The Era of Star Martial Arts

Suddenly I saw that this was an author that I had criticized. It must have been many, many, many years ago, when I was updating King of Creation. In the comment area on the computer, I angrily complained about the author's pretentious and slap-in-the-face plot, and then the author swore that every word was written with painstaking effort. Then I criticized the author for the part about slapping my mother, no matter how perfunctory it was, how it was done in a routine, how it was different if I changed the routine. Then he ran away like a thief without reading the reply and choked up. Of course the author also slapped me in the face, because I was young and energetic at that time, and said that the author would definitely not get a good contract if he wrote this kind of routine, or something. The author replied that I just got the S sign hahahahaha

I met a 30-year-old young woman on the Internet. We have been chatting very well for more than half a year. Today she asked to meet. I hesitated. I said you have a family and it didn't feel good, but she said it was okay and we were just ordinary friends. I agreed and asked her for a photo. She looked pretty. She is not far from my city. I We made an appointment to meet at a milk tea shop. We did not choose to go somewhere else for fear of meeting an acquaintance. I arrived first that day because she had to drive for several hours. While waiting, I looked at the photos and thought it was another "car rollover scene." Most mobile phones have a beauty function, but when she got out of that Mercedes-Benz, I recognized her at a glance. She is much prettier than in the photo, and she is also my favorite type. She also recognized me and didn't know what to say. In order to break the awkwardness, she suggested a hug. I said yes. She smelled very good. I jumped and sat in the milk tea shop for a while. We went to eat. She basically didn't eat much. The whole process was... After peeling shrimps and picking fish bones for me, after finishing the meal, she held my hand when we walked out of the restaurant, and I didn't break away. She said she would take me home. I said I would take a taxi back, but she insisted on taking me back. When I got home, I found that she had put a note in her bag, which said: Update ten chapters to unlock subsequent content.

The writing was good in the past, but the writing has become worse and worse recently. If the first two hundred chapters had a score of 7, these 100 chapters would only have a score of 3. The plot is getting more and more intellectual. With the protagonist's obvious cultivation and combat prowess, the enemy couldn't guess that the protagonist was not dead? The intelligence officers of the three major star palaces are all blind, right? If you don't understand what it means to kill enemies across three realms in the enemy's territory, it seems that your brain has been damaged. Even if you use your brain with the help of foreign objects, you can think of having such strength to obtain the bright star easily The improvement in the protagonist's strength is too exaggerated. According to this speed, the protagonist will probably reach the top within one year of training since his debut. Moreover, the protagonist is a training accelerator, right? As long as the people related to the protagonist basically rise in speed. The combat power system collapsed. In other novels, it is normal for the protagonist to cross several small realms and kill people, but it is rare to cross one large realm. For me, the protagonist crosses three. To be honest, this is really too much. Moreover, everyone related to the protagonist can basically kill people across a large realm. How come only the realms of the people around your protagonist are real, and the realms of everyone else are fake, right? The plot is terrible. I don't know why the author insists on putting a drag bottle next to the protagonist. It will not help the protagonist, but will consume the protagonist's resources, distract the protagonist from taking care of her, and risk exposing that the protagonist is not dead. As for the reason why he is afraid that the protagonist will run away with another woman, I don't know what kind of brain the national teacher used to come up with it. The part of "The Escape of the Golden Cicada" was poorly written. An elder did not kill the protagonist with his own hands but firmly believed that the protagonist was dead. I had no doubts at all. This was something I didn't expect. It seemed that the two sides were not mortal enemies, but just playing house. The enemy intelligence system was written so well before that the protagonist knew it immediately as soon as he came out of the monastery, but now he does not monitor the people related to the protagonist. This is too obvious. The plot repeats. Since the protagonist can now kill people across three major realms, his peers must not be able to take notice of him. Now he is basically practicing, entering the star field, practicing, entering the star field... Emotional scenes pull the crotch. A lot of the emotions are written inexplicably. I can kind of figure it out. As long as it's a random person and good-looking person, as long as he has a crush on the protagonist, the protagonist will accept it.

It is a general fantasy novel. The advantage is that although the traditional routine of killing monsters and upgrading is clichéd, it is still timeless. The settings and combat power of Goldfinger are more enjoyable. However, shortcomings cannot be written about people, nor contradictions. It is still at the level of fantasy novels 10 years ago, using intelligence to promote the development of the story. The setting is like a tool man. It is introduced first, then written if it is useful, and thrown away if it is not useful. The plot is also very fragmented. For example, winning the battle of the building tribute is just a separate event. The battle of the building memorial was very important at the beginning, but the end means that the whole event is gone; the alliance with the Cangxing Palace is united, but it is just an explanation of such a thing, and the subsequent plot will be as it is; There is a serious mismatch between combat power and realm. It was understandable at low levels, but at high levels, you either have to speed up the upgrade or arrange your opponents reasonably. Now it feels very inconsistent. Moreover, the protagonist's combat power fluctuates up and down. The previous description gives people the impression that level 5 can compete with level 8. Later, level 5 will directly fight level 6 for so many things. Both the enemy and our own people are too smart. The emperor is too smart, Tianyang Xingjun is smart, and the national teacher is also smart. Whether it is personal power or ordinary social times, the emperor's basic quality is to judge the situation and judge the situation? Wei Li, you can't be a national teacher, your organizational skills are not good, and you still jump. Tianyang Xingjun brings wisdom, usually the villain template of fantasy novels, giving the protagonist monsters. The national master's wisdom has balanced the high-end combat power, but the opponent still dares to use off-board tactics to gain his own core interests; the emperor has been killed, and there are still people from Tianyang Star Palace in the territory? Isn't this funny?

I feel that the protagonist's advancement is the same as his whole family's death. He can improve his realm, but he doesn't mention it. He has to play low and high. I understand that you have to accumulate and lay the foundation, but is there something wrong with pressing so hard? Don't talk about being invincible under the stars, just don't mention your realm

An extraordinary person who has mastered five skills cannot defeat five street gangsters who have not practiced.

How could a good book not have idioms in its comments? I'll go first.

Level 8 slaughters the city in anger without any scruples. Under such rules, this kind of world has long ceased to exist. It can still be passed down to this day. The author has no world view, just a child's view of playing house.

I have only read 8 words in this novel: Those who follow me will prosper, and those who follow me will perish. It satisfies all the elements required by male porn, such as pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, showing off as a saint in front of others, opening a harem and enjoying the happiness of everyone (all women are good to me and live in harmony with each other). Everyone else is a tool, giving resources and equipment, good people give it directly, evil people are killed for doing evil, and the rewards of evil are cleverly given to the protagonist, but the protagonist is not involved in cause and effect. In the beginning, the protagonist even controls the people of the Blood God Cult to collect the beads obtained by the blood refiners of the Blood God Cult for cultivation. There is a saying that there is no trading, no killing.

Then Zuiyue disgusted me as soon as she appeared. Old authors like to write this kind of character. He has a prominent family background, beautiful appearance, and is unruly and willful. Even after losing to the protagonist in a duel, he still refuses to admit defeat and keeps messing around. It's like those people saying 'I know I'm being unreasonable, but you're a grown man and can't you just let me go'. In my opinion, the protagonist should use the most powerful and ruthless means to defeat her. But the old author would definitely not write it like this. If nothing else, this woman should still be one of the protagonist's harem. I would like to ask, do any readers really like this kind of character? I really hate this kind of character.