Tokyo: There's Something Wrong with This Narration!

I hope this book can match your pen name😌😌

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It's okay, I like the narration more

There is a love element here, so if you like it 3,000 times, I will confess my love to my deskmate. Chinese people don't lie to Chinese people

Not long after the Misty Island chapter started, I received feedback from some book friends that they thought it was too forceful to not use the identification technique even though they knew it was dangerous. The author had a sleepless night, and finally got up to revise the article. He followed some suggestions and increased the number of reasonable uses of the identification technique without changing the original plot. Revised chapters from 152-155. It is recommended that readers who have read it can read it again without being charged again, although the number of words is obviously much more than before. Readers who haven't subscribed yet, please subscribe now! The author Jun is very attentive! I will basically read your comments. Some will be adopted and some will not. The main thing is to see whether they make sense and whether they fit in with my plot settings. Thank you for your support and genuine subscription, and thank you for your opinions.

To be honest, I don't like married women, but this novel broke my xp. It perfectly integrates love and suspense. It is considered to be very good among the novels I have read over the years. Definitely worth a look.

This novel is not limited to observing the heroine's character traits from the perspective of the protagonist. It likes to be slowly guided by the development of the story to discover more characteristics of the heroine, and the character image is more three-dimensional. The author adopts the design of narration, favorability and appraisal. Although it follows the settings of the previous Golden Finger, the storyline is novel and overall it looks unconventional. The writing style of this book is good and the rhythm is well controlled. It is an excellent book. I hope the author can keep it up.

The serial murderer who lives on the fifth floor of an apartment has been missing for two years and even the police cannot find him. The protagonist goes door-to-door to find the murderer using his real name. There is no consideration at all whether the murderer will change his identity and hide his name. This is not something that the established identity of an old detective can do. Some people say that the level of the author determines the level of the protagonist. I think it makes sense. I feel like the author is a college student who just entered college, right? If you want to be a master, you should read more books related to the setting of the work or the setting of the protagonist. Look at authors like Foxtail, Yuantong, etc. Who have good grades and are not novices. Their reading is very extensive, so they can create a very detailed world view and write a smooth story line, so that the actions of the protagonist and supporting characters can match their settings. I feel that the author is not someone who wants to write mindless and cool articles. Before looking at the style of writing, he should have been writing romance articles. I still admire the author's initiative and courage to challenge new fields. I wish the author better and better results.

Ah, my wife, my Mrs. Ueio, you are so fascinating😭😭😭So, madam, what is your purpose?😫😫 The first woman the original owner chased seemed to be the wife. Could it be that the women he met later were instigated and induced by the wife, or even the female classmate next door, and the stalker at the beginning was also arranged by the wife. In the end, even if there was no protagonist, he would still get to know the original owner? Or, as my wife said before, a person's personality will change after he dies once. In order to cultivate the person he likes the most, the wife gradually induced the original owner's psychology through one woman after another, including imitating writing, making the original owner go to extremes, and then chose sleeping pills to complete her guess and get the person she wanted? At the same time, the original woman separated from the original owner, maybe it was also induced by the wife? Then if the wife is really successful, the original owner will definitely be involved in the case first, and then enter the first screening of the wife, survive first, and escape from the scene. At that time, the original owner's character must have changed. Then the neighbor will also notice the original owner later, and then use the stalker to complete the first trial? Damn it, connected? In subsequent cases led by his wife, he will gradually encounter the original owner, and then train the original owner step by step into the shape he likes best? So what kind of posture will the final wife use to appear in front of the original owner of the final product? Design a perfect crime that will kill all the women who like the original owner, and then appear in front of the original owner as the innocent final boss; or should you appear in front of the original owner as an uninformed person and become his last resort, wait until the original owner can't live without you, and then slowly give the original owner clues to let him discover the truth of everything? Or is the wife just enjoying a cultivated pleasure? Through various cases that directly touch human nature, train the original owner to become a detective who hates evil, or a perfect criminal who demonstrates private law? If it weren't for the male protagonist's investigative skills, how could we know the final twist in the case of corpse dismemberment? It could only be from his wife's book.                                                                                                                                                                                             My wife, my Mrs. Ageo, please, let me see my wife more, and let me know more about my wife 🥵🥵🥵

Teacher Yuko should be like this, right? What do you think?

After reading the first 30 chapters, my biggest feeling is that this book is like a domestic urban novel with the skin of a small life. For readers who have watched too much of Niqing, there are a lot of detailed descriptions that will make people feel uncomfortable at once, but the plot looks okay, and some plots are quite interesting, but occasionally it feels a bit awkward. .

