Lord: I Drew a World Tree as My Core from the Start
领主：开局抽到世界树当领心
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- 1.8M Words
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- Gaming
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- Game Otherworld
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- 1y ago
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Using cheat codes is one thing! But having grand ambitions without the ability to solve them makes the protagonist seem incompetent! I stopped watching after seeing that trial! It was an elite mammoth monster! The protagonist felt he couldn't beat it, so he fed it and made it full! And the mammoth actually stopped fighting and left?
Since we're talking about the World Tree, of course we have to introduce the Elf race.
Putting aside the other idiotic settings, the fact that the World Tree hates the undead is incomprehensible. Treating the World Tree as the Tree of Life is so basic; they haven't even grasped the fundamental concept.
Do sprites really need breeding capabilities? Author, if you want to create a harem for the protagonist, just do it!
The protagonist is always forgetting things, even his most important talent and tools. I'm speechless.
So far, it's written very well. Hopefully, it won't fall apart later. I suggest adding some technology research and buildings that can mass-produce items, not just those for use within your own faction, so you can earn some foreign trade profits.
The story feels a bit haphazard after the emergence of the Eye Demon. It's ridiculous that a game hosted by a god, currently serving as background, could be so easily bypassed by a parasitic race. Given the Eye Demon's current abilities, it seems like it can win at will, except perhaps for the protagonist. Why not rename this book "The Legend of the Eye Demon"?
Wait, how come your god-level talent and god-level core look so weak? It's really uncomfortable to watch.
Don't just write about plants from Plants vs. Zombies; it feels out of place. Try writing about native plants. Nature has all sorts of strange and wonderful plants; a little research will yield tons of material. Explosive, poisonous, projectile-shooting, thorny—anything goes! You can even modify them slightly: parasitic, blood-sucking, anything goes. Writing about zombies will feel out of place.
Calling Shennong
Is there a Shennong (a legendary Chinese deity)? Reading these comments makes me a little hesitant to jump in...