Simultaneous Transmigration: Throwing Punches Across the Heavens

You use your psychic powers to control the chakra threads, and then use that to control Senbon 😰. Why don't you just directly control Senbon?

Please, please don't write anything red in One Piece! I don't understand why so many people who transmigrated into One Piece want to be red. It's unnecessary. How come someone who was a beast in their previous life transmigrated into a sage? I can't relate! Wouldn't it be better to be powerful enough to establish a unified feudal imperial system and become an emperor?

The protagonist disappeared while writing this awesome story.

The beginning was fine, but after a few dozen chapters, what happened to the protagonist? He's constantly giving a cold look and smirking; even his speech has to be icy. What was the author thinking? Can't the protagonist just be normal?

The writing style is slightly pretentious and rambling, like a diary entry. If you're going to write this kind of mindless, wish-fulfillment story, I suggest you just go straight for the action. If you're going to write something pretentious, just write original content, okay? 👍🏻

The author's writing is disjointed; in the earlier parts of Journey to the West, Sun Wukong was clearly not imprisoned under the Five Elements Mountain, but later he is directly imprisoned under it.

What kind of nonsense is this? The main character isn't even shown at the end.

This book should be renamed "I Rebel in the Heavens".

The writing in *Covering the Sky* is even worse than *Douluo Continent*. What kind of garbage is this?

Inconsistent plot points 😒