Mortal: Cut Off Hu Xinruyin and Copy Everything!

The comment section is really interesting. A group of people say they are not allowed to accept girls. The problem is, there are three high-quality fan works by Mortals, all of which contain multiple girls. Don't you think it's funny? Moreover, I have read so many books and found that there are many books that are clamoring to have no heroine. Most of them do not know how to subscribe. They are all just a bunch of apprenticeships. It is really funny.

It was really uncomfortable to see the ancestor of the Wang family. As far as the protagonist's golden finger is concerned, it can be said that there is no need to worry about cultivation resources and cultivation speed. There is nothing wrong with copying the Dragon Roar Body for the first time. This is the key to the protagonist's starting point. Copying the little green bottle for the second time is also the best choice, but I really don't understand the third eye and why. You have the increased cultivation speed of the Dragon Roar Body, coupled with the dual cultivation method and Nangong Wan's physical bonus, you can also take unlimited drugs. What kind of brain do you have to copy the physique of that eye? Don't talk about how it can be used to attack souls when it grows to a later stage. The protagonist didn't know that this physique has a soul attack at the beginning, so he provoked an ancestor of the family in the pill-formation stage just for a physique with a 3x increase in speed. The author should have clearly stated in the introduction what magical powers this eye can have when it grows to a later stage. Just an introduction of 3x the cultivation speed is really not worth wasting the number of copies. You might as well make another copy of the small green bottle and cultivate Xin Ruyin and Nangongwan gold-eating insects. Furthermore, the combination with Xin Ruyin is quite inexplicable. The protagonist has never written about her daily life since she started working with Xin. Their contact is a normal superior-subordinate relationship. Xiaomei also said that Xin raised the protagonist as a son, but later on he would blush for no apparent reason. If the protagonist is attractive, shouldn't it be Xiaomei who has been in constant contact with her first? I'm not saying that Xin and the protagonist couldn't have developed a love in those few years. I just think it's necessary to write about these changes in mentality. Otherwise, I really don't understand how Xin fell in love with the protagonist.

It sucks. If you kill Wang Tiangu and dig out your heart, you will die. Completely ignoring the Nascent Soul, it was like refining Qi.

I would like to give you a suggestion: never let the weak protagonist fight against the strong. It is better to have the strong character fight the weak when he is well developed, so as not to write poison easily.

It's really disgusting. When I saw the copy of the Ice Jiao later, I felt as uncomfortable as eating a fly. My level is getting worse and worse.

I hope that many female protagonists will accept Nangong Wan especially. If you think about it, other novels have accepted it, and if you don't accept it, wouldn't it feel like giving away a daughter?

Yanjiabao is quite interesting in front of you. But in the back, if you are really a female character, just accept it. Do you have enough resources to hold the sky bottle? Nangong Wan showed off to Xing Ruyin for the first time there. After that, you let yourself go. You might as well start a family.

The more I read, the more confused I become. What is written here?

The exercises are called Yanyang Baodian, magic weapon, Sunlight Mirror, Sun and Moon Fine Wheel, Lifting Flame Flag, Flying Body Technique, and cannot be called Rainbow Transformation Technique. If you have nothing to do, read the list of gods. You can learn from the magic weapons, magical powers, and spells in Honghuangliu novels The Yanyang Book, during the Qi training period, has a chapter on molten fire, which absorbs the spells formed by spiritual fire or animal fire, and the Yanyang body protection spell. The more molten fire, the stronger it is. Chapter of Foundation Shaping, spells, sky fire meteor, (group attack spell) body technique floating light and shadow (the refraction phantom of light is also a speed movement technique). Golden elixir stage, magical powers, Yanyang Aurora, Rainbow Transformation, Heavenly Fire Mahamudra, Look at the magic weapon for yourself. In the Nascent Soul stage, the magical Donghuang Faxiang (Yang Shen Faxiang) has a flaming flag above the ground, a sun mirror behind him, a sun and moon essence wheel in his hand, and a sky fire escape lock (chain) This is what I thought of, and I can also learn from it. Author, you can try