Chaos! Chaos! Chaos! Chaos! Chaos! My brain is almost exhausted. I have to look for foreshadowing every chapter, and there are constant exciting twists and turns. But what I want to say is that if you have read this book like me, then I think this matter is really hot!

Chapter 121, the protagonist is still reversed? There are too many twists and turns, and it feels like it has become a routine. Now let's see how chapters 120-250 are written, otherwise it will probably collapse. Also, the protagonist seems to like to meddle in other people's business. The previous incident of the cat's broken finger can be called the police. You must go and see it. Are you a Conan addict? Creating the protagonist event is a bit blunt

The plot design of this book is also quite explosive 😏, beauty and danger coexist (it seems that under this beautiful skin, there is a woman who enjoys killing), and the original male protagonist is not weak at all, he is a stalker, a master of details, but he lacks a little practice 😏

I haven't seen such an excellent novel in a long time. I was attracted to it by the entry of wife at first, haha. Later, the plot was well grasped, the protagonist is not an impotent man, and the overall rhythm was well grasped. Come on, author. This is the best novel I have read in the past six months at Qidian 👍👍

Now that I have read Chapter 189, I start to feel bored. The author should be careful of the "dungeon trap". The so-called dungeon refers to the protagonist leaving the main line and running for a period of time. The new book in the sea also died in the copy trap.

When I saw Chapter 65, the protagonist's apartment was like a bus, and even a woman could get in. Then when he was about 20 or 30 chapters in, he said he wanted to change it, but in Chapter 65, he scored twice and he still hasn't changed it.

Some things in this book are very bad, and it also uses a lot of old routines, but it is so beautifully written that it makes people want to read on. Facts have proved that if you are not afraid of bad routines, you are just afraid of poor writing.

I posted this post just to vent my emotions after reading a certain book. That book set up a fan value post. I didn't subscribe, so I couldn't post it. I'm going to post it here and advise the author not to do it. I read a book before and the love story was pretty good. The author wrote a Kujo-type character. This is okay. This is good. I have no dissatisfaction with Kujou-like characters. Then I read There was no such person in the list of heroines, so I was very curious. Then I opened the comment thread and wanted to search for this character. Then before scrolling through the comment thread a few times, I saw a bunch of people saying that the character in the Kujo category had been photographed naked by the protagonist and then discovered by some hacker. The character in the Kujo category was not a heroine anymore. The most important thing was that the photos were discovered by hackers. Then I felt very uncomfortable. I felt so uncomfortable. Well, if this is a passerby character, it's okay. The author wrote it like that, and then he wrote it like this for me So I felt uncomfortable all day long, so I posted about it. If I didn't say it, I would feel uncomfortable for a week. The next thought of it would make me feel uncomfortable for a week. Don't pay attention to the previous ones. The author must not have anything related to cows. That thing is so damn disgusting. Now when I read about romance, I have to check the post in advance to see if there is anything cool in it. Then when I think about reading the post, I feel uncomfortable thinking about it for another week (Don't pay attention to my previous madness, the author is begging you, don't write anything cool) (If anyone new sees this post, you can read this book with confidence, there is no such thing at the moment)

Chiyuki Mei😍😍

Except for the finger problem, everything else is fine

Please read online. Readers, don't keep books. Please read online. Readers, don't keep books.

Miss Jane!

He has a lot of awesome abilities and sets limits for himself.

Although there is a suspicion that identification skills are not used, I feel that the Misty Island is the best part of the senses. Just like the Werewolf, the Misty Island is a normal search for the werewolf, and then find a solution after the search, while other incidents are reverse reversals. You think I am a civilian, but in fact I am a werewolf. You think I am a werewolf, but in fact I am the wolf king. You think I am the wolf king, but in fact I am the white wolf king. You think I am the white wolf king, but in fact I am the black and white yin and yang wolf king. . .

There are too many solved cases. It's like the Grim Reaper. How could there be so many solved cases in one city? Just write two or three of them. You'll get tired of reading them all the time.

The new book issue is still updated twice a day! The update time is adjusted to 00:01 in the morning, and two chapters will be released at 00:02! You can't stay up late and read it during the day, but don't forget to catch up! Reading is the lifeblood of this book. Please readers, please don't read it. Read it now! After it is put on the shelves, I will definitely make more updates to give back to everyone for your support!

The weird and tense style in the early stage has not been continued. Compared with the subsequent solving of the case, the atmosphere in the early stage feels more interesting.

When I saw Chapter 47, I just wanted to say that the protagonist is really mentally ill and would blame himself for trouble. I don't understand the meaning of this 🤔