Who Asked Him to Sell Swords!

This book is well written, you can read it

This book contains elements: Monk Tate's Codex. Blackman Money Making Machine. A running away dad and a gambling mom. Kite reported that the robot manufacturer held Yinhui items. After eating the friendship bond breaking fist and taking drugs to survive, he learned to immediately try to directly pacify the opponent's mini-boss.

The protagonist is from the logistics sect (alchemy, weapon refining and various manufacturing). After going to the border with experience, he was not welcomed and discriminated against in the border guards, and was even thrown into being an undercover agent The Hehuan sect went to the border and was coaxed and greeted with a smile like his ancestors I have never heard that those in charge of logistics in any combat unit will be discriminated against and disliked.

I collected it a few days ago, and I stayed up late to read it today while I had nothing to do. It was very joyful, I could see the shadow of the crow, and even mentioned Lao Lu. A few small suggestions (only personal opinions): typos, repeated words, and often no punctuation at the end of sentences. I think these three need to be changed. The author used AI to check for typos before posting. It will be better before posting. Because I like to read every word carefully, so I will be very surprised when I see it. Hmm... I have to complain about using a period as an ellipsis. It's not good to use periods as ellipsis throughout the article. I think since it is my favorite work, I should mention the standardization of writing. If you like "...", You can delete half of the ellipsis. This paragraph looks neater. Multiple "..." In a row is too messy to read on the mobile phone. There is also the issue of plot. This is not a suggestion, it is my own reading experience, so don't worry about it. After returning from the first outing, the plots in the unit episodes were a little less gripping, and they were not strictly unit episodes. The plots were a bit weak, and the long dialogues seemed tiring. Of course, when Crow was writing it, there were also large sections of dialogue, and I was jumping to read it when I was reading it. But it looks great! That's what unit dramas are like. It's hard to ensure that every segment is interesting. It's too difficult. Finally, hurry up and put it on the shelves for updates. I hope the author will have good results!

The blackest crow, identified

There is a very accurate evaluation of the blackest crow. I feel that it is good to fill in my own content according to the crow's framework.

It's well written. If it doesn't collapse later, it has the potential to break out of the industry. Good luck, author.

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I have no sense of empathy for bitches, but I can watch that m

Is there a female protagonist 🙂

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