Two Realms: Cultivation Starts from Shu Mountain

No wonder it's limited to free. What is this?

I've read it, I don't like it, I think the plot is toxic

Thank you Shennong! It would be great if Qidian could block the author

If you're a female channel, just go over there and write. If you're a male channel, what are we doing?

I said it was weird, and there were constant little poisons. When I looked back and saw that I was selling myself, wasn't this a female channel routine?

When a subordinate runs an errand, he has to reward others with resources that would take him 60 years to acquire. Is he really worthy of being a female video author? You haven't changed your thinking since you started watching male videos, right? What are you writing about? There are also the powerful exercises mentioned above that are sold casually and are extremely poisonous.

Shushan has a heavier emphasis on cause and effect. If you take something from someone else, you have to pay it back sooner or later, and you use your own merit to repay other people's debts. No matter how high you cultivate, you must pay back your own cause and effect clearly. The Shushan world typically looks at inheritance, not qualifications, but only at fate and cause and effect.

It's so funny, the female channel comes to the male channel to clean up the routine and come back again

The treasures in Shushan are reserved for the people of their choice. The Emei sect helps those ascended masters solve the troubles they left behind. Those masters left the treasures to Emei. If you take those treasures casually, you will form a karma with those immortals. What can you use to repay them?

The author is pretty good, and the first few chapters have made it clear that the main text is abusive. Not bad, not a waste of time!

The apprentices in Emei are all good at calculating. If you are telling the truth, you can tell at a glance. The twist in the story is too blunt.

Being able to survive ten chapters is a great achievement. I died of poison. The author is definitely not 30 years old, and may not have attended high school or college. Lack of logic, reality. Story links are copied mechanically.

I judge it to be a real person, because his writing is so bad, not even as good as AI, the transition is very stiff, and the writing is like a running novel, and it goes by very fast. When I read the first three chapters for the first time, I didn't know when the protagonist went to another world, which was the world of the Mountain Temple. Of course, it may also be the reason why I read too fast. Then when I read When I got to the third picture, I felt something was not right, so I went back to the second picture and read it again. When I read it word by word, I realized that he had made a transition. The other time was when he was going from Shushan to the mountain god. The transition was also very blunt. After turning the page, the protagonist arrived at the mountainside. So according to my judgment, it is not AI. AI will not write so poorly.

Shushan has strict cause and effect. If you pass on the skills and suffer the consequences caused by others, you will have to bear part of the cause and effect. Moreover, the main focus of cultivating immortals is to cultivate the mind. If the mind is not good, the higher the magic power, the more trouble it will cause. Not only will it not be a help, but it will drag down the protagonist, and the family members themselves will not end well. I suggest the author focus on examining his younger brother's character next. His parents will live longer in this life, and he will also examine it in the next life. If his character is not good, don't practice immortality. Forced cultivation of immortality is harmful and useless.

As far as the three golden chapters are concerned, the author's approach is different from other authors. The first chapter is set in the early Ming Dynasty, but it does not match the historical background. Instead, it focuses on describing the plight of the protagonist who bought himself a slave, which is quite frustrating. The first half of the second chapter, which is considered a transitional chapter, is still about how the protagonist bought himself as a slave, and was knocked to the ground by a supporting character and almost vomited. Later, Golden Finger began to appear, but it was too bland and not very satisfying. The third chapter is a transitional chapter. There are many poisonous points in the chapter. First of all, the author wrote that the protagonist discovered that Goldfinger was the land god of another world a year ago, but he did nothing at all. He did not show any miracles or help the villagers. He only spent a year absorbing earth energy and practicing. The second protagonist killed a wild boar spirit. After the wild boar spirit died, the protagonist had to open a altar to kill the wild boar spirit's resentment. After the three protagonists finished killing the wild boar spirit, the villagers asked him who he was and he directly said that he was the land! The key villagers really believed it and worshiped him directly. To sum up, this is a rubbish novel, it's a lot of poison, so it's better not to read it.

When I read the fighting scenes in the book written by the author, I felt very childish. It's just like the turn-based system in the game. You and I, by the way, put away a magic weapon after using it once. If it doesn't work, you can immediately take it out and use it a second time. Can't you be more decisive? Once it is confirmed that the person is guilty, he should be beaten to death on the spot without saying a word! Like many novels about Taoist cultivators, they try to trick someone, first sneak attack, then touch the corpse, and finally save him, three times each time. When the author writes the book, it feels like he is playing a turn-based game with his opponent, which makes people unable to take on the role.

As a native of Emei, even Baiyun Dianxia was not spared, but he actually wanted to kill Mrs. Miaoyi, who was the mainstay of the Emei sect. Author, you are so logical. Do you think the next step is to kill Qi Shuming Xuanzhenzi, and finally even the founder of Changmei? It's really funny, what a plot (it was good to watch, the previous ones can be considered a little bit poisonous, but I can't bear it anymore)

Is the protagonist helping the three girls from Ziyun Palace to do good deeds? Otherwise, Ziyun Palace will also belong to Emei in the future. Now that the protagonist is old, how come they still owe them karma? Emei won't be able to get Ziyun Palace either.

There are only 80 households in a Yangzhou city. You might not be able to run into a living person for a long time. Don't just listen to the wind and blindly change history. If you write like this, the landlord's family will have gone bankrupt. How many people are needed for so much land? ? Are landlords that stupid? Nine out of ten rooms are empty, and there are still a few people left. Ancient times are not modern times, and it is normal for a family to be separated by several miles. According to the way you write it, one person can cultivate hundreds or even thousands of acres of land? They are all little supermen. What's the use of tens of thousands of acres of land if the landlord can't find anyone to help him farm?

. . . . . Male videos make money, but you have to use AI to modify the poisonous points.

There are still a few chapters left to be fully ordered, and I really can't keep up. I just want to ask, this is an online novel. Your book is not interesting at all. How on earth can you keep writing it?

Can you read Shushan's original work carefully before writing it? The writing is not good and the plot is average. You can modify it on the basis of Shushan, but what the hell are you modifying!

Hey guys, how do you get 20,000 favorites from a bunch of bad reviews in the comment section?

The protagonist of this book is the first disciple of Emei Miechenzi, the first of the three generations of Emei disciples. It is written like a casual cultivator. When he conflicts with others, the elders of Emei always turn to outsiders. No matter the reason, they are indiscriminate and it is because you are wrong. They all know who Zhu Mei is. They all turn to Zhu Mei to suppress the protagonist. Those with high cultivation can calculate the cause and effect, and are afraid of karma with others. The protagonist is the elder, so he is not afraid of karma with you. Anyway, you don't dare to bully the master and destroy the ancestor. It is a pity that the protagonist does not choose to swallow his anger and chooses to bully the master and destroy the ancestor.

Is it an AI article from the studio? I haven't read it yet.

The plot is sparse, and the only thing that is tough is conflict.

The more I read this book, the more rubbish it becomes. It's boring and I won't follow it anymore.

The problem is, this is a fairy world, where strength is the most important thing. Is it possible that the subordinates can take advantage and run away immediately? I don't think it's that toxic.

This writing and the plot are horribly bad. You should really find a factory quickly and don't waste your time.

Let's go and read 👀 Wen Chao Gong's new book. Gou cultivates immortality in the two realms 😐