
From Fire-Tending Boy to Daoist Celestial Venerable
从火工童子到道门天尊
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- Completed
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- 840k Words
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- Cultivation
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- Classical Xianxia
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- 1y ago
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- Qidian
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Let's give the protagonist a different magic weapon. Don't use the same sword. The two qi of water, fire, yin and yang can be used with scissors. The sect Beichen seems to correspond to Beidou. Although the killing is heavy, the magic weapons must also be diversified. After all, swords are so poorly written in current immortality novels. It seems that cultivating immortals has no other magic weapon besides the sword. Or I won't be able to write. It's a long list of ancient articles, even famous books. Fengshen Yanyi and Journey to the West have plenty of material.
I just want to ask, if you, the author, are the protagonist, you are a talent. Does your leader give you benefits to win over you, or does your leader give you hardships to win over you.
The writing and background are both good, but there are two things that could be improved.
1. Cultivation to immortality is originally about changing one's fate against the will of heaven. Pig's trotters are determined to be the destined ones from the beginning, which makes the story lose its sense of mystery and the protagonist is not irreplaceable 2. Behavioral style. The protagonist travels to the world of immortality for the first time and dares to recklessly rush the golden elixir. Although he is an injured golden elixir, he is a bit too brave. He doesn't know what cards the opponent has. It can only be said to be the protagonist's aura.
A good alchemy furnace must have an extra weapon spirit, which is too much. Who dares to believe that an intelligent creature that has self-awareness, can cultivate, and is comparable to an intelligent AI would be willing to be a slave for eternity. No matter how great the kindness is, no matter how powerful the restriction is, it is useless. Don't you hear: "All things are free in the frosty sky."
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Collect various settings such as characters, supernatural powers, sects, magic weapons, etc.
Just like the title, if you readers have any good ideas, you can leave them to me. I will consider them carefully and then choose them. Any character from the magical power, magic weapon, or sect will be fine. The more brilliant the idea, the better. Of course it has to be in line with the classical fairy tale style. Forget it if it's something like technology and leisure...
Compared to Dao Zheng Zheng, I feel a bit like it after reading the introduction.
All you see are some stupid people.
The title of this book is really lame. Let's change the name.
For example, if your author's name is Xuan, and the male protagonist is also named Taixuan, choose the character Xuan. The purpose is to become an immortal and attain enlightenment. Then choose the character tribulation, which means overcoming tribulations and becoming an immortal. Why not call it "Xuan Jie Becomes a Dao"