Luo Xiaohei's Battle Notes: Becoming a Disciple of Infinity with Lu Ye

Today is my birthday, I wish this book will not be a eunuch

Is there a black one? Is there a black one?

The three tails should be the third system. The golden space may have healing. The third system reminds me of Xiao Hei. What a pity, the realm was sucked by the phoenix breath, otherwise Xiao Hei would be simply a young supreme.

So can the author give an accurate answer as to whether he will get closer to Luye in the future? I originally looked at the title of the book and thought it would be more similar to Lu Yecheng's CP, so I clicked it, but I saw some people said they were pure senior brothers and sisters, so can the author tell me which one it is? If in the end it's not impossible to just be brothers and sisters, it's just that I won't look at it for now and stop the loss immediately. I must be the only one who is not sure. It would be better for everyone to confirm it early.

Is Xiaohei such a niche? I haven't seen a single comment on these recent chapters. The writing is pretty good. I haven't seen any poisonous points for the time being.

By the way, why is it that the author is always fighting? The daily warmth is the soul of Luo Xiaohei.

Luye

This book ha. No doubt among Xiaohei fans. The foreshadowing, narrative, and fighting are all very good. Because the story is set 100 years in advance and I haven't read the previous book friends, I can still accept your detailed explanation. The latest 100 chapters, no need for me to say more, everyone who can follow this will understand. You can swim, but you can't ride on a horse that's so wet. Many people have seen Xiaohei's 1-2. Most of your average chapter is filled with verbal remarks and narration. Even book friends know about it, who can bear it? Nowadays, book lovers are more selective and like fast pace. If you do this, you will jump sooner or later. Even if you want water, I can still accept it if you add some daily food. 2000 Words, 1500 words in vernacular. I really can't stand it. I have been chasing him for so long, but I don't want to be a eunuch. I can only say a few nonsense words here.

It's a bit boring after watching it for a long time, and it feels too sensitive in terms of inner emotions. There is too much writing power in the whole text to explain the inner thoughts of the characters, so it made me feel uncomfortable after reading it for a long time. Come on, author

Chongming (refer to this lady's drawing of the grown-up Xiao Hei, just change the color of the eyes, ears and tail)

The language is lacking, the same descriptions appear too much, and the emotional feeling is not fully laid out. I feel that the density of emotions felt by the author is much stronger than what the readers read.

Tsk, I'm really embarrassed by the fact that the main character's name is useless. I feel like there are still too many protagonists with this trait. Think about it from another person's perspective. If the protagonist in the author's novel is named Gungun, do you think any readers will accept it? It's good to consider the feelings of the supporting characters. You can't settle on a name just to find a fun word and highlight the characteristics. The names of Siberian Tiger's apprentices, A, B, B, D, also have special meanings. Does it sound good?

Luye

Dousita Palace and Doushuai Palace

The bean bag generated should originally have eye-shaped markings on both sides of the eyes, but after competing with the bean bag for a long time, I still couldn't produce a satisfactory one. I first picked one I like

If you don't add some daily love plots to it, you will soon have nothing to write about. I advise you to arrange the plots of senior brothers and sisters now.

It's so slow, Xiao Hei didn't appear, and the protagonist didn't become a fairy. The plot stuck in the middle feels so long.

Make some comments, just fight. Don't always intersperse various explanations. Just go about your daily life. The explanations should be separated as much as possible. Don't always go back and forth to write the explanations at various times. You won't say much before it is put on the shelves, but if it remains like this after it is put on the shelves, it will make people feel too watery. For the following plot, the author can write a commission like a unit drama, interspersed with small stories about local customs and so on. After all, the growth of the protagonist requires not only the strength itself, but also the transformation of the soul. This can also pave the way for solving the protagonist's heartache. A period of separation from Lu Ye will also help the protagonist's change.

Qidian finally has a book with Lu Luye as the heroine, you are the only child in the Ye family 😭

The Q version feels okay, but the three tails are not reflected

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you read the fifth update, readers' support spontaneously formed, and the voices of praise became louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both inside and outside. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in a long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updating may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of the problems come from insufficient updates.

Alas, after voting for so many monthly votes, there is no more chapter. How can you, the author, have the nerve to ask everyone for monthly votes? There are not many monthly votes, and your income is low, so you have no motivation to update. With fewer updates, readers will subscribe less. If you subscribe less, you will get fewer monthly votes, and readers' desire to watch will gradually decrease. The so-called vicious circle is like this, so the author should think about it carefully.

It looks good, and the water is real water. There are so many words about the wheel🙄

Laojun's spiritual space is exhausted Qing Ning's resurrection reading Mingwang is secure Infinity is only half Xuanli is only one-tenth left As expected, the strongest in the guild is "Naza" I hope the author's fan outline will not conflict with the setting

Even if you eat something thin, and you can't guarantee one meal a day, you have to be ashamed, young man!

If you have any thoughts or suggestions, you can write them here. It can be about characters or plots. We will try our best to arrange them.

You must not stop updating.

It is known that in the original movie 2, Lu Ye could not fly and Lu Ye did not become an immortal. But at the end of Big Movie 2, the montage of Lu Ye + Master coming to the club to see me when he had time clearly stated that Lu Ye was in a perfect mood. According to my personal understanding, Luye was close to or reaching the threshold of immortality at this time. Now this book has been written only two years before the movie 2, and it has not yet mentioned that Lu Ye became an immortal or was close to becoming an immortal. Moreover, this book allows Lynx to solve Lu Ye early. There is no situation where he cannot solve the knot and is competing with his master. Lu Ye's strength clearly exceeds the original timeline. So, senior sister, when will you become an immortal?

I feel that even if Xiaohei comes out, he can still write about it. For example, the three people who explored the universe mentioned by Laojun have no names. One is Chang'e and the other is Immortal Yifan. There has been no news since leaving the universe. If you bring back some news, just 🤓. For example, Diga has more earth, Daina has more universes, 😏😏😏😏

Looking at the plot of the recent movie 1, I still can't help but express various opinions. These are some personal opinions on the book. I don't know if it will affect the author and other readers. Personally, I definitely want the books to get better and better, so that the author can make some spare money, and I can see fan fiction that is constantly updated. But when I read some of the latest chapters, I didn't see that I didn't follow the route of the original work as I expected. In the end, I basically followed the original work. I still felt a kind of disappointment in my heart, and my mood was a bit complicated. I talked about a lot of personal opinions. I wanted the author to follow the plot he expected, but I also didn't want my personal opinions to affect the author's ideas and interests. Although if you don't want to read it, don't read it and turn left when you go out. However, there are very few Luo Xiaohei fan novels. If you say they are niche, they are not popular. If you say they are popular, they are completely out of reach. I really want this excellent fan novel to continue to be good.