I Was a Swordswoman Eight Hundred Years Ago

To be honest, the dual-perspective writing method is indeed unique, and the author's writing style and plot are also interesting. However, this kind of writing method that jumps back and forth between perspectives is not suitable for following reading. Every time the perspective jumps, it weakens the sense of substitution and enhances the sense of fragmentation. The two perspectives are smooth enough when taken alone, but I came in to read the transformation story, and it was really unacceptable to mix them together. 😅

The transformation part is pretty good, and the non-transformation part is also pretty good. But to be honest, when you combine the two, I don't want to see it at the moment.

If you want to write about transformation, you should write about transformation well. If you focus on both sides, the reading experience will be very poor. It's hard for everyone to agree, and writing like this makes me feel unpopular... I almost forgot about the previous copies. I only remember that a hole was opened in the female body's chest again, and the critical moment was gone...

It looks good. I like this kind of boyish transformation story, like Dugu Feng.

There are too many stories about the male body. Can you write more about the female body?

As long as everyone gives a piece of love~ahhh~we will have a better tomorrow~!

The writing is good, and both the male and female plots are well written, but when you put them all together, they are different 😥. Is this a story about transformation, or a story about a male protagonist with elements of transformation? Author, can you answer a question for me? What will happen to the protagonist's male body in the end?

The book is good and I quite like it, but it doesn't suit the tastes of today's mainstream readers. . The book's changing nature, non-time travel, and slow popularity are destined to make it difficult for the book to become popular. I hope the author can persevere. . .

No wonder the plot of Fighting on the Street 😅 is interspersed without beginning or end.

Water, too watery. Especially in the front, what I'm looking at is the swordsman training or the high school campus. Can it be a little up and down?

Brother Fairy, I have never asked you for anything in my life, right?

When I saw Chapter 7, I had a problem. The author's perspective when describing the inner anger of the supporting characters was relatively small, but the writing was very heavy. It looked like it would never end, but later it became harmonious. Female author?

I have a question, it's very important. When squatting with a man's body, the woman's body is about to be humiliated by the flower picker. Can she feel it at this time? If it can be sensed, and the protagonist cuts to save the female body, the male body will fall into the pit and drown. At this time, how to choose? If you say you can go out first and then cut through, what about when the male body is fighting for life and death? You beg your opponent: Brother, let me take a nap first, then wake up and fight again?

The writing is very good, the writing style is also excellent, and it has a youthful and fairy atmosphere. This kind of twin plot has become very popular. The author should wait for the word count to come up.

Isn't it a bit rushed? In the last two chapters, a few people in the Secret Mansion suddenly received their lunch boxes before they had much characterization. It turned out to be what I thought: the heroine's journey as a young man who practiced Chen Tangshan's spells and practiced swordsmanship in Ashan, yelling about flying swords. The result is that various Riddlers are defeated. From the missing month in the introduction, it seems that the author should have made a similar outline in advance. But there are too many riddles and stories behind the characters that make it seem incoherent, similar to the story of the young adventures of Elder Huang You and Xu Yangzi. Also, I am not reading books, and I catch up on the latest chapters every day. I hope the author can work hard and don't give up easily.

But unfortunately, the plot line is too complicated and the text cannot be sorted out, making it a bit messy to read. If the writing and outline can be improved, it can actually be written very well.