Shushan: Zhixian Asked

The first half of the chapter: Senior tells you not to leave the cave unless you become a loose immortal. The second half of the chapter: Go out for a walk during the festival.

He is also a strange person. He is obviously not strong enough and prefers to go to places with a lot of things. Obviously you can't beat them, but you still stay at home and wait for them to knock on the door for the second time. Also speechless.

I saw the protagonist after his transformation, because he had no clothes on his body, he risked his life and stupidly went to the temple to steal clothes. This kind of idiot. It's strange how such idiots can exist, you shouldn't seek to increase your strength. Learn the means of protection.

When writing fan fiction, innovation is a good thing. However, the character traits and timeline in the original work cannot be written upside down, otherwise there will be a strong sense of fragmentation. Why is Xun Lanyin's character so domineering, and Shen Xiu has turned into a sonorous girl again? Baoxiang is still innocent, let me go, he is a slut to begin with! ! ! At the beginning of the Ming Dynasty, old man Xuexue should have ascended long ago.

Not suitable for old bookworms, the logical thinking in it is hard to explain in one sentence. Not to mention that the spirit transformed into a monster and dared to go to the temple to steal clothes after it was confirmed that he had extraordinary powers. We already know that the world of Shushan Swordsman is a big world that can deduce, confuse, and disrupt the secrets of heaven, and the network of cause and effect spreads all over the heavens in it. It is really reckless to rush in and hunt for treasures without getting the secrets of heaven and earth. You have met Emei people many times, so why don't you think more about it? What do they have in common? They have so many things in common, but they themselves are nothing more than a treasure.

This is really it, brother, you smell so good!

The logic written in it is all nonsense. This is just to contend with the Emei sect. It is said that the Emei sect is domineering, but at least Emei can only suppress evil ways. Look at what is left, they all do not treat people as human beings.

Not ruthless enough, decisive enough, too literal-minded!

The character setting is obviously very novel, but the author's writing is too poor and the protagonist is too stupid

The protagonist dares to go out and hang out even though he knows that he is Tang Monk's meat. How reckless 😰

Author, don't look for random training techniques every day. It's enough to practice two. Lu Zu and Hesha, after finding the Sanzhe Cliff, practice Lu Zu's techniques and establish Taoism. This is also the authentic Taoism. This is the Sunshine Way. Cultivate your character, build merit, and recruit more disciples with good qualifications. Fight this and that every day. Is it interesting to fight back and forth?

Hesitant, others want to take your life, you think they are falling in love with you, but when others increase their output, you and them become angry again. Pure two arms

Haha, there are so many bad reviews that I'm afraid to read them.

It bothers me when I see the Five Ghost Umbrella that the author can't make a magic weapon himself or it doesn't belong to someone else. You used your golden fingers to take Zhong Kui's magic weapon out of thin air. Did you get other people's consent? I don't know how you plan to get around this trap when the protagonist enters the fairy world in the future? Zhong Kui must be wondering that he is doing well at home, but the magic weapon is gone. Will he not settle the score with him when the protagonist enters the fairy world?

Shushan magic weapons all have cause and effect. If you take someone else's magic weapon, you need to fill the shortfall (owed to heaven and earth) for them.

It's already 160,000 words. Brother, when will you become a eunuch?

Those who write about Shushan must come to help. Come on, author💪

Deliberately creating conflicts is really to oppose Emei for the sake of opposing Emei. It is shoddy and shoddy.

After reading dozens of chapters, I was either robbed or offended, speechless😓

What a waste, no one can defeat him.

It's like writing a book about God. Instead of giving away magic weapons that have cause and effect, give away the treasures of heaven and earth? You are really a talented person, don't you know how to take money from others to eliminate disasters for others?

It feels like it's no longer Shushan. There are just a few people with the names of Shushan, and then they fight in various battles, and they are wiped out at every turn. This is survival in the last days, not a fairy tale. It's the pleasure of catharsis, not the cleverness of the idea.

