Miss Witch, It's Time to Clean up the Entries

Doesn't it mean that everyone can see their own entries? Did I miss it or something? Why does it appear that only the protagonist can see it? For example, this bank president, if set according to the settings, he should be able to promote himself to the level of a senior bank official. And the little noble daughter, when he knew what the protagonist recommended her to do, shouldn't he be shocked that he could point out the strengths of her entry the first time he met her? The author should add a restriction to this setting. For example, only after achieving relevant achievements can the relevant entries be learned, but this is a bit unnecessary, or one can only see one's own entries through baptism in the church.

In the harem of this book, the main character's wife is pregnant, and some people asked in the comment area if she is a yw... (Although I don't know what kind of thing is going to be born, it is also an interesting foreshadowing) The quality is very good, different from the previous witch stories, this one can be regarded as a new one, and in the past few days, it has been updated with tens of thousands of words, so the quality is full. It is a pity that the book is not popular at the moment, and it is also a big one. It's a pity that I won't name the book specifically in order not to criticize it. This book is better than 90% of the books in the light novel area so far. The male protagonist has brains, the plot is not particularly procrastinating, and the female protagonist has a three-dimensional image. I hope the author can persevere. I have been reading books for more than 10 years. This book is definitely close to the fairy grass. If it can be completed successfully, it will definitely be the fairy grass. In addition, the emotional line of the harem looks quite exciting... The only pity is that the data at the starting point is not very good, probably because the exposure is too low, and the title of the book may not look so attractive, but if the quality is not good, 10,000 words a day is at least more satisfying than some authors who advertise two-in-one chapters for 2 cents. ps for added refinement

Isn't it original? Chapter 70: I almost made my creation fly by imagining the swordsmanship of One Piece.

The early viewing experience was good, but the plot of the game with Mary was too long, and I didn't see any climax or results. Moreover, the more maps I changed, the less of the farming style I had seen before. The characters in the early stage also started to go offline for a long time and I couldn't watch anymore.

When you update 2,000 words, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the rawness of the writing will be criticized. When you update 4,000 words, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you update 6,000 words, the modest praise begins to sound, and the number of dead entries begins to decrease. When you update 8,000 words, readers' support spontaneously forms, and the voices of praise become louder and louder. When you update 10,000 words, the scholar's ​​debate is deafening, and his tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you update 20,000 words, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in a long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updating may not solve all difficulties, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

Why do you feel like you have read similar books somewhere before? The witch is also prone to going berserk, and only the protagonist has the ability to purify.

It has been on the bookshelf for so long. I read two chapters and saved it on the bookshelf when it reached 100,000 words. I thought I had found another good witch novel. It already has over 400,000 words. But I saw Chapter 6. The setting of the territory and the development plan. The old man in the subway read it📱. I really should have read two more chapters at that time, so I didn't have to postpone it until now, ugh.

After reading the current progress, let me tell you what I think of this book. The introduction talks about farming style, but the overall style is more like a western fantasy adventure. Let me talk about the advantages of this book first. The world view is quite large, the setting of the entries is quite interesting, the male protagonist's golden finger is very interesting when the initial plot unfolds, and the author's writing skills are also good. Let's talk about the shortcomings. The first one is the overall story of fake farming and real adventure. Except for the protagonist who is in the territory in the early stage, all the plots in the book are not in his territory and have nothing to do with farming. This makes the early stages of the Golden Forest and Blue Moon Territory too long and the pace too slow. The same is true for Dragon Island. The boat ride is too long, and the monsters and sea monsters in the sea are all witch-level. It is exaggerated to make readers feel how powerful Dragon Island is, and humans have no chance of winning. As a result, the mechanical deity comes to an end during the battle, and the combat power collapses, resulting in a very poor perception of this part. The second is that the plot line advances too slowly and lacks excitement. As a high-level martial world with gods, evil gods, angels, etc., This book has written more than 1 million words. The early lord Mary, as a small boss, has not yet been killed, which is very unpleasant. The two bosses of the emperor and the pope are also doing Tai Chi there. The plot is entirely driven by the villain. Any cat or dog that pops up is a descendant of the evil god, or some gift from heaven. The protagonist keeps running around passively, unable to display his physical strength and intelligence. It makes people feel frustrated. The map only opens the two territories in the early stage, the Imperial City and Dragon Island. If the map were to open a northern territory, other overseas empires, or some old world fighting angels and evil gods at this pace, it would probably take four to five million words to write. If you write like this, there will probably be no readers. I hope the author can pay attention to this issue, and try to pass unimportant plots as quickly as possible to highlight the key points. The third one is the emotional line. When I first read the book, I thought Sophie was the female lead. However, there were so few scenes that I haven't read it until now. Serena, the first heroine to be picked up by the protagonist, has a lot of plots, but because the first mini-boss has never died, her plot has never been better. The plot always says that the goal is to complete revenge, which makes people feel that the feelings for the male protagonist are not pure enough. Moreover, the territory is beaten, amnesia, and the child is lost. It is too tragic. The author should stop tossing the heroine. The early plot of Dorothy was okay, but the two plots of Dragon Island turning her father-in-law into a villain and fighting Sophie were too speechless, which directly made the readers' feelings towards this heroine suddenly deteriorate. Nancy, who was the second one to collect, started to find this person directly in the mid-term. Anne, who had more scenes with the maid twins, was taken away, and Anna, who had less scenes, was taken first. There are a lot of other women, such as Dora the Witch, Feia the Priest, and so on. If you plan to accept them, you can accept them when you are in love or when you have an opportunity. If you don't intend to accept them, don't spend too much time describing them. I hope the author will see improvements in my comments, and I hope this book will get better and better.

