Steel, Crystal and the Time Witch

I don't understand why the witches nowadays are all attacking each other with guns.

You look familiar too. There are quite a few people running over here.

Baby, how many Shires do you eat in one meal?

The simulator-like writing style is the most disgusting. Without a simulator, the protagonist only has one life, so he will never die once in his life. With the simulator, you will die today, die tomorrow, and continue to die the day after tomorrow. Death comes back and forth, are you an abuser? Do you like torturing the protagonist that much?

I feel like the writing is actually pretty good, but the results aren't very good, and it's so late that it's not on the shelves yet, so I hope I won't send it.

I read a book in 🦔miao. The setting of rebirth is very similar. Is it also the author's? The writing style is also very similar to "The Demon from Outside the Territory".

The author Jun wrote well, here are a few suggestions. The improvement of simulation is a bit fast and the density is also very high. It can slow down the pace. For some events, we can consider relying less on simulation and leaning more on the profession of the protagonist. In the latest chapter, there is only the system and the protagonist has no professional ability at all. It's a bit similar to Charles's book. It's a certain death every time. It was much better once or twice, but the reading experience was a bit poor. Either you will die, use simulation to solve it, or you will die, continue the simulation, and the cycle will begin. Problems with improving the simulation can easily snowball, and you don't know which link the plot will break. The author said that he referenced Ciel, so I hope the author can make up for some of Ciel's shortcomings. Come on, author! Hope it can be completed normally.

This introduction feels like the best of the year on Mao Zhan

I said it felt like I had seen it at the beginning, but when I changed the platform and looked at it, it turned out to be a person. Will you stick to it this time?

Stand-up painting

I wonder if it has changed? The description of the predecessor in the first chapter is not very clear Also, would you like to ask if you are single or not married?

Has this book been published on Mao? I feel like I've read it before.

Then let me ask you, will you still write the 5133 book?

I've already seen half of it, and I'm still dying on the first copy.

No, I got the wrong person. I only read the introduction and thought it was the leather cover of the author of Ciel's book, but it turns out it's the author of Witch Xiaoxiang's book. I really like the plot of the fantasy little lamp at the beginning. Come on author

Don't you think it's boring to keep swirling around in a dungeon looking for death, swirling again and again looking for death? Author, would you like to read what you are writing?

Boss, can we really continue writing this time?

Looking at the progress, I haven't caught up with the cat yet. By the way, is it possible for 5133 to be resurrected?)

Fill it with camellia sauce, meow~ Fill it with camellia sauce, thank you, meow~

Dragon King-chan... Is she the blind horse girl who came here? She's just so cute

Not bad, but how old is the heroine now 🙂

He Yiwei He suddenly ran to the starting point without saying a word.

The promotion of a martyr requires finding oneself in the pain of losing a loved one. Based on the relationship between Mary and Cartesia, I blindly guess that Cartesia's death has already satisfied "losing a loved one", so Mary may only have to "find herself" (maybe the hope for life or the continuation of Karl's will, etc., Not sure). The protagonist's last action should be to let Mary find herself, but the inheritance crystal was absorbed by the protagonist (sad) (~￣▽￣)~

🎭 Character: Time Witch 🎬 Plot: A witch who can predict the future and change her own death three days later ✒️ Writing style: The writing style is good, suspected to be the vest of an old author

Is it a transformation? Who will Shan Bai marry?

But in terms of writing, I can't accept this kind of writing. It feels like it's full of dialogue and psychological description, and it's a bit noisy. I read in the comment section that the author came from next door. If you want to continue writing, I suggest you practice your writing. It's not that this kind of writing is bad, it's just that it's not popular here at Qidian. I did feel a little uncomfortable watching it.

Because I was not in the mood to read because of the comments too many times, I just started reading the book recently. However, as Qidian became more and more aware of the comments, I always accidentally skimmed to 😡. I was almost forced to quit without reading the first chapter due to the comments. Come on!

It is very difficult to reach the later stage with Ciel's writing method. If you don't control it well, your combat power will easily collapse and you will be weak in the later stage. Also, if you write at the starting point, the pace can be a little slower, and you don't need to pursue conflict and excitement too much. The key is the story itself. Finally, the book of Charles is actually not easy to learn. If he is forced to die, it will easily be written as a 486 type of abuse, which will easily arouse the reader's disgust. If he voluntarily dies, it will become a purely enjoyable article. In short, the speed is difficult to control, including the book of Charles, which has actually been out of balance since the third incident. Finally, this writing method does not advance linearly in time, which means that you must hide various clues in each timeline, and the distribution is also particular, and the plot design will also become difficult. All in all, this thing is difficult to write.

It's very similar to the one about the cat next door I hope the author can also write well

I feel bad, there is no way to save me, I wear a man as a woman and my mentality becomes that of a woman, grumbling and sticky.