Under One Person, the Heavenly Book of the Five Emperors

Shaver Xia He is not a good person. Many authors these days are greedy for other people's bodies. They follow the facial features and they can write about anything.

It's hard to disagree. You write a fanfic, and I really want to support you, but I'm sorry, your heroine, Xia, scares me. What the brother said was very good. It's hard to find a slut even with a lantern, so don't wash it.

I don't know that Xia He only had a relationship with Zhang Lingyu and then came to see a fellow fan. He only looked at it half-heartedly and expressed opinions? Zhang Zhiwei wants to find a bus for his apprentice, right? I don't know what Zhang Zhiwei's name is when he can see it with his eyesight.

It feels like I'm washing Xia He, it's better not to have a heroine

People have to have fun in moderation. If you go too far, it's just disgusting.

Don't make the main character very neurotic.

The plot collapses in the next 50 chapters, and the protagonist travels through the timeline. Can you be a normal person? The so-called magical power is all tricked out by deceivers (very poisonous), those two self-operating skills (hanging up are too brainless), and that skill almost becomes a demon after practicing it. We are not watching the protagonist kill people, we want to see the sense of substitution in the novel.

I'm sitting on the road more and more, and I've lost my original intention of writing.

It feels like the joke has been overplayed. It all affects the plot.

What does Xia He say? When Zhang Huaiyi's body was dug up in the first episode, she really didn't mind having an open-air corpse Pely show.

In fact, a protagonist who loves to fool is quite fun, but is the protagonist's fooling a bit "stick-making"? If you want to fool, you have to be reliable. How about fooling the Bilian super electromagnetic gun? Or the magnetic field rotating sea tiger fist. Fake five hundred dollars a night, and use Qi to control the magic knife with a thousand blades. Or, the heart is moved by thoughts, the sword is inspired by the spirit, the energy and thoughts are connected, and the human sword is combined - at least it is somewhat feasible. It's better than talking awkwardly now, what kind of clan? What kind of imperial weapons are male and female? They're poisonous.

They have been emphasizing the feeling of being brother and sister, but it is really poisonous to write so much about the relationship between the two.

I also accepted Feng Shayan. The anime was actually exposed by a red-haired male passerby. He even recognized it after being exposed by Zhang Chulan. What does passerby mean?

Does the author really not care about readers' opinions? Seeing that most of the readers nowadays are paying readers, these problems are not big, but these small problems together will greatly affect the perception of the protagonist.

When I saw Xia He, I knew what this book was like.

What is written at the end of this novel? Why can't I understand? Especially that magic star at the back? What the hell is this? What other sacred trees are there? And what is the identity of the protagonist?

Why does the author write an emotional drama? Doesn't it feel bad for the protagonist to sit back and forget about the road?

Friends, let me ask, I have only watched the animation, in the first few episodes, did Xia He see the body of Grandpa Bilian?

. . . . . Is this what Lezi people are?

Will you accept Xia He Linglong? After being ambiguous for so long, will you be the single heroine? {"NickName":"Annie is so fun","UserId":354713637} Please give me an accurate letter and confirm that you have accepted it before you dare to continue watching.

The author follows your ideas and then writes like this. It's quite nice.