuanmo Screams

The following opinions represent only my personal opinion: I feel it is okay, it has a cyber flavor, the writing is also good, and the characters are well drawn. However, your paragraphs are too long and look a bit laborious. Just divide them into more than 5 paragraphs, otherwise it will also seem laborious for readers. Also, it should be divided into more chapters. The 40 pages can be divided into four chapters. This will not only make it more interesting to read, but readers will also feel that you are diligent in updating. Finally, I seem to feel the smell of AI😰 It's just a feeling, no, just pretend I didn't say it. In the first three chapters, if there is AI, Qidian editor will not sign you too much. They have various tools to check A. If you find out, you will pass directly, and no account will be accepted directly.