Day of Imprisonment

Personal rating: 8.5-9 Advantages: I think the best thing about this article is the design of the dungeon. Although I have seen some of the math games, the many original dungeons that are both interesting and logical are really the biggest highlight, and there are also a very large number. I have basically played through the dungeon from beginning to end. The rhythm is very tight and I can't stop watching. The plot is also full of foreshadowing, and the villain is also very intelligent, giving it a full sense of oppression. However, the protagonist is too strong and makes me a little nervous. This is a small problem. Disadvantages: The character design basically serves the plot. There are many supporting characters but most of them are slightly flat, which results in an extremely compact plot. Almost the entire plot is about the main plot, and there are no daily parts. It is always racing against time. I actually felt a little tired watching it. Fortunately, the total length is not very long, so I can read it in one go. It may be a bit unfriendly to follow up. This is a matter of opinion, but for me it's a minor flaw. I really like watching the characters interact. Daily chapters not only relax the reader's spirit, but are also a way to flesh out the characters. Summary: Although I don't want to criticize everyone, I think the high-end version of Ten Days is a simple and appropriate description. There is no fancy and embarrassing batch of sensationalism, only a imaginative but logical and self-consistent plot. This is not a waste of energy.

It is very similar to the ten days, whether it is a repeating day~>refreshed every seven days not a week, the memory is lost at the beginning~>Qi Xia starts not a week Awakened Association->Tiantiankou President->The one at the head of Tiantangkou who can eat other people's abilities What about that beautiful woman-> The second-ranking female anchor at Tiantangkou Game scene mechanism->Ten Days Beast Fighting Game It can be said that the templates are exactly the same. Oh, I hope it can be written better. I like the card elements very much. I hope it won't collapse and there will be space updates like the demon chapter. It will be more complete and more rubbish Every book is high-flying, every book! ! ! ! Can you write a good book? Eggplant, I have been reading your books for so many years. From New World, to Skill Tree, Shadow Street, Nightmare, etc., They all start high and go low, and none of them ends well. It is a pity The more I write book reviews, the more frustrated I become. I decided to give a critical review of all the books of Eggplant New World The new world is completely separated from the card element. Originally, time and space were a thing that most authors immediately bombed when they touched it, and they had to forcefully write the concept of time and space. Originally, the framework of the world of vitality was very large and exciting, but the writing collapsed. Giants and dragons, gold and destruction are very good subject elements, but it is a pity that the development is also high and low, Mystics/Gargoyles are also very good classic elements, but as a result, the combat power system collapsed and there was no chance to play The concept of time and space is really awesome, very awesome, and it will make people think if you think about it carefully, but as long as it is written a little bit, the logic must be perfectly closed. If there is a gap, the whole system will explode, and it will explode, and there will be contradictions everywhere. I can't watch it anymore, and I can't finish it. The theme of rebirth at the beginning was also very popular at the time. It's no problem to learn from it. Rebirth is really difficult to write about the impact of that memory on the current world, and it is an unsystematic text-like text. The beginning is very good, comparable to a lot of silver. If the influence of gj is not easy to write, it will be good. The whole article is still high. Walking Low Shadow Street The same hot theme has unlimited flow, and the idea of transferring the dungeon to the real world is correct, but later in the writing, I started to let myself go, and the transition from the dungeon to reality is a bit abrupt. It feels like there is less time to develop in the dungeon, but it is not a big problem. The later dungeons are completely for strength growth, no It's okay, after all, the expansion of the world view to Shadow Street is just a kind of strength. Although it doesn't feel as exciting as the new world, the writing is better As for the protagonist turning into a dwarf, I am quite uncomfortable. I can turn into a big-breasted lady, a dwarf 😐 Darkness is really well written, and he has retired with success Skill Tree It is also a very popular doomsday system text, but the frame is too big, and the core element skill tree collapsed. Only two trees were written. I remember it was nine or a few. The mutant elements are also very good. It is difficult to convert it into a fairy tale later. All the books have to be changed to fantasy in the later period 😭 The style of painting suddenly changed, no Fortunately, it was laid out early, and the setting of the fairy is acceptable It also starts high and low, has no happy ending, and has a hasty ending. The problem of the unfinished skill tree at the end feels like the outline is not complete, and the monkey master is a wonderful character The open ending is not necessarily good Devil Chapter The most difficult episode to stream infinitely The clock countdown is a good survival element. The copy integrates games that I also like to play, such as Warcraft, Diablo, and Heroes. The world view is invincible. The early data flow is great. The part about the island's bone dragon collection card is also very good. Dead Space is also okay. The horror element is very attractive. However, the data flow is like Samsara Paradise with thousands of chapters and reviews. Ah, why do you have to update and directly destroy the article? This is not a problem of data flow, but a problem of designing data flow. I also like the black feather element very much. It can be introduced as an evolution. I don't like the updated combat power system at all. Personally, I think the biggest failure is not to update and deal with the numerical expansion properly. After writing it, it will be as exciting as millions of battles, and then it will be an open ending. The plot, but the concept is OK I think the later stage of the story is pretty good, with rich officialdom elements from front to back, not deviating from the main theme, not putting the cart before the horse, and no big logical collapse. It ends smoothly, and in the later stage it becomes fantasy and logical, not abrupt at all, and it is very good There are also money-making and nightmares, which are also interesting to watch. Write whatever is popular at the moment, urban/supernatural elements, you have to write your own characteristics. I feel that taking advantage of hot themes to open up high and then the outline and writing can't support the frame and go down is the characteristic of Eggplant 😐 I hope this can be well written with characteristics and end smoothly. Eggplant is quite good at writing copy

