The Xi Huang of Honghuang

The name Fuxi is useless. It doesn't convey the spirit of Fuxi at all.

After reading eight chapters, the protagonist received 10 yuan from a kind person, looked down upon other people's charity, and threw away 7 yuan. As a result, he was temporarily unable to make money, and wanted to get back the 7 yuan he threw away. However, the 7 yuan was picked up by several people. As a result, the protagonist was treated as a pig by the few people who picked up the 7 yuan (without the halo of the protagonist).

No wonder I'm still at lv2. I feel like I'm no longer a novice, but I still can't finish it. Author, you have written so many books. Have you ever summarized how to get more people to read your books?

The title of the book and the naming will ruin you. Change the name of the prehistoric world to other world names, such as Dahuang, Zicheng, etc., And then change Fuxi to Zhang San and Li Si. Anyway, you are all original, why bother to use this shell of the prehistoric world? Don't want immortals, gods, demons, the Three Pure Ones, etc. There are a lot of original characters, just like the ancient times, neither fish nor fowl. Also, don't write such a cool chapter in the first chapter. What about innate gods and demons, about taking the essence and blood of hundreds of tribes, killing four ferocious beasts, switching to another path, and calculating the secrets of heaven. But after reading the comments, I found out that you are still just a golden immortal. The path of Pure Yang is not easy to practice. You change paths inexplicably. You abandon the identity of the Dragon Ancestor at the beginning. After calculating for a long time, you find that you can't abandon it. Then what do you think? Then he licks his face and wants to use the luck of the Dragon Clan to cultivate immortality. He will not abandon the pure Yang origin, nor can he abandon the Dragon Ancestor origin. He also relies on other people's luck. Are you trying to understand the cause and effect, or are you trying to increase the cause and effect? ​​How can you find other paths to replace the gods and demons? You can practice other things, but the source must still be pure Yang

The author has written so many books, but still doesn't he understand the poisonous point of having too many female supporting characters? Especially the evil points of accepting a female apprentice, having an affair with a female supporting character, helping her become stronger, and delivering treasures to her, don't you understand? Without these, many people will definitely read it, but the author will always have these poisons, and the readers will be poisoned by these female supporting characters.

Your writing has fallen into a bottomless abyss now. First, if you want to change the protagonist, there will be no sense of substitution. You are not that kind of writing about native people yet. You might as well just write about rebirth. Second, you are decisive and like a holy mother in not killing. There is no way to write about the prehistoric world and just to seek the truth. Third, the book you wrote is not like a novel at all. It is like an outline and a setting. It has no passion, no excitement, and is ordinary. In fact, in the prehistoric novel where thousands of people are fighting, there are so many things that can be written, how much passion can be written, but no author can write that feeling.

Just from this introduction, I know that it is rubbish, and the pattern is not high. The ethnic groups in the prehistoric era are definitely more than trillions, trillions, trillions. This good guy has hundreds of tribes. There are two thousand ethnic groups on the earth, let alone the mythical world.

The difficulty of Nuwa's conclusion is 1, and the protagonist is 100

I really like reading your prehistoric articles, keep up the good work👏

I can't understand more and more what the author is writing