Your Panel Is Quite Dark.

What a familiar skill, false memory, you are your wife's brother, look, this is a photo taken of you and your brother and sister together. And I am your wife's husband, look, I am kissing my own wife😌

Druid is good. Druid, come here quickly, I have delicious food here.

Advance loan time? Wow, you can watch this from Slay the Spire.

Why is the protagonist's name so confusing?

🎬 Plot: From this point of view, the quality cannot be seen yet. 🎭 Character design: The character design is stable and has no outstanding features. ✒️Writing: quite smooth

So far, it seems that the author has mastered one of the essences of mystery, which is tailor-made. But unlike Squid's design of the Fool's path for Klein, the author chose to tailor the protagonist's skill panel for the advancement of the main line. Every skill learned by the protagonist in the early stage plays a key role in the later stage, not only resolving the immediate crisis, but also pulling out the subsequent plot clues. The overall structure can be regarded as interlocking. How the follow-up performance will be depends on how the author unfolds it, but at least the outline of the first volume has echoed back and forth. Note: The mention of Mystery does not mean that the author is learning it, but that I happened to have read Mystery as a successful online article and used it as an example.

Small boutique, if you don't watch it, you can gain popularity. It's like the reincarnation of an old guy, but if you're a newcomer, it feels like it's a bit difficult to be a supervisor.

Well written, it's food. The author's own thinking needs to be improved. From the various plot developments and settings in this book, it can be seen that the author's own thinking is immature. A very simple truth is that when writing a novel, you need to create a world view. Everything in the novel needs to be set within the framework of the big world view, which is a psychological model of the character that fits the background of the times and environmental experience. The author is quite negligent in this aspect, and the setting of the characters is very out of touch, which makes the reading feel jerky. Many plots seem to be pushed forward on purpose, and many characters seem to be deliberately reciting their lines. This is a sense of rawness.

When adaptive talents are adjusted to the highest value of all talents, is it the conceptual highest value of all talents or your own highest value?

It's a small masterpiece. It's a pity that what you wrote is a Western fantasy, so the results may not be good.

It looks good. It should be interesting to see the protagonist interact with various mechanical monsters.

I only have one question, is the protagonist not human?

I won't read it if it's too big 😏😄

But there are some problems in the mid-term. Let's see if we can maintain the level.

It feels like Slay the Spire. Fighting parasites is like hitting the zone.

Very beautiful. I watched it in the middle of the night.

It turns out it's attribute skill copying. I thought everyone had a panel.

The main character's name sounds like Deyun, I can't stand it anymore

Collecting monsters? What did you write?

While watching it, I felt very similar

Isn't that too little? This point is completely inadequate. 😡😡

Listening to this name makes my head hurt!

How about the author changing "fighting spirit" to "fighting spirit", "strength" and "breath"?

It's okay, but it's too short, only 51 chapters, and I can't tell much.

Overall, it's okay. It's a book with potential. Just keep the pace and don't want eunuchs.

My favorite genre, I can still watch the plot.