Luoyun Sect is a master-disciple model, Huang Maple Valley is a family model, casual cultivators are naturally victims, and everything is centered on family interests. It is normal for Han Li to be abandoned. Xiao Cuier was also abandoned along with Senior Brother Ma, but it was just good luck. The previous generation of Luoyun Sect master was called a Confucian by Nanlong Marquis, and he was a relative man. He was decent, very good at being an undercover demon. He did not hide his magical powers at all and even trained him to the elixir formation stage. He saved his life several times. This demon traitor was finally moved and determined to do something for the Luoyun Sect. The Luoyun Sect also suspected his identity and did not kill him. The atmosphere was naturally much better than that of Huang Maple Valley. Han Li was more happy to join the Luoyun Sect later on, and there was no intrigue.

After reading Chapter 78 after it was released, the overall article was a bit bland and boring to read (personal feeling), without even a small climax. There are often typos and incorrect sentences in the article, and the author does not control the details well. For example: the protagonist practices a top-level fire-attribute skill, which is merged with the body of the law, but later the author seems to have forgotten this setting and just has the method. Whether there is a female protagonist: There is a female protagonist, not a harem, single female protagonist or dual female protagonists have not yet been determined. Currently, the only one who has established a relationship is Xin Ruyin, and the only one who is having an affair is Nangong Wan. As for Xiaomei? He didn't accept the protagonist, nor did he engage in ambiguity. He said he was focused on cultivation and didn't consider her, but just hung her up. I personally feel that the author will mention her later and then accept her.

The author is too magical about Palm Palm. If you want to raise a harem, you may need to read more than three. If you read more details in the original work, you will know that the three and four spiritual roots are unreliable without taking medicine.

It's time for Xiaomei to be sent away before forming the elixir. She even failed the protagonist once and she can become Han Li after forming the elixir with four spiritual roots. Zi Ling can write that her sugar daddy comes close to her, but that's her character anyway.

Is it writing with ai... I have copied the ai conversations and they are not deleted even if I delete them.

The plot is well written, and there are no bad points except for the fact that there are too many plots written by myself at the beginning, which can easily turn away readers. It's a pity that it wasn't written as a harem, as not many people seemed to read it. If you copy two small green bottles, one will basically support yourself and gold-eating insects, and the other will be used to raise the harem. There will definitely be more people reading this book. Don't believe those guys who say that ordinary people have different harems. Most people who read fanfiction just want to satisfy the regrets of ordinary people and keep what they have confiscated. If you really just like mortal novels, then there are so many excellent works, why should you focus on mortal fan fiction (these are only a small number of people).

The potential of the natal magic weapon is poor. It is not as good as the Human Emperor's Banner and the Han Li Sword Formation. If you blow it, you can only shoot things like the sun bow that are not on the table.