If the card ring is taken away, you will become an amnesiac. It was originally reasonable. As long as it is difficult to take the card ring, but now it seems that there are too many ways, which makes the protagonist's confidence extremely ridiculous. What does it mean that once you become a billionaire, you will never become an amnesiac? You have only seen a few cards, and you have no idea what other people can do. I can kill you casually.

Many of the characters' reactions are taken for granted, and the plot is deliberately mysterious in order to set up suspense, which makes reading difficult. Isn't it because I deliberately set up the self in the mirror that I don't have the writing power (or I don't want to waste too much thought) to write the plot so that readers can find out by themselves, so I have to tell the answer to the mystery myself... Sigh😮‍💨 What are you writing... Even if you don't collapse now, you will if you continue writing. Think carefully before writing. Don't you want to outline the characters, settings, and background?

Nowadays, the weirder and uglier the titles of Qidian's books are, the more likely they are written by novices. A book with such a small title like this one must have two brushes. It's really good to see the latest chapter. I hope you don't become an eunuch. I will definitely order them all.

The writing is very good, but I want to make some suggestions 1. You made the male protagonist too invincible, which makes it difficult to develop the subsequent plot, and the audience will also suffer from aesthetic fatigue and no sense of tension 2. The background story of the supporting characters is complete (referring to the female supporting role only), but it does not reflect other things, such as one's own thinking and inner struggle. I feel that the protagonist's casual words will make people around him obey too much. I feel like it's a bit modular. Except that the protagonist is a tool man, the protagonist sees through everything. I feel that this is not conducive to the development of the book.

Finally, I saw a discussion that was all about praising Brother Eggplant. It's really amazing. Brother Eggplant, I feel ashamed to say it. I haven't received any serious support, so I can only send two recommendations silently every day. Every new book by Brother Eggplant is followed and pinned to the top. I recommend and support Shadow Street and Demon Chapter. I have been reading it again recently. Compare I like the Infinite Flow World written by Brother Eggplant. I read Shadow Street written by you in junior high school, and now I have a baby. How come it has been so many years, and my favorite author is still Brother Eggplant. I will definitely read Shadow and Demon once a year. Come on Brother Eggplant, I hope you will get better and better, and become platinum as soon as possible

I read this book because someone in Red Chicken commented that the protagonist of this book is a mentally ill person with high IQ. I had high expectations for it, but after reading a few chapters, I realized that I didn't think it was a high-IQ book. Even the purity of mental illness is not enough, let alone mental illness such as Zhu Jue or Brother Huozi. From now on, the protagonist is an ordinary person who can see spiritual fantasies, or a normal person, and his thinking is also normal, and he does not feel any mental differences. Secondly, let's talk about high IQ. It is difficult to write a high-IQ protagonist, and very few are well-written. But in this book, you have to say that the protagonist has a high IQ. I really don't think there is anything that shows high IQ. Let's take "The End of Ten Days" as an example. Although I didn't finish reading this book, at least the reasoning in the front is logical and self-consistent, and the protagonist's IQ is shown by comparing with his teammates. But in this book, I really didn't see how high the protagonist's IQ is. Finally, let's talk about the plot and setting. This goes without saying. Every author has his or her own set of designs. However, from the beginning of this book, I was bored by the "memory collector" and "cleaner". To put it bluntly, the plot structure and design are not very exciting. Of course, this is also because I have read too many similar novels including Infinite Stream, Hell Apartment, Tinder, and Mystery Game. In comparison, at least in the early stage, the setting of this book did not appeal to me. Of course, if the author writes some amazing wisdom in the follow-up, just pretend that I didn't say it. I just commented on the first few chapters and the plot is not very attractive. 🙂

It's similar to the way Alice or Ten Days Ends. Killing games are not a new subject, but there are no bad routines, only people who can't write them. There is still a market for upgrading and killing monsters after writing them for decades. The author's writing style is online, without fancy nouns or messy Riddlers. There are really very few authors who are willing to write plots in a down-to-earth manner. I like it and hope to maintain this level.

I watched Street of Shadows in high school and am now 27. Brother Eggplant is also constantly improving. This is the real author. Come on!

This kind of novel doesn't require using your brain because it's all forced logic.

I read the reviews and said it can be compared to Tokazu no Tsurugi, but after reading the book, it's really the same as Tokazuzu noshi and it's comparable.

