Refining the Fuel of the Common People, Proving the Fruit of My Great Path!

In fact, strictly speaking, this kind of book has a problem. The writing is too slow, there are too many branch plots, and there are too many descriptions of the branch plots. You may write many chapters to get a treasure, which is similar to the "Survey of the Sky". The writing is very good, but the writing is too slow. For example, even the earliest "Buddha Is the Tao", "Ethereal Journey", etc., The writing does not have this kind of procrastination, and these are all ancient novels. Strictly speaking, Hydrology is not considered hydrology, but I feel that a lot of descriptions are meaningless. There is no problem if I skip it and read it.

Directly train all mortals, and the magic weapon will be called the ordinary world. All intelligent creatures can fit in. Everyone who comes in becomes a mortal, and then they die

The author has been stunned. He has been fighting with the second level. He has been fighting for decades and has been promoted to a level. No one wants to watch four low-level sects fighting. After 400 chapters, the protagonist may not be able to defeat his master at the beginning. Out The protagonist of the island would have found Blood Sea or some Yuanshen Great Cult and bowed down to him. He would have taken off early, and then he would have flattened this place with one slap. He wrote 400 chapters for one Kaimai, 100 chapters for Kill Kaimai, and 500 chapters for him to still kill Kaimai. Is the author serious?

Someone asked you to demonstrate the exercises, but it turned out that they were at a flower party. What kind of six poetry and prose levels do you have to go through before you can meet the person? The key is that you really want to refine some poetry and prose related stuff. I'm going to vomit.

Is this the father-in-law who left the palace? Have you mastered the art of flesh and blood rebirth?

Don't use the fucking furnace to make people's wages. You have to compare your water to make the damp firewood bubble.

It's too watery, Chapter 680 is still opening the pulse and completing it. I haven't entered the secret realm of the blood path yet, and I haven't received the great teaching skills yet. I think these plots can be finished in 200-300 chapters. The plot is too slow and too watery, which is really unbearable. I don't plan to continue subscribing, I'm so angry~~~

The content of the latest 10 chapters is: I rushed to Shell Island with Elder Kang, Elder Kang went to buy tickets, and the protagonist was shopping and eating. I wrote 10 chapters on these contents... The author is really amazing, I admire it.

After I got home, my writing became more and more clumsy. What's wrong? Do we readers get our money from the strong wind? You deserve your poor grades. I spent money to read so many books, and you treat us readers who spent money like this?

You just deliberately don't join the big sect and want to be successful, but do you think you can make more money this way? It will only lose readers. After typing this paragraph, I removed it from the bookshelf. Anyway, I haven't read more than 30 chapters. After looking at the table of contents, I still feel that it is boring.

This book is good, but the main character's reward is too much, too much is not enough. . To those two named Yu, the protagonist gave them tips on how to break through for free, and also gave them various treasures later. . . I feel that the method is too naive. It's not that the better you treat them, the more loyal your subordinates will be, but that they will become more greedy. It is most normal to complain in your heart if you give less this time and if you give less next time. . It is right to hang carrots and reward them after they have made great achievements.

Did the author sell his account or ask someone to continue writing? Before leaving the island, I felt like he was competing with the fairy industry. After leaving the island, the writing became more and more like Cixi's foot-binding cloth. It was smelly, long and watery! Do you really treat readers as human beings and look up to the legendary King of Special Forces?

It was deleted from the bookshelf a week ago. There are no books to read today. I searched them back and took a look. After looking at the comment section, I was relieved that it was still in the water, so I deleted it.

Chapter 180 to 186, the protagonist wants to be an extracurricular tutor to earn spiritual stones, and then targets a girl with a high degree of education, asks her to study her exercises, then finds connections to enter the party venue run by the girl, and then breaks through six levels to get a chance to meet... Anyway, I have no desire to continue reading after reading this

No matter how you look at it, you are unhappy. The whole family was killed by the demon, and you were accepted as a disciple, named disciple, and regarded as the qualifications for spiritual practice. Everything is beyond your control, life and death are controlled by the devil. No matter how difficult it is, no matter how difficult it is, no matter how difficult it is, the calculations come and go day by day, which makes me really tired. I don't understand why the author insists on starting with a devilish way, and the intrigues and deceptions are going on day by day. Can't we have a normal start? I don't mean to write it as a mindless and enjoyable article, but at least I won't feel tired when I read it!

I don't know what the meaning of what you wrote is. The grades are getting worse as you write, the plot is stinky and long, and the writing style has not necessarily improved. It's almost 2 million words, and others can finish it, but you are still at a low level. By investing time and energy into a book like this that is already "dead" you are simply wasting your time.

It looks like you start by buying it, and then you write it yourself.

After Leaving the Island, it's so bad. I haven't made any progress after writing it for three months after leaving the island. I'm still wandering around on this small island. Is this written by one person like the beginning? If I don't know how to write, I'll just be a eunuch. It's a waste of such a good start.

It is a waste of time and unnecessary efforts. . . The plots of many chapters are like this. I have never seen the word count come up to this extent. I am crazy about money. . .

The beginning is really amazing, but unfortunately after leaving the island, the writing becomes more and more rubbish. The plot has become so ordinary that it's almost like reading a book. The writing is very detailed, covering every realm and every stage. It's completely unnecessary and too watery.

Within 200 chapters, it's a god among gods. Above 200, it's a scam I feel like I've changed my writing skills.

Chapter 800, still opening the pulse

I feel that the author wrote this book very well and with great care. It is much better than most novels.

I ordered so much for free, I don't really want to see it

It's a bit ineffective and has too much plot, author.

Non-author, written for myself on the first day of this year.

The recommendation of Qidian is too problematic. The writing and plot arrangement of this book are so good. Why is it so popular?

I've only read a few chapters and I have a question. It's an island and you're riding a cow on the road? How far can you go? All kinds of secret realms and various resources are located in such a small area? Don't you think it's too close? Then I convinced myself that it used to be the area of ​​a large sect, so there were too many secret realms and too many resources. Those who didn't use them a thousand years ago would have died, so I'll let you use them now! It's right to let you use it because I want to convince myself that the restriction was perfect a thousand years ago, but now the energy of the restriction is severely lost! Then I still have to convince myself that there are too many resources and too many secret realms! The area is too small! ! !