Cyberpunk: Becoming a Legend, Starting in Dogtown

Sasha's body is directly destroyed and his soul is uploaded to serve as the protagonist's exclusive AI logistics. Lucy's body was directly decomposed and the skull's consciousness was uploaded as a servo skull. Rebecca erased her consciousness and transformed her whole body into a prosthetic body. She usually puts it in a suitcase and deploys it as a fighter servitor during battle.

Today I specially opened a new file and checked the date. Fans now have a misunderstanding, thinking that 2077 is a matter of 2077... Actually it is a matter of 2078. I'll list what I found. The first is the start of company V. Company V's own office computer has an attendance sheet. The earliest date scale on it is September 1, 2074, but the histogram shows that V joined the company in about March, and the last date of the scale is September 1, 2076. The subsequent histogram is about January 2077. Then after V was expelled, he hung out with Jack for half a year. After receiving a mission to rescue people in Japan Street with Jack, he returned home. There was a song ranking list on the computer at home. The latest news was June 12th, but there was a problem here. The stealing of goods from Kanbi Building was actually done a day or two after that. When I went to get the samurai sword from the roof of the Kanbi Building, I deciphered Saburo's diary and clearly marked that day as December 1, 2077... According to Saburo's diary, it was 2078 when V died and was taken to Lao Wei Na to recover for more than a month... So it was the first half of 2078 when V became active as the King of Hell.

Without the bad plot at the beginning, the score of this book could at least be doubled. In the first few dozen chapters, everyone ran away 🙂

I have read a lot of content in this book. I would like to share with you my thoughts and my humble opinions after reading it. Everyone can discuss it rationally. Without further ado, let's give a summary: The shortcomings and advantages are relatively obvious, so it cannot be called a masterpiece that can be widely praised, but it is indeed a good cyberpunk novel that is definitely worth reading. ① This book is very detailed in its research on the world view of 2077. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into collecting information on games and board games, which is worthy of praise ② This book is not just a simple read. It can be concluded that the author really wanted to write a "cyberpunk" flavor, and made a careful balance between saving tragedy and highlighting punk ③The author's subsequent characterization of the characters is very full, which is actually a very rare and scarce advantage in fan fiction. However, in my opinion, this book has several shortcomings. I hope that future readers can try to ignore it after reading it and see if the excitement of the following article can attract you. I hope the author can write more attractive content based on this. ①The author's writing style at the beginning lacks consideration, or is inexperienced. Whether you should hold back your favorite characters in the face of life or death can be said to be an ancient poison (laughs). I believe that this part of the plot will definitely have a very bad impact on the performance of the work. I also read the author's explanation of this part of the plot, but I personally think that even if this plot trend continues, it can still be compensated for by writing techniques. If the protagonist does something negative, based on my reading experience, don't let the protagonist defend himself in the article, and the author shouldn't use popular science settings in the comments. In fact, it is the best choice for you to scold along with the readers (laughs), even if you arrange a plot where the characters in the article evaluate the protagonist's behavior (such as Hanz) and scold him SB. ②The main plot line is too compact. Every time I think I can finally get into the branch line, I can find that it is the fuse of the main line. This writing technique makes me feel a little uncomfortable. I just felt like both the protagonist and the reader needed space to breathe. I don't mean that you have to leave a long period of time for the protagonist to deal with small incidents or commissions to relax (of course the plot allows, that's not bad). Let's write more detailed descriptions of getting along with certain characters. It can be seen that the author is actually very good at writing these. My evaluation is "Watch and write more." I understand that the author wants to show the protagonist's powerlessness during this period of constant struggle and being repeatedly teased by fate, but sometimes what I feel is a chaotic feeling that the protagonist is too busy to finish things. ③The author's writing order made my brain shut down for a while. Especially when the protagonist is secretly pushed by Yorinobu and rebels against Arasaka, the timeline is sometimes here and sometimes there, which really gave me a headache. You really like to play reverse order, but if it happens so frequently in the future, can you add a time and place, such as 7:30 PM on May 16, 2076, in the company square. Spare my brain (crying). In short, I wish this book will become smoother and better as it gets written.

Fortunately, the author writes about cyberpunk, otherwise he would be really popular.

I picked it up again and read it again. I still feel that the main plot is too tight and overwhelming, and the follow-up is not very refreshing. However, the branch plots, emotions and daily life are well written. If the author can balance the main plot and branch plots well, and strengthen the excitement, then it will be much more comfortable to read.

Removing the role of Emma doesn't seem to have any impact

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