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The author has written more than ten books. Among them, these are probably the most outstanding and profound ones for most readers, Street of Shadows, Demons, Supreme Immortal Dynasty, and New World. The rest, to be honest, are ordinary and tasteless. In the infinite flow and science fiction genres, Eggplant still has something, but It's because of poor control over the details, some high openings and low moving trends. The setting in Demons where time is both life and currency is really amazing. I suggest the author combine shadow and demons to polish it into an infinitely fine work. The fantasy genre has too much nonsense and too little excitement. , Just like the quality of an iron ore in The Immortal of Weapons is divided into too many grades. I think that's not what most readers want to read. If you want to use a sophisticated and detailed writing style, then you have to write the plot brilliantly, so that our readers will feel that it is long-winded but good-looking. On the contrary, write It's long-winded, and the plot makes people sleepy, which makes readers like me uncomfortable. The dozen or so books you've written include unlimited genres, science fiction, fantasy, urban, apocalyptic, and martial arts. They are all-round but not specialized. Brother, you have been writing books for many years. Do you know what genre you are good at? I think when Shadow Street was popular, you never thought that the subsequent books would sink to such an extent. I won't go into details. I sincerely hope that Brother Eggplant's book will become popular. What I said today is all sincerity. If there is any offense, I will forgive you.

It started off poorly, the plot was stupid, and the writing was not polished. I read book reviews that said the author is a veteran. It's no wonder. The standard of online writing has improved a lot now.

There is a bit of a protagonist halo, which reduces the male protagonist's pretentiousness. He can explain it clearly in one sentence without saying it for a long time, all because he believes in me and the supporting character cooperates. Obviously I don't want to explain such a simple two sentences to everyone.

I regret so much that I spent the money. I can't keep up with the story behind the exciting article. Like Shen Nong Daojun, I wasted money in the later stage and can't keep up with the fun in the early stage.

I really want the fan title😌

I don't understand Why some books are obviously good to read, but they don't have monthly passes?

After reading it for free, I realized that the book was finished. I bought the concluding chapter and found that it was just another day of confinement. My desire to buy the entire book disappeared instantly.

Old eggplant, I seem to have been watching you since high school? Apocalyptic New World stood out among all the apocalyptic novels at that time. Later, the basic horror genre, Infinite Flow, and the later Xianxia, ​​were less popular. Starting with the fairy tale genre, your novels have gone a bit off track. From a reader's perspective, I think you may not be suitable for those fairy tale novels. This book has no subterfuge plot. The motivation and logic of the characters' actions are also very reasonable. There is no sudden deus ex machina, and the world background is also very interesting. Eggplant is an experienced author and there is nothing wrong with his writing style. The only thing I worry about is that this kind of novel that requires imagination is not easy to write in the middle and late stages, because there are only so many ideas. I hope Eggplant can work hard.

It was very uncomfortable to see the copy in the bookstore The author did not give clues to the readers when writing. At the end of the copy, when the protagonist is showing off, he started to give out clues, including various clues that have not been mentioned before. If you want readers to feel that the protagonist is awesome, you must at least have the same clues as the protagonist, and then the protagonist will analyze and make various judgments to solve the puzzle. What did the author do? For example: the author gives the reader and the protagonist the same difficult math problem. The reader is given only part of the known conditions, and the protagonist is given all the known conditions. Although I still can't answer it even if you give me all the known conditions, I just feel unhappy.

The story is good, but the author of the world structure seems to be far from coming back, and it has been ended hastily.

In a laboratory with "AI Self-awareness Research" hanging on it, a red dot under the name "Logic" kept flashing on a certain instrument. "Interesting" a mechanical electronic sound came from somewhere, "Have you finally reacted? Let 'v4' play with you and see what kind of collision you will have with the strongest AI in the world after awakening human consciousness."

I have watched "The New World" before, and I thought the setting was good, but the plot rhythm was not smooth enough, so I abandoned it later. But this time, "The Day of Imprisonment", I was very pleasantly surprised after reading it. I felt that my writing skills have greatly improved and the rhythm of the writing is very good. Although the protagonist is a bit too strong and the information is not synchronized with the readers, the overall setting is perfect and self-explanatory, and the rhythm is smooth. I feel that this is not the only achievement. I'm going to give you a good push

But it cannot be destroyed in V4😄😄

This book is really good, not too popular

Shen Nong has read the whole book. It's good and worth reading.

I don't understand. Isn't the card system a modification of the park system by several engineers? Why does the spaceship have new cards? Is it still the same system?

I really hate that iron cannot become steel. He always has to imitate others to write. As for nightmares, he writes imitating other people's nightmares. Now imitating suspense. He has lost all his own characteristics. Just write a fantasy, martial arts or fairy tale based on your own ideas. Such good writing skills. In this way, when the author sees it, I will provide you with an idea. You can find a place to write the first three stories in The Mysterious Journey of Get Out, and just write them slowly at your own pace. Around 2 million words or more is better. You must not change your taste as you write, just like the Great Immortal Official and Supreme Immortal Dynasty, which becomes official as you write.