New book seedlings need care. As we all know, if you keep reading, you may die. So the new book is about to set sail, and all readers need to read it. Testing the push on Thursday, I am looking at the paid follow-up on Tuesday, everyone, please~ (ps: It only takes 3 months for readers from the country of consumption of any book on the starting point to be recognized as paying users, and a recharge of 1 cent counts. A paying user who catches up with the latest chapter within 24 hours after the chapter is released is counted as one follow-up) After everyone has finished the last page of the novel, continue to swipe right, and you can see the follow-up ranking. New books are updated twice a day. If the results are good and it can be put on the shelves, I will give you more feedback. Finally, thank you in a 360-degree circle.

The heroine disappeared in the early stage. Her senses were not very good. She was almost abandoned. There was no plot of the previous characters at all. She obviously liked Catherine, but there was no plot at all later. It was too much. Alas.

Unexpectedly good-looking I often jump in when ordering books, but this book, from the day before yesterday to today, is written in one go, with almost no skipped chapters What a great Western Fantasy, the Lost Pearl Go for it! ! Three monthly passes

I don't understand the plot, it suddenly starts to collapse, and then I go back and start over again. It's a bit of an infinite reincarnation, but I don't fully understand the meaning. Do you insist that it's a plot kill with a price?

In the end, the author simply forgot about the two maid sisters 😅

There are too many female protagonists, and I feel like many of them are being cared about, and there are all kinds of dangers, which makes me feel uncomfortable watching them😕. And I hope the emotional lines are more delicate. I feel that there are too many physical transactions between the female protagonists around the protagonist. .

Most books will reach a bottleneck after reaching 1 million words, and I am no exception. Recently, I will take time to sort out the outline and content to ensure that the chain is not lost in the follow-up, without adding strange new settings, and try to write as exciting a plot as possible. Recently writing and revising is indeed a bit taxing, but this is also the reason why I respect everyone's opinions. Why do some people say it was written by AI? This is very hurtful. Although the author has always had a good temper, he writes 10,000 words every day. Today, he even wrote 20,000 words because of the revision of the article. He will also correct the problems when he finds them, but when he sees the negative comments in the comment area, he will be really heartbroken. So I'm sorry, I deleted the AI ​​comments that were more hurtful than negative reviews. Thanks again to the readers who support me. I am in a bad state during this period, and everyone is tolerant. I will adjust as soon as possible. Thanks.

I can't understand the plot at all from chapter 292 onwards.

I feel that the writing is very good, and the world view is "very special". I am illiterate and don't know how to describe it. I feel a little bit worse as a person but I can't really tell. It's just that after I read it, I felt that the gap in realm was a bit blurry. The world view feels a bit mysterious to me. Anyway, I personally like it very much

I feel like this book has reached a bottleneck. I started raising them from 200 pieces. In the past two days, I saw 341. The early writing of this book is great, the worldview is well constructed, and the various foreshadowings are full of mystery. But when you look at the back, you can feel that the stall is too big to contain. The turning point should be starting from entering the imperial capital. After leaving the green area to exchange the map, the plot obviously changed from farming to love or the main line of witch? At the same time, open the copy of Court of Azure Dragon. This part is still okay, but after chasing it for a while, I felt that farming was not interesting, so I picked it up. After the game starts, at least there are no big problems with the Witch's Love and the Court of Azure Dragon. It's just a pity. The Court of Azure Dragon, the gift, and the Witch's foreshadowing are full of mystery, but the development is not stunning and grand enough. There are still two or three battles in the Court of Azure Dragon (although the writing power of the battle is not as good as that of the mainstream fantasy), which is still very exciting to watch. It was obviously different after The Court of Azure Dragon. Since the middle stage of Court of Azure Dragon, the mystery and status of the gifts have declined. The protagonist and Randall took a bunch of gifts and started fighting in the air. When the marriage between Moria and the Hall family started, they even stopped acting. They gathered together to give an introduction and started fighting. The mystery and the power of the gifts that were created before were suddenly gone. From here on, the problem of writing skills becomes very prominent. If other authors could write about this big battle for a month, you will sing and I will appear on the stage after all the various fighting methods. The author's writing method is like deus ex machina, disrupt and restart. It's not impossible to reopen, but we can't speed up such a big stall. The big stall that had just laid out the cracks was about to come out to solve the disease. After the disease was solved, I thought it was necessary to operate and develop, but in the end, the road was divided into two ends and operated in two lines. The Northland that had been paved for so long remained there, and the protagonist returned to the Greenland to rebel. The plot of the rebellion is faster. The whole South has been conquered in two or three pictures. The villain Mary in the early stage is directly executed. Why not write a battlefield battle between Mary and the protagonist? At this rate, I feel like this book is not far from the end. . . I think it's a pity. The worldview is well constructed and all the foreshadowing is in place, but the subsequent development cannot keep up. Rift, Northland, and Witch's Revolution are all large dungeons. If they are carefully expanded, the length will be no less than that of the Court of the Blue Dragon. I hope the plot can be slowed down, each map can be shown more, and the writing can be as good as the green collar, and the ending of each part can be better. Finally, isn't the author called the Water Group Tentacle Monster? Where is the group? Can you please invite me in to chat? If not, I will create one in two days so we can chat together.

Is it easy? Will there be weird knives or a disgusting and frustrating plot?

It's really nonsense. The superpowers work as cattle for ordinary people, and they have to be executed regularly.

The author will make a side story, the splendid harem has become a passing cloud...

That Emma makes me sick, a speechless love brain. The person I like comes to kill the protagonist out of nowhere, but is killed, and she still hates this and that.