The Immortal Huang Clan

This kind of novel focuses on a self-justifying story. Most of the settings are as close to popular imagination as possible. I don't understand the spirit root design yet, but there's nothing wrong with it. I hope I can think about it more. The price system is a big problem. It's okay for spells to be expensive, but magical weapons are too cheap. It's unreasonable that a mere 150 spiritual stone high-grade magical weapon can change a battle in the later stage of Qi training. First of all, we need an outline. What kind of cultivation do monks at the bottom of this world rely on (elixirs, meditation), what is the speed of cultivation, what is the main cost (elixirs, spells, or magic weapon arrays), what are the main income sources (cultivation of immortality, adventure, monster hunting), and what do upper-level monks rely on (breakthrough elixirs, or high-quality charms) to control the progress and speed of the lower class's advancement. The range of strength and number ratio of casual cultivators, the range of strength and techniques of disciples at different levels of sects and families. There can be no such thing as robbing a random disciple to obtain various advanced skills. All supplies must be obtained as reasonably as possible, and of course there can be unexpected opportunities. Any family has any wealth, any background to keep the box down, or it is just a working family with nothing at all. This is okay, but it needs to be preset. At least the backgrounds of the families in the place of birth must be known. Families with different styles will be passed down regardless of their background and how their ancestors made their fortune. You can also add some clues about how small people affect the big situation. The entire world must have a general background, and the civilizations of cultivating immortals in different regions may not be exactly the same. If it is orderly, it must be well-founded from top to bottom. (30 to 50 at the first level, 50 to 150 at the first level, 200 to 1000 at the first level) 1000 to 2000 at the second level, 2000 to 6000 at the second level, 6000 to 20000 at the second level) Ordinary monks can use 1 to 3 weapons of the same level. Magical instruments need maintenance) (all kinds of metal mines), Write whatever you want, use it if you can

This is the first time for a family cultivator to see someone with the surname "Huang", come on

Hello everyone! Hello from the new author!

Stop writing this style of writing. It looks uncomfortable.

It's unreasonable for a small foundation-building clan to settle next to a monster! , Maybe one day when the big demon is drinking and chatting, he will talk about the human monks who went out and destroyed several small foundation-building clans on a whim.

The protagonist finally comes to our Lao Huang family

In Chapter 9, I feel that other people's foundation building stages are very high-end. Huang Danyang's foundation building period is to collect spiritual grains, then harvest spiritual rice, and also to test children's spiritual roots. I wonder what they are doing in the middle and late stages of Qi training period?

Looks like the Yellow Hair Fairy Clan 🤔

No outline? Obviously I haven't calculated the prices.

Thinking that they were members of the Huangmao family, they came in excitedly.

New people, new books, naturally fewer people will read them.

It would be much smoother to read if those few limericks were deleted, and the less fairy-like verses would be added to distract people.

It's really good. You can watch it. It can give the protagonist a little chance. Every Nascent Soul Lord has a chance. You can consider adding a formation in terms of cultivation skills.

The writing is good, and it's also an indigenous style, which is quite good.

After reading the first three chapters, I felt that there was a bit too much dialogue, and the segments were too large, giving the reader a headache. Some of the dialogue is introduced with narration, which is actually better.

The writing is very nice, Liangcao. Please update a lot, but there are some typos. Come on! ! !

I don't think I should write about this Hongling

If the indigenous protagonist doesn't have Golden Finger yet, it would be hard to watch if his character is not charismatic enough, smart and hardworking enough.

It would be better to combine the word count of four chapters into two chapters and write more carefully; four chapters may seem like a lot, but they are actually short and weak. Those popular books are basically updated once or twice a day to improve the quality.

I originally thought I had found a high-quality family story that didn't have any cheats, but I ended up giving it a go.

When I first saw the title of the book, my eyes lit up. I thought it was about the Huangmao Family, and I thought about what new life the author of Qidian had come up with. Upon closer inspection, it turned out to be the Huang family, which was boring.

Hello, boss, I would like to recommend the book "The True Immortal of Immortality: Rebirth from the Fake Pill" Mortal flow, the protagonist is decisive in killing and has an online IQ. Readers are welcome to come and read. Click on the avatar to send it. Thank you to the author. (You can delete it if you mind, thank you.)

I just want to ask the protagonist if he doesn't need the Foundation Establishment Pill to build his foundation, so where does his Foundation Establishment Pill go?