Your Cultivation of Immortality Is a Bit Too Extreme.

I am Shennong, and I am rated as grain and grass

In fact, you can write it in the style of Taoist Buddhism. The style you mentioned above is quite similar. The Gu world is not very pretty.

The protagonist has too few scenes. If it hadn't been for the first few chapters, I would have thought that the protagonists were the other two. As long as the three of them are together, there will be no protagonist.

1. Endanger the people of the Immortal Dynasty? Kill all the people of the Immortal Dynasty, and if there are no people, they will not be harmed; 2. Threaten the Han border? If the Han Dynasty is destroyed, the country will be subjugated and there will be no border troubles; 3 Demonic monk? The demonic path changed to the immortal path, and the demon became the deity. From then on, there were only immortal monks and not demonic monks.

1. I originally wanted to write about group portraits, but ended up not being able to write well enough to write a history (I will never write about group portraits again). So after chapter 38, the description of other people will be reduced, and the focus will be on portraying the protagonist. The tag of group portraits will also be removed (Xuanjian Immortal Clan is too strong), and the content before chapter 38 will be slowly revised. 2. Not extreme enough and too few evil methods. I didn't think carefully and wrote the law enforcement in the world of immortality too well. The extreme and evil plots are all in the copy. You can also mention some evil ways of playing and I will write them into the plot. Thank you very much for reading and wish you a happy life.

The writing of this Gu world is so messy and not good to read 😅

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It's a bit lacking in style. The writing of Xianxia is just like everyday life. It's not crazy enough, nor crazy enough. It almost completely uses the modern system to describe Xianxia. There are too many elements that are confusing.

It's not extreme enough or epileptic enough. You said it was a group portrait, but there is no epileptic seizure at the same time. The protagonist still feels a little evil, but the role of the protagonist is too few, which makes it look weird. In addition, it is recommended to write less emotional dramas. This kind of thing should not appear in epileptic novels. The purpose of reading is to get mad, not to watch a group of people snatching husbands.

Well, I'm halfway through Chapter 2 and I can't stand it anymore. Firstly, it's because of the issue of nouns between ancient times and modern times, which is quite outrageous. I don't know if it's just me. It's hard to say. If you want to read it, you can check it out for yourself. Secondly, the ancient background is from the Han Dynasty. I remember that a certain character in Chapter 2 wasted several months of vacation on a case? Where did this come from? If that's the case. How could such an institution still be opened? The holidays in the Han Dynasty were called Xiu Mu, which lasted every five days. Others were just a few days off for specific festivals in ancient times. There were really no others. The several-month holiday you said is too outrageous. You are not the boss of the organization. Where did you get this kind of thing? And what kind of Han Dynasty task force was there to collect orphans? I don't know how to do this. During the Han Dynasty, because Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty came to power and fought in the north and south, there was an extreme shortage of supplies in the country. Where did he have the spare time to adopt orphans and form a secret organization? Even if there was one, it was the Jinwu Guards who protected the emperor. How could it be like this? Well, at most, this kind of organization is to open competitions and select combat power from the beginning. Anyway, I have never seen other fictional historical novels that do this kind of thing. The operation, and the sacrifice at the beginning of the game, coupled with the operation of generating characters, is too cliché. I remember it seemed to be there the year before the year before last, but I have long been tired of seeing this kind of thing, and now I can only say that no one likes it. When I read this kind of plot in another novel, everyone on the floor said that it is too cliche. I wrote this paragraph just to create a plot point. After reading it once or twice, it is much better, but I am very impatient.

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I feel good after reading the introduction, but 110,000 words is too little. I won't be able to read at least 200 chapters in one day. I hope I can read this book again in a few months.

There is so much written about love and love, but so few protagonist roles.

I saw about ten pictures. The sewing is a bit tricky😨. All I can say is work hard and slowly write your own stuff.

Well, the reading experience is not bad. Come on~

The stitch monster has too many stitches and it's a bit of a show.

The first chapter was okay at the beginning, but then it started to throw out all the content at once, and the protagonist started writing other characters before his own character was established. I suggest you watch Speed ​​Run to Immortality! You can learn from this. You two are almost the same in nature.

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