The Mage Lord's Industrial Revolution

In this extraordinary world, instead of focusing on improving your strength and protecting yourself, you go wherever danger lurks, engaging in research that doesn't actually enhance your abilities. You don't use your earnings to buy weapons and resources to improve the lives of ordinary people; you never mention making money to improve yourself.

The writing is alright, but the plot holes are too outrageous. At first, they said they had no money, but then they gave a commoner 50 gold pounds, enough for him to work for 20 years without eating or drinking. I thought it was because the cost of the undead was lower, but the key point is that you need money to buy corpses, and if labor costs are so low, why force the undead to work? Why not hire people first to expand the business, and then use the profits for research? It's really strange.

This is insane! Trying to achieve equality without decades of ideological education will only result in a bandit stronghold, let alone the distribution of guns.

This is a classic case of touting the absence of cheat codes, only to fail to develop properly, excessively giving the protagonist cheats while making others seem less intelligent.

I really can't stand it anymore! Does the protagonist really enjoy dancing on a tightrope? Any one of those things could kill him instantly; it's so unsafe! The protagonist is just a pretty face the whole time, easily broken. If it weren't for the protagonist's halo, he'd be buried a few stories high by now. Every time he survives a near-death experience, he mutters, "Is it because I'm a transmigrator?" And then ignores it, only to do it again next time. Okay, okay, 666

Why are 9 out of 10 stories about mages now focusing on necromancers? There are so many mages with different builds, it seems everyone's biased towards necromancers. I don't understand.

Transmigrating to another world and relying on the idea of ​​equality for all, especially in a chaotic era of a high-martial-arts world, where the behavior logic is completely contradictory—murder and arson in peacetime, charity in wartime—is utterly insane. And then there's the mass production of pure energy weapons as standard equipment for refugees.

The writing is disjointed and incoherent, making it a painful read. It's like the story isn't even finished, and then suddenly it just stops and jumps to the next chapter, like chapters 89 and 101. I was reading happily when suddenly it ended. Are you toxic? Don't you find it frustrating?

The wizarding world is really weak. If you put a legendary wizard in other wizarding novels, his strength would probably be around level 2. I don't understand. In other wizarding novels, the fifth-circle wizards are already invading other worlds and waging interdimensional wars solo, but the high-level wizards in your book are just throwing arcane spears from high above. It's incredibly pathetic.

Here's a small suggestion for the author: include more scenes involving internet meetings. The protagonist's personal adventure and farming storyline is really weak.