Under One Person, Golden Light Turns into a God

It feels a bit watery. There are dozens of pictures for just one Luotian Dajiao. There are really many descriptions of a battle, sometimes there are several pictures.

Does the three views really have to follow the five senses? Quan Xing still deserves to die?

I've watched almost half of it and want to ask why everyone thinks the protagonist is not strong? Can't you see the truth? Don't everyone in Longhushan know about the dual cultivation of life and life? Everyone thinks they can touch it? Are they really that stupid?

The heroine is obviously Feng Baobao, but in many fandoms, she is just a supporting female character. Feng Baobao is not good! Not worthy of the heroine!

I always feel that the heroine Xia He is a bit redundant. . I jump to watch wherever there is Xia He. . .

Daily Life is really good, but it's about this love story that I really want to give up. Even a woman wants to be the main character, Kun, and Lu Linglong. At first she said she would be a sister, but then she wanted someone else. The first thirty pictures are really good, but the sense of division in the second part is so strong that I suspect it was written by two people.

I know the protagonist is awesome, but did you write too many supporting sentences? The audience's thoughts and minds are almost full of the whole chapter. What's wrong with Jiangnan?

It's a bad batch. To be honest, just look at the title later. The plot is slow to advance. What little plot there is is all the original plot. It's hard to imagine that six of the ten chapters describe fighting scenes. Three chapters describe how the onlookers were surprised. Nine-tenths of the chapters are the original plot. The remaining one-tenth can barely be considered original. The key point is that the fighting plot is the same and extremely boring. The protagonist just stands there motionless waiting for the opponent to fight, then defends himself in the astonishment of the crowd, and then defeats the person with a backhand slap, and the crowd is amazed again and again. Every time! It's like this over and over again every time! It just made me laugh. There is also the creation of the protagonist. One moment it is said that the protagonist is a time traveler who knows the plot, but the next moment it is shown that the protagonist knows nothing. When Zhang Chulan was asked to leave by the Wang and Lu families, you looked anxious. Don't you know the plot? Why are you anxious? You should also know that Wang is also being targeted by two families. He still has to catch some spy. If he just says he can't do it, he has to pretend to be a b and copy and paste the original plot. It can be said that the beginning is quite satisfactory, but the further you go, the more boring it gets. It is no different from copying the original work, and you can even pretend not to understand.

Evil author, use less descriptions. He writes a picture every time he throws a punch. There aren't many key actions. It's all about other people's comments.

It's not why you group of people have such a big opinion against Xia He. You said it's not a bus, and Xia He's constitution is natural. Those men can't stand the temptation and bring her a lot of trouble. They are not all traitors and evil. There are also many people who contributed during the war of resistance.

I can't stand it anymore after reading more than 100 chapters, it's disgusting.

Good looking

The protagonist's cultivation feels comparable to three times Zhang Lingyu's cultivation strength. How can he be charmed even if he is close to the invincible level? It feels like the protagonist is deliberately taking advantage of Xia He. After all, the most beautiful woman is still his junior brother-in-law.

The author's writing is quite good, and it is very consistent with the original characters' personalities. However, there are always some Long Aotian plots like the previous Jiajia Village plot. Is it necessary? Changing the look and feel can improve a lot

This real-life version of Fu Rong is a bit pretty, with all the make-up. In the past, I didn't feel anything when watching Duan Xiaowei in real life, but this time I was inexplicably hit by her performance as Fu Rong.

That... Author, Luan Jin Tuo is not from Fenghou Qimen, right? Chen Jinkui from Shuzimen has already explained it.

These few chapters are enough for anyone to read, one chapter per person! ! Not even the people in the production team dare to take a break like this.

It's just that the pretense is a bit stiff and I'm always shocked.

Let's put it this way, the author's writing style is still a bit too weak. Now that I have seen the Biyou Village section, all the previous battle plots only have the first one or two pages and the last one or two pages as the main text, and the middle ones are all the various exclamations of the onlookers. Old readers can know the details by just looking at the preview content of each chapter for most of the paid chapters.

Ma Xianhong and his sister Qu Tong have almost finished collecting the eight magical skills under one person. What does this mean in the book? The protagonist got two skills and ended up with an unknown malicious injury. It is seriously suspected that there is no idea on purpose, so he deliberately suppressed the combat power to make the plot of Biyou Village run normally.

I'm number one on your list now. I've voted for two monthly votes, so I'll update it quickly 😡😡😡

Wow, please follow the author more. You are too lazy. I only have one stick a day. I save it for a week before I dare to read it. If I come back every day, I will have two sticks.

I voted for you so many times, please give me more votes

I saw nearly 100 pictures, and I voted because it was a subject I liked. But it's time to throw away the book. It's tasteless and it's a pity to throw it away. To summarize the questions as follows: 1. There are also shortcomings in the plot. For example, when I returned to the mountain with Zhang Lingyu, there was suddenly a plot of Xia He. How did it happen? No matter what happened, he just said he met Xia He on the mountain. There is also Luo Tian Dajiao. It is obvious that the game is crushed, but people around still think that the protagonist may not be able to defeat it. Crushing once or twice can do this, but crushing it so many times? 2. The plot is too dull, with too many irrelevant narrations and dialogues, which is very dragging 3. What everyone is reading is a fanfic, a second creation. You are not following the original plot and working as a nanny for Zhang Chulan all the way. At least here in Luotian Reef, there is not much original content. In this case, why don't readers read the original comics?

I was really convinced. The old man scolded him. Anyone with brains knew how cool it would be to let Barron go and then gang up on the old man. Barron refused to listen even though Barron said he wanted to leave and didn't join Quanxing. I thought he was so awesome. He was so pretentious in the beginning, but in the next chapter both of them ran away, haha. Isn't it particularly good to let so many people go like Barron and just capture the old man and then behead him in front of the Tianshi Mansion to show his effectiveness?