In Journey to the West, Investing Across the Heavens

The author dared to include the Great Love Immortal Venerable, meaning that investing in Fang Yuan before his first playthrough and before his corruption was effective was useless, and investing was ineffective after his corruption. Especially after the plot began at the end of the first playthrough when he refined the Time Gu and lived a second life, it can be said that Fang Yuan was assimilated…

The first few chapters were alright, but when I saw the chapter about investing in an immortal, I knew nothing about it and couldn't see any specific information about the other party. Why would the protagonist believe whatever the other party said? He said it was the first playthrough, so why would he believe that? The protagonist doesn't have much strength, yet he dared to go directly there. It's just a logical flaw; otherwise, he would have refined the immortal in an instant.

The author's outline was poorly written, with many logical flaws in the settings, and the protagonist's personality and character development were also not well-developed.

In his first life, Fang Yuan would rather starve his own Gu worms than cheat, swindle, or steal. However, he was driven mad by the Gu world, and as the saying goes, "No madness, no life." When he met Xie Muhan, he no longer wanted to live. In the end, he realized that it was this world that truly deserved to die, and so he became a demon.

I've always been curious why Journey to the West is labeled a "great calamity" in online fantasy novels. Is it just a calamity where a few wild monsters with no powerful backers die? It's more believable when you label Investiture of the Gods as a conspiracy theory calamity.

Your bio has that Xu You vibe, but I wonder which one in the bio is Boss Cao.

Here's my advice: start to downplay the Gu (poison/gu) aspect. Invest in new worlds, or become someone's grandfather in a new world. Writing about the Gu world is a thankless task; the protagonist of a Gu world is such an extreme character. No matter how well you write it, those Gu Master readers won't buy it, because they all feel that the protagonist definitely can't suppress Fang Yuan.

That queen was almost unbearable to watch; she seemed a bit pale, or perhaps a bit sycophantic? She forced opportunities for Xiao Yan, putting herself in such a lowly position. Giving her a Golden Core like that, but if you say Golden Cores are unlimited, then fine.

The subject matter is good, but the writing is really unreadable.

I don't understand why every novel in the "All Heavens Flow" genre exposes themselves to Yao Chen through chat groups, even going so far as to reveal their existence in such groups. It's pure suicide. Human nature can't withstand the test. Sometimes, the more people know, the greater the danger. Others might not steal the opportunity, but they're more likely to do bad things out of jealousy.