A Full-Level Mortal, Cultivating the Sun in the World of Immortality

The plot is terrible and has nothing to do with the introduction. It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away. The idea of ​​developing modern technology in the world of cultivation is very good. But the plot is too draggy, with too many irrelevant plot points and too little scientific research. As a viewer, I tell you, those who like to watch plots don't like to watch scientific research. People who come here to read scientific research don't like to watch plots! Don't take care of both. If you can't take care of both, everyone will run away. Whoever wants to listen to the grinding and chirping 😂 Heart-wrenching plots are the natural enemies of technological immortality. You can change the introduction. Those who come in through the introduction want to see the development process of the male protagonist, and you are good at torturing him first. Okay, everyone ran away

It's neither fish nor fowl, just read more about Immortality or Thirty Thousand Years of Cultivation and then think about how to write about the combination of immortality and technology. You are not industrialized at all, not even a small workshop, you are purely a personal craft enthusiast. And you are trying to save others by yourself. You have not imagined the thinking logic of an immortal in the world of cultivation at all. You are just imagining that "the emperor also uses a golden hoe" with the thinking of a century-old person... Go and watch some documentaries from the 1960s to the 1980s to see in your mind how much the traditional feudal elders played in their youth and how colorful their lives were. A society of immortals with a stable room for improvement must not be fixed, because this group of people with more lives will bring more time for thinking and answers to the society and the world where they live. In order to pass on the martial arts of the older generation, even foreigners can teach them. Do you think this will remain unchanged? What's more, a group of immortals?

Introduction to fraud, behind pure and old-fashioned cultivator

Currently still cultivating immortality, not yet established foundation As of Chapter 44, hand-made hidden weapons, natural extraction of cyanide Conclusion: The technical level has not reached the actual technology, industrialization has not been carried out, the product promotion rate is 0, only the developers themselves use it

Are you, those who are cultivators of immortality, clinging to the past and remaining conservative?

In fact, when I saw this, I suddenly realized why the Confucianism in Jian Lai must be reasonable. The killing power of immortals is too great, and the lives of ordinary people are like ants. Just like the clear conscience of the protagonist before, I know that in the eyes of most people, the protagonist kills evildoers. Boss, you really should have a clear conscience, but don't forget, the guards and guards are the ones who died more. Are all those people really heinous? Are they really guilty of such a serious crime? None of them are ordinary guards who just go to work and don't do anything evil? Everyone has their own joys and sorrows. Among the dead guards, they are also the pillars of the family, and their families are also waiting for them to return. If any of them did not do anything evil, their deaths are so silent and sad. I am just sighing. They say that Chen Ping'an is very annoying to be reasonable and kills everyone. But as an ordinary person, do you hope to meet a reasonable immortal who will carefully examine your good and evil, or meet those protagonists who are decisive in killing?

Coal Day. Mourning poison. Fight with the air. You have to kill yourself to get revenge. Strategies are bullshit

Book quality: white The plot is dark before the eyes

This is the best novel about the industry of cultivating immortality that I recently read on Qidian. What the hell are the other books? If you can't cultivate immortality, you can't become an industry by cultivating immortality.

A bit like a child, wow Jin Danqi won't find out that I took my body and traveled across time, I'll be shocked and panicked at every turn

The author, if the protagonist establishes a sect system in the future, he can learn from the sect setting of the novel "Two Hundred Catties of Pork", it is very fair.

What can I say about this book? It feels very strange. It wants to go through industrialization versus traditional cultivation of immortality, but all the plots follow the routine of traditional cultivation of immortality. Industrialization is a golden finger, and the temperament is neither fish nor fowl. Gao Chao can't go up.

I feel like the introduction should be changed 😃 It's not good, he is reciting poetry, please tear his mouth apart

Is the character too fragmented? While portraying the protagonist who is very scheming and has many hidden cards, at the same time letting the unknown truth fall into someone else's game? ? ? If you want to create a hot-blooded male protagonist, you should write it in plain language. If you want to create a male protagonist who is sinister behind the scenes, don't write it in a moody way. Just give it to the brothers to play with. To be honest, it took you a long time to write the background, and you hid it all in the blink of an eye. The trump card was all based on your words, but you inexplicably created a whirlpool and put pressure on Laizhang. Com. It's really a mess.

I understand. It took me a long time to write "Cultivation to Immortality", but the core is still the same as the underworld.

When you enter the sect, you know someone has a problem, but you just don't report it. Goodbye.

It feels like you have to save up for a while to read this type of novel. I don't know how long it will take to wait for revenge.

Cultivation and industry are linked together. It's a good idea, but I don't know how much the author has in his stomach to last a million words.

No, updates will be stopped as soon as they are released. You are cheating on your feelings 😒

Change the first chapter, this is even more disgusting than a brainless studio where novices pick their feet... No wonder there are only 70 comments. For veterans, look at the number of comments, and for newbies, look at the monthly tickets

The stakes in this blood pact bet don't seem to be equal? If he wins, he can take away a lot of things, but if he loses, he only needs to take out 200,000 low-grade spiritual stones?

It's very simple. I just read books.

I hope the author's performance will get better and better

Progress of the protagonist's immortality industry: Create a second-level puppet armor (completed), with combat power comparable to the top fake alchemy cultivation. Yellow Explosives (Completed.), Artificial Intelligence Weapon Spirit (Completed), Batch Standardized Refining Magical Artifacts (Completed), Industrial Products Sales Chamber of Commerce (Completed), Self-Tracking Thunderbolt Flying Sword (Completed.), High Speed-of-fire spiritual stone cannon (completed.), Twin floating cannons (completed.), Laser magic weapon, gunpowder magic weapon, special magic weapon... Cultivation level: 11th level of the basic skills of the righteous way, 12th level of the basic skills of the magic way. Equipment: Divine Weapon - Tianhe Sword Super-grade magic weapon - three-point return shield, modified, cross spirit refining (defensive power exceeds ordinary magic weapons). Super-grade magic weapon - Fire Cloud Flying Sword, modified, cross spirit refining (defense is higher than ordinary magic weapon flying sword) Super-grade magic weapon - Soul Card Super-grade magic weapon - Warren Sky Crossbow Super-grade magic weapon - Sword-raising Gourd Talisman - Purple Light Kirin Armor Immortal ultimate move: Five Reverse Death Veins Sword (under perfection)

I thought it was to study the essence of spiritual energy, all the way to the innate five elements, chaos, and then use the essence of power to change the body, and study the core principles of law.

If the world of cultivators really wants to modernize, it must first have an explosion of productivity, so that mortals can also participate in the production of monks, and there must be a certain proportion of mortals. Being able to master a type of technology or weapon that can be a deterrent when the monks and monks die together and destroy each other, and then there is a way to allow everyone to practice a little bit, and try to bring everyone to the level of the immortal cultivator.

I just hope it doesn't happen in the end. Going to the other extreme, the protagonist becomes a dictator, but to be honest, in the chaotic and almost anarchic state of the immortal profession, even if the protagonist becomes the king and hegemony, it is considered an improvement.

Come on, come on, I want to see blood flowing like a river

The author, the world is full of spiritual energy (life-like energy) - spiritual energy, creating spiritual nets, and the heaven and earth nets connect the entire world of immortality - the civilization of immortality has reached its peak - yearning for the high sky.

I feel like your updates are a bit slow.