Cultivation of Immortality Begins from Shushan

Eunuchs are just eunuchs. Why are they changing their vests? They are also advertising when they change their vests. Isn't this a white eunuch?

His is not a pure Shushan worldview, this integrated worldview, Wudang is much better than Emei, and there are seven senior sisters, and I remember that half of them seem to have the inheritance of Kunlun. At that time, there are various legends about the Queen Mother of the West, the Zhenwu Emperor, who can get along everywhere, much better than Changmei, who is neither up nor down.

You guy, you haven't finished a book in twenty years, including "Hong Kong", "Infinite Journey to the West", "Three Kingdoms Mercenary Group", "Water Margin", and "Rebirth Warriors". You can't even write a physical book, but I have to admit that your writing is indeed good, but you are really playing guerrilla, writing a book for a different account.

Couldn't this flying sword be pulled by Qi machine? Just like the movie about Shushan, this one about flying with a sword is a bit too down-to-earth.

Something feels a little wrong. Regardless of other considerations, in terms of tradition, Wudang is the most famous Taoist holy land. You said that it is okay to practice Buddhism in places like Emei and Wutai. The origin is there. In reality, there are no Buddhist temples in Wudang Mountain. You worship Wudang and complete the monk method. It is simply, even if the original setting of Huanzhu Louzhu makes it so Half of them are in charge of Wudang. You should consider long-term things. You also mentioned that there is an old master in Wudang. Who can this old master be? At the top, he is the Zhenwudang Demon Patriarch. At the bottom, he is Tai Chi Zhang Sanfeng. There is already a great way to reach the sky. Why praise the monk's bad feet and add a bunch of things from the White Lotus Sect at the end? There is something really wrong. I have never been very fond of Buddhism. Regardless of its teachings, it is all just bragging. The battle setting is meaningless. To put it simply, Buddhism was introduced to China from the Han Dynasty, which is almost 2000 years ago. Are there any named Buddhas and Bodhisattvas who became Buddhas from Chinese people in a broad sense? No! ! Xuanzang is the reincarnation of the golden cicada, Fahai is also the reincarnation of the novice monk in front of the Buddha's throne, and Jigong is the reincarnation of the Arhat subduing the dragon. Why, in the Holy Land of Lingshan, you look down on you, the leek of the Central Plains, so you can obediently contribute your incense. Taoism does not talk about the Jade Emperor Zhang Bairen who has no empirical evidence, which is a bit nonsense. The Tota King Li Jing is a bit far-fetched. The folk legend of Zhong Kui, the Four Heavenly Masters, Xu Xun, Ge Hong, Zhang Daoling and Sa Shojian all clearly gave their status. To be honest, these Buddhist Dharma practices can hardly be counted in the Hinayana. Just to save demonic soldiers and evil soldiers, does it have to be Dharma? There are so many Taoist methods for subduing external demons. How many transformation methods can be achieved when Master Sa enlightens Wang Lingguan? In terms of transforming demons into righteousness, Taoism also has many things worth pursuing.

I opened a new book when I opened it, I even changed my vest, and I didn't even give you a through train. I almost didn't find you.

I am also convinced by this protagonist. He joined Wudang and learned a bunch of evil Buddhist techniques. Every magic weapon is righteous. In this case, how good it is for you to join Zhushan Sect in the first place.

It's terrible. I have more than 200 true disciples, the head of the sect, the chief of the Law Enforcement Hall, and I still have to dig out manure and practice those rubbish flying swords with level 1 and 2 defense.

Are the nebula you mentioned and the nebula I understand the same concept? Is it related to the concept of nebula in the dictionary?

The difference between infuriating energy and mana is too chaotic. The infuriating energy level is bad for mana!

It's just a matter of cultivating both Buddhism and Taoism. He is also cultivating Buddhist caves and magic weapons in Wudang Mountain, which is a strong substitute for the current policy of introducing Asan.

Everything else about this book is good, except for the scenes with women. All kinds of gifts, a strange woman came up and asked him for help.

Bland as water, tasteless, tasteless to eat, a pity to throw away

The protagonist's studies are too complex. If he were not the protagonist, he would have been useless. If the disciples of the Wudang sect don't study the immortal skills of their own sect properly, they will learn from each one they see, hammering here and there.

The author's book has a better data-based panel content setting than the previous one, Water Margin, but there are still big problems. The content of the character data panel in the previous book Water Margin has no effect at all, and the attributes and skills are not decorations at all. Because this book is closer to the game, the data-based panel clearly plays a role in advancing the plot. But there are still many problems. As a real-life cultivating immortality game, all aspects of the data seem very awkward. It is very petty and does not have the slightest feeling of cultivating immortality. For example, in the book, the damage of the first and second level flying sword magic weapons is about 10 and 20 points, and the damage of the sixth and seventh level flying sword magic weapons is only a few hundred points... Almost the same as the flying sword magic weapons used in the Nascent Soul stage, brother. Also, in the novel, the protagonist forms an elixir and practices the Hunyuan Golden elixir. His strength should have improved by leaps and bounds, right? No, it's a little stronger, but that's it. In other similar novels, my impression is that the attributes given to the golden elixir are basically increased attributes, doubled blood and mana, increased upper limit level of corresponding sect skills, increased character attack coefficient, etc. Basically, it uses a data panel to reflect the leap in building a foundation and ascending to a golden elixir in the novel about cultivating immortals. But this book doesn't, it feels like it's just a level up. For another example, I saw Lei Fa's restrained description of ghosts in the novel. What's more, the damage is increased by an additional 10%! Control your loneliness! It feels like the author still hasn't set up the game framework of the entire novel carefully, and then wants to use the data panel to let readers intuitively see the abilities of characters and items. Therefore, it seems that the whole book still has many problems as a gamified novel about cultivating immortals, because one of the biggest pleasures for readers in reading this type of novel is to see the data panel of the various magic weapons and flying sword skills in the protagonist's hand.

I feel like the author's writing is a bit confusing. It's not that the writing is messed up, it's that the mind is messed up.

This is an online game novel about cultivating immortals in Shushan. If you like to watch online games, you can take a look. Not recommended if you want to see the Shushan type.

Wearing a waistcoat is not a problem. The problem is that wearing a waistcoat makes readers recognize it😜😜

After learning a bunch of skills and getting a bunch of junk magic weapons, I feel like this Wu-Tang Sect is so useless.

There's nothing wrong with writing a skill panel for free chapters. If you wait until it's on the shelves, someone will scold you.

The protagonist's methods are so complex 😟

I took this guy's two Great God's Lights, but he didn't even finish them all

I have read Chapter 63 so far. The subject matter is all good, but what are the methods of the Wu-Tang Clan? Is Wudang in Shushan so rubbish? There are no other methods, and the evil faction's methods are used to fight. Or is it too high for the protagonist to currently use?

What does Liu Ruyue mean by taking advantage of others' danger? Buy it with the longevity pill? Is there such a shortage of women?

As I write, I think from time to time, one woman after another, and I have sacrificed a lot for them.

Looking at the author's two books, both of them start quite amazingly. There is no problem with the three golden chapters. As long as the chapters are streamlined and the plot is promoted, the novels are expected to be excellent. However, the author ended up writing them into unfinished eunuch novels just for the sake of word count. It made me heartbroken.

It's very well written, but I'm short on time.

Game writing is just a carrier, needing new wine in old bottles, innovation and new ideas

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

Like a level-breaking game, everything is explained.