Han Li attended Tiannan's Nascent Soul Fair for the first time. The price of three thousand years of fire attribute red jingzhi in Tiannan was 100,000 spirit stones. Han Li felt that this price was simply too cheap. It was definitely not this price in the Luan Xing Sea where there were few spiritual grasses in the world, and the Luan Xing Hai Ling The purchasing power of stone is still higher than that of Tiannan, because the scale of the Lingshi mine in Luanxing Sea is not as large as that of Tiannan, and the total amount of circulating Lingshi is not as large as that of Tiannan (before the discovery of the high-end Lingshi mine, the number of high-end Lingshi in Luanxing Sea was much lower than that of Tiannan). The purchasing power of Lingshi is much higher than that of Tiannan. The original book sets the price of a high-level demon elixir in Chaotic Star Sea as only 10,000 spirit stones. Han Li exchanged a seventh-level high-level demon elixir for Ganoderma lucidum. The other party thought this transaction was very fair, but judging from the price, Luan Xinghai can exchange demon pills for the same elixir alone, but he can't get more than a dozen seventh-level demon pills, because Luan Xinghai is a typical place where elixirs and spiritual materials are scarce. It depends on whether the other party is willing to exchange, or the three thousand years of Ganoderma lucidum is equivalent to an eighth-level demon pill. So with the teleportation arrays of Luan Xinghai and Tiannan, this business is very profitable. There is no shortage of monster material resources in the Chaos Star Sea, but the number of spiritual herbs from the previous year is scarce. Even though there are many islands with spiritual veins, the number of rare spiritual herbs is more than that in Tiannan, and there are too few ingredients to distribute elixirs, not to mention that there are monster beasts to devour them. However, the overall output is still terrible, and many common elixirs are in extremely short supply in the Chaos Star Sea. As a continent, Tiannan has more spiritual grasses in the Lingshan Sea than in the Luanxing Sea (but the demand for spiritual medicine is also greater) The Luanxing Sea is seriously lacking in materials for refining magic weapons. High-end rare materials may be richer than in Tiannan. There are too many islands with spiritual veins, and each There may be rare minerals found on the island, but there are not many large-scale mineral deposits. Many common materials for refining magic weapons are seriously lacking. Not all magic weapon materials can be replaced by monster materials, and the supply of similar spiritual mineral materials is relatively abundant in Tiannan compared to Chaoxinghai. When Han Li returned to the Sea of ​​​​Chaos Stars, he exchanged the decent ancient treasures he had captured for several high-level spiritual stones from Huangshamen. No one in the south would do such a loss-making business, and similar magic weapons were difficult to refine in the Sea of ​​​​Chaos Stars because of the shortage of spiritual ore materials, which also restricted the development of magic weapons in the Sea of ​​​​Chaos Stars. Perhaps when Tiannan and the monks from Luanxinghai were fighting, they would think that the other party was too extravagant and wasteful. Tiannan's magic weapon actually used so many ore materials. Since Luanxinghai used so many monster materials, it was a waste for the other party. Situation of the Spiritual Land: There are too many islands in the Chaotic Star Sea, and islands with various small spiritual veins are everywhere. The number of spiritual veins is much more than that in Tiannan, but the number of large or giant spiritual veins is very small. A well-known place with giant spiritual veins is the Star Palace (perhaps Liudao and Wangu each have one), and Tiannan has more than one place with similar large-scale giant spiritual veins, so the Chaotic Star Sea cannot have thousands, tens of thousands or even more disciples in the spiritual land like the Tiannan Sect. Sub-services cannot be like Tiannan, because the spiritual land cannot support so many people practicing, and there are no derived additional industries that require so many services, so we can only take the elite cultivation route. After all, many islands with Nascent Souls may not have large spiritual lands. Even a powerful force like Star Palace will not support so many disciples. Many things are left to mortals to serve or do, rather than directly using Qi refining disciples. This is why the situation in Luan Xinghai is different from Tiannan, and mortals are of higher value. This is also the difference in the cultivation environment between Luan Xinghai and Tiannan. Because the supply of foundation building pills is sufficient, the success rate of foundation building in Luan Xinghai is more. There are many casual cultivations of foundation building, because the foundation building period requires foundation building pills, while Tiannan mainly relies on the refining of spiritual grass. The origin of these elixirs is limited, which must seriously limit the number of foundation building periods, so what kind of sects have the foundation building period? Or in the family, rogue cultivators are rare and can control strategic materials. The main materials of Chaos Xinghai can be replaced by demonic beast inner elixirs. There are so many similar demonic beasts that some small forces can capture and refine them by themselves. The price of foundation-building pills is also cheaper than Tiannan. Some rogue cultivators will spend money to buy demon elixirs to refine foundation-building pills. In addition, there are too many islands with small spiritual veins. Rogue cultivators are everywhere, unlike Tiannan, where all spiritual lands are controlled by others. The supply of demon pills will naturally make the number of successfully formed pills in the foundation period high, but it will not be enough if needed in the Nascent Soul stage. The transformed monsters are difficult to deal with, and last year's elixirs were more scarce than in Tiannan, and high-end resources are still limited. The amount is also limited, but there are more ancient inheritances. Many magical powers in the Nascent Soul stage are stronger than Tiannan, but the number of Nascent Souls in the Nascent Soul stage is much less than that of Tiannan. There are still hundreds of Yuanyings in Tiannan (Han Li became a great monk and the number of Nascent Souls that came after his wedding was quite a lot). In the case of Chaos Star Sea, the Nascent Soul may only be one or two hundred. With a small population and the threat of monsters, the status of mortals in Chaos Star Sea is much higher than that of Tiannan. Mortals and monks rely on each other and cooperate with each other, and the existence of immortals is open to the public. The level of secret skills in Tiannan is lower than that of Luan Xinghai. Most of the skills were created after the destruction of the ancient times. The creator himself was in the early or middle stage of Yuanying in this life, and the skills can only be practiced to this stage. Chaos Xinghai has a large number of ancient inheritances. The top-level good and evil skills are very obvious. The level of demonic skills is much higher than that of Tiannan. Several demonic skills are related to the devil world. For example, the six-pole true magic skill comes from the imitation of the six-pole magical power, and the Xuanyin Sutra is also a kind of The top magic method, or a kind of magic encyclopedia, contains a large number of magic secrets and quick magic methods that can be practiced directly. Needless to say, the Man Beard method, Zhengdao Wan Tianming is one of the three top Confucian and Taoist methods The Star Palace also has a large amount of ancient inheritance. More than one lord of the Transformation Palace has been in charge in the past dynasties. It was inherited from ancient times like the top sects of the Great Jin Dynasty. In addition, the chaotic star sea environment allows the three attributes of water, ice and wind to have more and higher types of skills and secrets. The Twin Saints of the Star Palace are Han Li's strongest Nascent Souls in the human world. They are no match for the Six Paths one on one. Ling Xiaofeng also defeated the Golden Dragon King head-on and won a group of dragon corpses from the Golden Dragon King to refine puppets to pull the cart. The Six Paths have been hiding from his sister and brother-in-law. Even when Han Li reached the late Yuanying stage, he felt that these two magical powers were very strong. The Rat King also commented that the two magical powers were not weak.

