Under One Person, the Master Zhang Zhiwei!

You should write step by step, don't write about heaven-defying understanding, or a bunch of garbled exercises. Remember that the Golden Light Curse combines attack and defense with double rest. The whole family of alien sects can't find anyone else who can compete with it. The Eight Strange Skills are awesome, but they are just techniques that cannot be called magic. They are not as perfect as the Golden Light Curse. In one piece, it is best to follow Lao Ding's path and challenge the Hundred Skills after coming down from the mountain, and then integrate the skills in other comics, such as the skills in Drawing Rivers and Lakes. It is best not to write about learning the Eight Strange Skills, otherwise you will collapse. Currently, the Eight Strange Skills shown in the original work are full of magic, and Ju Lingqian shows these two functions to the fullest. The other eight magical skills are mentioned a few times at most and do not show all their functions. In fact, it is impossible to write. You always have to do something interesting when you go down the mountain. As a disciple of Tianshi, you should understand the impact of this status on you. You should know that there are some things you can do and some things you cannot do. Your actions represent Longhu Mountain. , Don't be like some fan fictions, if you don't like this and don't like that, you don't care about anything and just do whatever you like, that's not what you want. It's okay if the master's disciple does the whole thing. The emotional line can be a little confused, but don't be a harem. The giant hates the harem and doesn't respect women. Don't forget that there will be women among the readers.

Alas, it seems like the author could have written it well, but it just seems a bit...

The writing in the early stage is okay, but the nonsense written in the later stage is either water or water. After going down the mountain, I drive randomly. The author is either too good at himself or has changed people.

The routine of a ten-year-old novel wrapped in the skin of one person

What are these chapters written about? It's a mess.

What have you written recently? One thing went viral for almost 20 chapters

It's too bland, it's not a crisis and it's not fun, it's more like a daily novel…

I would like to express my own point of view. In these chapters, I feel that it is a bit uncomfortable to be treated like a junior. It's okay to be misunderstood, but it's not okay when you are called an elder by others to educate you, because it is not your own business, which is equivalent to slapping God in the face. At this time, you should not pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger.

The writing is good at the beginning, but it becomes more and more sloppy later on.

What follows is all about changing maps to show off and slap people in the face. It's better to write the main story line, which becomes more abstract the more you write it.

Two eunuch, ghosts will dare to read your novels in the future

The current data is not very optimistic. Are you confident that it will be perfect for three months after it is put on the shelves?

If I were to beat Feng Baobao to death directly

The four families teamed up to torture Longhu, and the Longhushan disciples invited by the mentally retarded Lu family were treated like dogs and killed, and then the protagonist jumped out to show off, which was disgusting.

I'm very curious about the fact that the protagonist has no heart, does he have blood? If there is blood, how can he circulate without a heart? How can he breathe without circulation? Pure innateness?

Why didn't I get today's update?

The writing was pretty good, but it was a pity that it ended so hastily.

I feel like it's well written

Come on, it's true that after it was released, it was relatively dull after I subscribed to it for more than 10 chapters.