From Wasteland Comics to the Real World

Regarding the ancient Greek numerals used for power level numbers, I think Arabic numerals should be more appropriate. After all, although there should be no one who doesn't know ancient Greek numerals, they are rarely used. Just like I haven't been exposed to ancient Greek numerals for more than ten years, I forgot when I learned them. . I could barely recognize it, and when I remembered that these things were ancient Greek numerals, I felt that my memory was pretty good. But it still seems a bit strenuous, I have completely lost the memory of an old person. Jpg

Seeing the second time travel was a bit disappointing. The real world also has super powers. I thought the characters in the comics were the only ones who came to reality. Then slowly, the spirit of the real world revived.

There is no obvious poisonous point I think the reason why the book is not popular Maybe it is because it is not exciting enough It is not exciting. The protagonist has been experiencing crises The pace has been tight.

I looked back a little further (of course I still haven't finished it). If the protagonist looked at the woman when he traveled through time for the first time, it is obvious that the time he traveled through is not fixed in another world. Assuming that the time of the first time traveling is 2021 in the world where the comics are published, then it is possible that the second time traveling through At that time (the second time for the protagonist), it might be 2020, and the time between him and her is misaligned, which leads to an interesting possibility. She can tell him in advance what will happen after learning from him in the future. So at this time, will the future change again? So should he who told her about the future not exist? Or the result is already fixed, which forms a closed loop. He will definitely tell her and she will definitely tell it to him in the past. Of course, there would be no apocalyptic writing if written like this, so I feel that it is unlikely to write like this, so here we are discussing an if, a possibility.

I haven't read much yet, only the first few chapters, but I think this prophecy ability appears at the same time as the protagonist sees the plot of the comic. So, does prophecy mean that he can understand that he is a comic character and at the same time be able to climb over the wall and read the plot of the comic? If you think about it in such a divergent way, this ability may not be a prophecy, but the ability to climb over walls. Of course, I may be overthinking it. I just think that the protagonist's awakening of this ability happens at the same time as reading the comic plot, so I think it is very possible. Of course, if I am overthinking, forget it, maybe it is just the protagonist's golden finger. But if there are people who have this ability in the past, can they talk to people who have this ability in the future through the medium of comics? It's interesting to think about it hhh. All in all, I think this novel is acceptable after reading a few chapters. At least the writing is not bad and the setting is quite attractive to me. I just don't understand why it is not very popular. I hope the author can stick to it.

It's pretty good, please keep going!

Another point is that the title and introduction of the book are 200,000 words which doesn't reflect much...

The pace is too slow. The same goes for the progression of the plot, there is no so-called climax point, the plot is basically smooth throughout. It's really no wonder that it can't keep people. If I wasn't really looking forward to what comes next, plus the setting and character feel, otherwise I really wouldn't want to watch this kind of seedling.

It's quite nice. It would be nice if there were fewer typos and obscure words, and more updates would be needed.

Fast forward 2 years have passed. At that time, I only followed (Return) and a work by a certain Mao Ni. Of course, both works are my favorite genres, but at the time I felt it was unfair for (Return). Compared with the brainless villains and the Honkai system in Xiao Huohuo's plot, (Return) is much better than it (before Ascension). There is also a new system, at least the villain is normal. Why is it not popular? Later, a certain drama was finished, and (Return) was discontinued. From that time on, I stopped reading novels. Until recently, I wanted to read something and found you by chance. I don't know why I changed my waistcoat (you feel guilty, I guess). Anyway, I am looking forward to your new works. I will continue to subscribe. I hope to accompany you on this journey.