Why do mortal novels deal with Nangong Wan? She's just like Biaozi. It's boring. As long as you see it, you'll be 888. It's not interesting at all.

Don't be too quick to represent others. I think Nangong is okay. You don't like Nangong. I also don't like the original version of Zi Ling, which is a bit bitch. I don't care about the harem party, so don't be so double-standard, okay? There are so few female-less mortals, why do they have to come to ex people?

I've read dozens of chapters and can't stand it anymore, I feel so bored.

In particular, the protagonist's training is too fast. He is just a spiritual follower. He copies it over and over again. I feel that it is getting worse and worse. There is no magic weapon in the cause. If you start a fight, no one can defeat it, right? And he loved causing trouble so much that he died early.

Are you tired of the strongest skill of Love Sword Judgment? Doesn't the protagonist have wood spirit roots? I'm looking for a rubbish Kung Fu book while I'm looking for a Kung Fu book in the Hornet Valley. Then when I'm old, someone has already mastered it. If I don't raise 4 kilograms of worms, I can copy the powerful body of the 4 kilograms of worms and some ugly things, but there won't be any people with much potential. Even if I raise some dragons or something, what about blood fish spiders?

You said you don't practice Qinyuan Sword Art, why are you going to Huangfeng Valley? Huangfenggu is the big eyes of the two eras. Anyway, you are so powerful, just find another gentleman's technique. Everyone can't understand it, and everyone wants to go to Wong Lao. He doesn't want to copy the original work to show off the distance between the blue eyes. If you think you need to create a more powerful public relations, I will say that you can keep a lot of fire elements. I don't know how awesome it is. It's not as good as Sister Xuan Ying.

My brother likes to go to Yellow Wind Valley, and then he doesn't want to copy the aid, and then he wants to sleep. Chen Sijie is really disgusting. He is a rubbish supporting role, not very good at cheating, has so many women, and a smelly vase. He can't even take orders.

I chose the demon material of the Shen Transformation Stage plus the Heavenly Phoenix Fire, and practiced it for a few years. I am in the early stage of Yuan Ying. In the end, it only increased the speed of Nascent Soul in a small stage. It took so much time. Author, why don't you get a hammer? Please become a different person

Mortals make a modified narration system, make pranks, play pranks, make fun of Han Paopao and the natives, plunder resources and cultivate mana

Is it nothing to do Nan Guanwan? Mainly because the plug-in is powerful and the settings are reasonable and worthy of inference? The storyline is exciting, interesting, well-conceived, and written fluently? That's the last word