Tokyo: Picked up the Daughter of a Rich Family After Get Off Work

The author fantasizes about having a relationship with a 19-year-old high school girl, and also imagines his big belly as abdominal muscles. It is really BT.

Maybe it's because I wrote Se Se, and the heroine came here and asked the hero to help rub her belly and review me#&￥*+

Just manage the heroine well as a single heroine, don't think about using a female supporting character to supplement the word count. Otherwise, it might as well have more female protagonists.

If the female protagonist can choose the male protagonist in this way, one day she will be good again, and Huang Mao will be able to take over. This kind of encounter cannot be pure love😁

The writing style and narrative rhythm are okay, and the simple uncle and jk characters are also good However, the career position of the male protagonist is really embarrassing. Because he can see emotions, it is indeed good to engage in psychological counseling, but the author needs to polish the performance of the male protagonist. Psychological counseling must first establish a relationship, or establish a certain trust relationship. This process takes time. In the first few chapters, the heroine ran away from home and was picked up by the hero. The next morning, the hero asked her family how they were doing. The male protagonist already knows that the female protagonist ran away from home due to family problems, and he pokes her wounds when the female protagonist is in a very low mood not long after they have known each other? After the question, the female protagonist's mood dropped and the male protagonist was still thinking about whether he had said the wrong thing. This was a bit outrageous and gave people the feeling that the male protagonist only relied on emotional value and was not very professional. Because of the male protagonist's career, the subsequent love issues between the male and female protagonists are also very awkward. Although the male and female protagonists do not have a clear relationship between the client and the counselor, the male protagonist through his emotional value and professional ability? The act of helping the heroine is valid. If the male protagonist is not a counselor, there is no problem in falling in love, but the male protagonist is a counselor. Therefore, the empathy of the heroine and the hero must be considered. This relationship is not equitable in nature. Although the author writes that the male and female protagonists care about each other, it feels like it is not enough. But this is the case when reading novels. The reader only needs to point fingers, while the author has many things to consider. After all, the style and positioning of the novel are determined by the author. If you adjust it, it may not be in line with the author's ideas

When I first wrote Chapter 20, the setting was in China, but the data was really bleak. After communicating with the editor, I made minor revisions to the first 20 chapters and made the background and characters neon. So there are some places that may be a little abrupt, but it will not affect the plot. You can give us your suggestions for revision. The author lives at home and has never been to Neon. I know many places from anime and Nigaru. (I have been crazily trying to make up for my sunburn lately, please forgive me)

I thought I picked up Tomie after get off work.

Does the heroine look like this?

In the last two I wrote, the male protagonist came to school, but failed to protect anything.

The style of writing is okay, but the style probably won't be very popular. It tends to be gloomy, and if you want to maintain the quality, you won't write a lot according to the direction. Making more money for the author and lengthening the plot will only reduce the quality, so it not only tests the writing skills but also the author's pursuit. But there's no shame in it for milk and bread.

The heroine's father escaped legal punishment after driving drunk and killing someone. Is it a problem for the stepmother to kill her husband to avenge her ex-husband? ? ?

I have to say that the more I watch it, the more boring it becomes (before I went to school). Not to mention that the level of the movie is very low. You can only see the emotional value. If you are not here to read sweet stories, you would really abandon it immediately. If the male protagonist can see a fire in a person, and this fire can reflect the seven emotions and six desires, the level of the movie will be high. How should I put it? It can be said that a common problem of many young authors is that they don't like to create supporting characters, or the supporting characters are just to push the plot forward at key nodes. (Write a few more patients, it will be more interesting to have a patient exchange meeting, and even if you can see the seven emotions and six desires of ghosts, you can also express your salvation)

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At present, I can be regarded as a social animal. Although I am single, I will not always feel "embarrassed" when I meet girls, right? Or is it normal for a single man to be embarrassed and shy?

It feels like I haven't seen a novel with a single female protagonist in a long time. Isn't it good to have a single female protagonist? Of course not, the main reason is that single-female protagonists are not long enough to write, and we often have the problem of not knowing how to write until the later stages of writing. For example, if my girlfriend and I go to hot springs, they are obviously in different places. In reality, we can clearly see different scenery in different seasons and different experiences. However, if we use words to describe it, we may not be able to tell the difference. This will test the author's writing skills and vocabulary. Therefore, if you want to clearly let readers feel the difference, the most intuitive way is to follow different people, arrange and combine them, and different female protagonists have their own stories as copies for the male protagonist to experience. Having said so much, I just want to tell the author to come on! I'm looking forward to the next story and can't wait to read the story of happiness. Finally, I recommend the author to read "Green Plum Quartet of the Snow Country". I like the travel part of that book very much.

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He also writes novels about emotional value system flow, hahaha

The author's writing style is very delicate and atmospheric, and the writing is very appetizing. I usually like to watch some love stories, and this book is very sweet and pokes me. The progress of the relationship between the male and female protagonists is also very exciting. Both JK and the uncle's characters are well established. It is a rare masterpiece of fairy grass. Good luck, author

To be honest, if you don't write about light novels and the ability to fight and cultivate immortals, you can't write much content with only one female protagonist 🤔

I don't even need to read what's behind. Liu Xiahui has no time to run away.

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Can you tell me what you wrote before? I looked at a few and felt good about it, but if it came from a cat, I would be worried about whether it was a pigeon. If I chased 10 of them there, seven or eight of them would be pigeons.

Is this a normal ending or is it a tj?

Is it over? I feel like I can live a happy life when I return to my hometown😍😍It's really beautiful😍

I read the introduction and saw, from, pee,...

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Do you need it

Don't add a bit of refinement?

When I saw h, I kept thinking about エッチ. After thinking about it, I realized that not only the pronunciation is similar, but the meaning is also the same.

The writing is very boring, like plain water