I Will Attack in My Girlfriend Form

I don't know if the author came to Qidian to prove the Tao, but this subject matter cannot prove the Tao (no malice). Lily was not popular at Qidian to begin with, let alone become a hundred.

I came here from Tomato Moving and came here to eat it in one meal. It has fine grains again. A simple review is that it is really good. The writing style is still the same and the taste is original (Which little greedy cat has to eat it?)

A good standard urban pretentious face-slapping article, with the phrase "Bianbai" actually being the starting point?

Will we still see the follow-up of Zi Jing in our lifetime😭

Both pictures are created by Mr. Natsuki, I hope you all like them

Just two days after registering, with more than 10,000 words, I got a million rewards, which is amazing 👍

Still cute

Is the sex change Lily article on a male channel? Is this a problem?

Can you put the sex in the profile? Is it interesting to commit fraud?

Bianbai has always been a male channel at Qidian. There are quite a lot of Bianbai from Qidian to high-quality products. In ancient times, when Qidian was not severely punished, it was considered the base camp of Bianbai.

Xia Che's image

Female channel? , Lily must be

To be honest, I think most characters have to be a cancer. It would be better to make the protagonist a female from the beginning. In contrast, the beginning of this book is more likable if the readers are not deceived.

(Only expresses about 30 chapters) There are too many poisonous points after 30 chapters, and then there is the inexplicable setting of the previous book. Although fans may be very happy to read it at first, it is still boring after reading too much. It does not feel that the author is responsible for the book. It feels like a test product. I came here from the last book. I won't say more about the updates of the last book. After all, it is still a bit emotional and I can feel the author's enthusiasm for the previous book. But I feel that the old setting Why not improve the last book, instead of writing the same setting, making fans and readers look forward to the appearance of old characters, which takes too much patience, and either appears or does not appear, and the appearance of Qian Shui is inexplicable to those who have not seen the original work. The fans of the work are doomed to fail, and the number of fans who watch it will continue to decrease, or it will follow the old path of the previous work, with confusing plot in the later stage, character design collapse, and then ending hastily. Let's see if the mood updates? Except for the boss who is not short of money, let me put it bluntly, who dares to pay the bill? Or is it written like this novel, just for the boss to read?

I just can't stand the next door 🍍so many people are married and become talented people... At least the next door will write clearly in the introduction what type of novel it is.

I followed Xiaocha's book, and Chi Xiaocheng also read it. Xiao Cha's rhythm and emotions are very good throughout the whole process. You can feel that the author really likes Xiao Cha, and you will feel happy for Xiao Cha from the bottom of your heart if you watch it carefully. Chi Xiaocheng's early rhythm and explosive points are very eye-catching and tense. To be honest, I am a bit disappointed. This book seems a bit... Boring? There was no intense conflict and there wasn't much of an alluring sense of expectation. It wouldn't be wrong to say that Xia Che's character was weak, and it wouldn't be wrong to say that Xu Yiran was completely indifferent, but I just didn't find the characters of these two characters to be very attractive. In terms of plot, it always feels like there are very few twists and turns. It's hard to describe. Although I recall that Xia Che went back and reopened a little bit to find out the truth, it was a twist and turn, but it didn't give me a sense of urgency. The protagonist was passive but not completely dangerous, and the villain was active but lacked a sense of oppression. Maybe it's because I don't like reading this kind of article, it's not daily and I'm not nervous. Bianbaiwen had no audience at the beginning, and the backstory and double-crossing are not new, let alone the bad street. If it can't attract people, I will worry about the author. When can I continue writing Xiaocha if I can't make money?

I've only read the free chapter, so I won't comment on the plot. Let's talk about the settings, gender change, Lily, marriage change, oh, by the way, what does it mean if you change gender half way? Anyway, the benevolent sees benevolence and the wise see wisdom.

I have been reading these books in the past, but there has been no news. Are we reunited in this way? I am more or less an old fan

After reading Chapter 40, I can see that my friend is sick of stupidity, and there is almost no fun at all. How about trying to persuade readers to quit?

To be honest, I really like the setting of this book. If I expand it, I can write a very good work. There is no problem with the characters of Xiao Yiran and Xia Che. It can also be seen that the author is trying hard to write something different from the previous book, but the final result can only be said to be average. I don't know if the author will read the comments, so I will simply express my thoughts A lot of people are scolding me in the comment area. In fact, this book deserves to be scolded for being written like this. The overall impression this book gives me is that the author only wrote it carefully in the early stage, and even in the later stage, I don't know what is going on in the middle stage. For example, the scene where I still rescue Xia Che in the parking lot feels like I am trying very hard to express "I still feel sorry for the protagonist and want to save the protagonist", but the actual writing just feels like a running account and cannot arouse any interest. Do you want to say that the author has no strength? That's impossible. In my mind, Luomo_cc is the writer who has truly achieved the goal of breaking out of the circle of niche novels (turning into a sick girl). I got into the trap from the book next door, and I have been out of control since then. He is the author who has really made the "cake bigger". What's more, the author is not a new writer for a long time. Not to mention top-notch writing, he is also very good. So why is this happening? Maybe it's because you've written too many similar works and you're a bit "aesthetically tired"? Or are you saying that your grades are not good and you want to show off? Or are you trying too hard to cater to the market and losing your own style? Speaking of catering to the market, one thing that surprised me about this book is that there is an obvious... Attack on girls in one place? Slander? I really don't think a writer who can write Tao Cheng would vent his emotions in such a nonsensical manner. The only explanation I can think of is to "cater to the market" (I'm sorry, but I really forgot where it was, I only remember that it was only one or two sentences, but it was a very naked attack). Finally, as a person who was dragged into the Lily Pit by the author, let me say some nonsense that I don't know if anyone will see. I can feel that the author always wants to write something new, which is definitely no problem, but when writing new things, the core contained in it will never change, that is, the twisted but sincere and pure feelings between the two people. And if you want this core to be written brilliantly and movingly, you may have to give some of your true feelings, and you must understand the character from the heart. Finally, I congratulate the author on writing a satisfactory work as soon as possible. I am also looking forward to the author's next book.

I really can't stop watching it. If you have no brains, you can watch it.

I'm from Su Tao, come to support the author at 7:00. I hope the author of Su Tao will not stop updating. After the support is completed, he will go back to the next door

Does the author Tu Su's book still have a chance?

It's amazing how a male author writes like this

What kind of curiosity is that ex-girlfriend writing? It was obviously good at the beginning, but when I saw the plot of the ex-girlfriend, I felt like I was fed a big mouthful💩, it was so curious, you wrote it for me, and there was no foreshadowing at all. There were just a bunch of people trying to rob the protagonist's house. The protagonist lives in the first ring road of Beijing. The house is very valuable?

Is this book originally about becoming a hundred? Is there a real hundred in the starting point? Don't come up with a hundred.

Suddenly I remembered that there is such a book. I am currently at chapter 183. Can anyone tell me what happens next? Is there any yandere in it?

Yeah, the author is back again, from the starting point to pineapple buns to tomatoes and back to the starting point. The author's book about a brother and sister traveling together, and then the brother turns into a sister is still my introduction to Lily.

Fill it with camellia sauce, meow~ Fill it with camellia sauce, thank you, meow~

It sucks, and I have no desire to look at it.