Immortal Emperor

The stand-in setting is weird, and the Holy Land substitute test is even weirder. If you don't even dare to participate in the trial, then what's the use? Just be a pig and stop practicing martial arts. And the protagonist is considered a family member, right? Do other substitutes count? Have no idea. But there are very few people who treat having children at home as consumables. Then who would work for his family?

Although I have only read ten chapters, I feel that the character of the protagonist is wrong. As a stand-in, especially a stand-in for an important person, you must have a careful mind. This kind of work is very important for your xinxing. In other words, you must be calm during big events, but what about the protagonist? Whether it's planning or getting an opportunity, it feels like a villain's success, and there is no wisdom. I think that people who work as agents or stand-ins are definitely not this kind of people. People who have to take care of every expression and unconscious mental movements one by one, but If you are the protagonist, no matter how happy you are, you should be indifferent to emotions and anger. Especially depending on the context of your plot, things like machinations will definitely be involved next. I feel that the character of your protagonist is not something that can be played with, and it may be that your writing style cannot be used.

The cultivation system is too confusing. I keep mentioning it without spending any space on it. It's confusing.

It's outrageous. The first chapter introduces the situation of the protagonist, a stand-in who is poorly paid for taking the exam. A martial artist can use an arrow to shoot a stand-in for a young master. Who would do this job when the treatment is so poor? People who support death have to treat people and their families well. Huang Silang's substitute was one that no one dared to bully except Huang Silang. According to the martial arts examiner at the end, he also enjoyed a lot of blessings.

Sister-in-law of the Xu family

Don't open a harem, this thing is now badly written, there will be either no heroine or only one heroine.

What this grandpa wrote is the same as NPC

I finished watching it, it looks good, it doesn't look like a newcomer 🙂, I don't know which father-in-law left the palace

Why do so many slaves, serfs, and slaves start the game, but it is so difficult for ordinary people to start the game 😅😅😅

Update soon, I want to watch the killing spree, and I want to watch the blood flowing like a river