The Way of the Spirit Treasures in Honghuang

Although the writing is good, the setting is too chaotic. The protagonist is given all sorts of good things, but he basically never uses them! Also, the protagonist learns a little bit of this and a little bit of that. He praises everything he learns as incredibly powerful, but it's too scattered. What is his own path? Is it all the good paths and the manifestations of powerful beings?

And then, the protagonist actually showed a sliver of goodwill, revealing his fundamental Daoist secrets. He gave the Phoenix Princess a superior Daoist aura, which is practically the same as directly telling the Phoenix Mother what the difference is! With the Phoenix Mother's top-tier innate divine insight, she could easily analyze the approximate function of the protagonist's *Huang Ting Jing*.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a good prehistoric fantasy novel. I'm tired of those supernatural prehistoric fantasy novels that give me the feeling that everything is predetermined and they all have the same setting, which is not interesting. This kind of prehistoric fantasy novel where everything is uncertain is much better.

Chapter Two says he's almost at the late stage of the Celestial God realm, while Chapter Six says he's cultivated for three hundred years and just reached the mid-stage of the Celestial God realm.

Well, to put it simply, the author gives the protagonist all sorts of good things, but they all feel mixed and lack depth. He also seems reluctant to use the power of the three Great Dao Aspects. I don't quite understand this mentality. Intelligent beings are adept at using external things; these are all your own powers, unlike the Great Dao of Tianming, which has an extremely strong corrosive…

The writing is excellent, but the logic is a complete mess, making the whole book unreadable. A few points to criticize: 1. After Tianming met the protagonist, he obtained the information he wanted about the Demon Realm, saying he would become a Great Luo Immortal in ten Yuanhui (a unit of time).

Isn't Lingbao a Daoist title that connects to the heavens? And what about Shangqing Lingbao Tianzun, Yuqing Yuanshi Tianzun, and Taiqing Daode Tianzun? Wouldn't writing them like this be contradictory?

I clearly understood it, but I still don't get it. Calling it obscure and difficult to understand isn't quite right; it's more like chaotic and disordered. It can't explain anything clearly, and it tries to include everything. The author seems to be using a style they consider sophisticated or showing off their writing, but they can't quite articulate it. Even the things they themselves set up are now written in a jumbled mess.

I regret investing. The protagonist feels like he's just handing out opportunities to others. Let me put it this way: no matter how much you write, you'll never become popular. Readers are projecting their own characters onto the protagonist; are they really reading about him as someone who gives away opportunities? It got a little better later on, but from the very beginning, it was just awful. I invested too early and didn't realize this.

It's written too messily, and I don't even have the intention to pave the way. I don't understand.