I've read more than twenty chapters, and to be honest it's okay. There are a lot of typos, but the impact is not big... But when I opened the author's homepage, I found out why none of this guy's novels were seriously completed... It was either cut or unfinished. I'm so scared. Author, can you tell me if this book can be finished well?

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 12. Pig's feet are none of your business. You come out to fight against injustice and pretend to be B.

What the hell, a big drug is running around, and the immortals are loyal and won't eat him. It's weird, it's an antique.

I read the first two chapters and then started reading from chapter 45. The author has indeed done research on Shushan. But the disadvantage is that there is no main plot at the beginning. For example, some protagonists in Shushan novels want to gain enlightenment, some want to take revenge on Emei, etc. The more unreasonable part is that the first protagonist is hunting for treasures everywhere, but the problem is that many of those treasures have been promised to Emei. The balance has already been reconciled in heaven, and the debt must be repaid if you take it. It is difficult for the protagonist to take it. The second is that the protagonist wants to establish a sect, compete with Emei for luck, etc. It feels a bit ridiculous. The destiny of Emei Daxing in Shushan novel has been determined. Even if the protagonist is not in the destiny, it is gradually included in the protagonist's movements. In fact, the protagonist only needs to repair the earth's water veins and volcanoes, and at the same time subjugate demons and accumulate merit. Third, the protagonist wants too much but doesn't have enough strength. You need to start with an invincible style or be infinitely wise like the protagonist in Chen Yishi's fantasy world travel. The part where the protagonist travels through Shushan was superbly written.

It's pretty, just don't need a eunuch

Due to the intervention of the protagonist, how should the stories of these very important characters in the main story be interpreted in this book? Baoxiang Geng Peng vs. Zi Ling Hancalyx, Yixiu Situ Ding vs. Situ Ping, Jiaotai Turtle Snake vs. Hidden Spirit Son Xiong Manniang. [Tips] 1. The reason why the protagonist was able to obtain the original middle volume of Guangcheng Tianshu is inseparable from Wen Jin. And the completed book is of great significance to the protagonist, so if it is set according to the original work, there has actually been a cause and effect between the two! Now that cause and effect have taken place, we should make good use of this line... Is it because Wen Jin's pity happened that he just passed his entrance and went straight to Zhu Chaozi in this life? Or should he wait until he transforms into Zhu Wen and then cross over, firstly to continue to contain Zhu Mei, and secondly, to be able to point his sword at Qi Jinchan and disgust Qi Shuming? 2. Baoxiang and Honghua are also best friends, and Lin Ruolan has a fate with her in the past life. Why not introduce them to the family and consolidate their bench strength? 3. Among the three heroes of Qilu, Li Ning, Li Yingqiong, and Zhou Chun and Zhou Qingyun are all in the Emei camp, so can the line of Divine Sword Yang Da also be used? I personally think that as a Shushan fanfic, especially one that wants to write about the game between the protagonist and the Emei camp, there may be a more interesting way of writing: giving the protagonist more character relationships, especially the character relationships of the important characters on the Emei side, instead of simply completely separating the two camps. In this way, the plot may be more dramatic. I have a cute little Zhu Wen. No matter how much your son is the second generation ancestor, he still has to be a licking dog! You, Miss Lingyun, want to ascend to heaven. I, Sun Daxia, will spray you with earthy love words and slowly lead you into the world of mortals! Hello brothers Li Ning and Zhou Chun, I, Yang Da, am smiling with disdain! Hahaha, don't you think about this scene and it's hilarious...

Although it is not mentioned in the original book, some book friends think so. Maybe this is also a kind of beautiful imagination! As the most awesome person in the fourth generation of Emei, didn't Zhujiao think of taking Shangguan Hong into his family? Just pass the Erqing bottle to her!

Why don't the author revise it? There are many typos.