In Journey to the West, Investing Across the Heavens

The author dares to add the Great Love Immortal Lord. Investment before Fang Yuan's first week is useless, and investment after his blackening is invalid. Especially at the end of the first week, he refines the time Gu and lives out the second life. At the beginning of the plot, it can be said that Fang Yuan has been assimilated by the world. He is a Gu. He fights desperately just to survive. After investing, Fang Yuan has the ability to bite you to death immediately.

I looked at a few of the previous ones and it was okay, but when I saw the Investment Immortal Lord, I didn't know anything, and I couldn't see the other party's specific information. So I just believed whatever the other party said about the protagonist? He said that one game is only one game. Do you really believe it? The protagonist has no strength and dares to go directly. That is a flaw in logic. Otherwise, it will be refined instantly.

The author's outline is not handled well, there are many settings with logical loopholes, and the protagonist's character design is not handled well either.

In his first life, Fang Yuan would rather starve his own Gu insects to death than deceive, kidnap, and steal. However, he was later driven crazy by the Gu world, and he couldn't live without going crazy. When he met Xie Muhan, he no longer wanted to live. In the end, he realized that the world really deserved to die, and he became obsessed with it.

In fact, I have always been curious about why Journey to the West was labeled as a calamity by the Internet prehistoric novels. Is it a calamity that killed a few wild monsters with no background? Fengshen, your online novel is labeled as a calamity with conspiracy theories. Is it true?

Your profile looks like Xu You, but I don't know who is Boss Cao in the profile.

Let me give you a suggestion. You should start to downplay Gu. You should open a new world for investment, or enter a new world and be someone else's grandfather. Writing about this world of Gu will be thankless. The protagonist of the Gu world is such an extreme thing. No matter what you write, those Gu truths Human readers will not buy it, because they all think that the protagonist will definitely not be able to suppress Fang Yuan. Generally speaking, it is better to downplay the Gu world. Other book friends said that you can let the group of friends go to the new world to play by themselves. You can also write about a world that is popular with the public, at least it will be popular.

That queen is so uncomfortable to watch, she feels a little white, or a little licky? Forcibly creating opportunities for Xiao Yan put yourself too low. Just give her a golden elixir. But you said that the golden elixir is unlimited, then I will forget it.

The subject matter is good, but the writing style is really hard to read.

I don't understand why Zhu Tianliu's novels in every chat group expose themselves to Yaochen, and even tell them about having a chat group. It's just a suicide attempt. Human nature cannot stand the test. Sometimes one more person knows the danger, and others may not be able to seize the opportunity, but there is a high probability that they will do bad things out of jealousy.