Mortal: the No.1 Dharma Cultivator in Tiannan

Why is there no Mr. Storyteller version? I hope it will be available soon

Another Chen Qiaoqian, I am really convinced, why does every fanfic have this woman as the heroine? What is the use of this woman? Is she Tianlinggen? Or is there some supreme spiritual body? It's useless, it's just a drag bottle, it can build foundations and form pills with little chance. You mortal authors must have such a thing, right? Is there any point in accepting this woman? ? What can she do to help the protagonist? Being fucked? If you think about it this way, why not go to Miaoyinmen? Anyway, I don't understand why you want to accept this Chen Qiaoqian. Really speechless

Only when the protagonist's personality is complete and self-sufficient can he exude charisma and the book will be popular. There are some hidden dangers in the current relationship management of the protagonist. For example, if he takes Nangong and then takes Chen Qiaoqian without hesitation, although it meets the needs of many readers, it tarnishes the character's image. Will the next step be to take back Nangong again? For example, the center of the genre is not cultivation and fighting, it is just a fan fiction that follows the trend. Another example is the relationship between Xin Ruyin. Xin's role is in the teleportation array. In the future, for beast elixir refining, the protagonist can only lick Han Li in Tiannan. At present, it is secretly licking, with the intention of trading, but it is still licking. Without Han Li, there will be no elixir, and he is completely controlled by others. I think that the growth of the protagonist is a process of constantly getting rid of the constraints of others. Once these relationships are handled, the Tiannan chapter can be considered completed. If it is not completed, it may be suspended.

Ignore those eunuchs. Anyway, mortals with good grades are basically the ones who take in women. These eunuchs are basically used to having prostitutes for free. How many fan novels are there about people who are eunuchs? Regardless of whether it's a fandom like Douluo Pirates or the like, those with good grades will only accept girls. As long as the storyline is strong and the plot is not written in a way that goes against the original work, it will be fine if you don't accept everyone.

The author is petty, and his thinking is too limited. It should be more bold to be interesting, and it should have a sense of fighting for the big road. You have become an immortal for the sake of immortality. You should put down your moral baggage and do whatever you can. Grab what you can and take it. If you have a chance to catch a high-level female cultivator, go to it. As long as you are a high-level cultivator from now on, people will only call you Tianjun and ancestor. Who will remember what bad things you do? Whoever dares to chatter will be given the Nine Clans Set Meal, and all the earthworms will be pulled out and chopped. If you want to pass through yin and yang, you must first get Xin Ruyin's physique or the advanced double rest technique, or get better at both. You can ask for help from the Hidden Moon Sect, but it is not possible. Looking at the gender ratio of senior cultivators, you can tell that there are more female cultivators in this sect recruiting men. The two Hehuan Sect members who can ambush Hongfen and Skeleton must have dual cultivation techniques, and the Hehuan Sect's male ones are more advantageous. When you have a bottleneck, you can consider using Dianfeng Peiyuan Gong to break through. For Luding, if the protagonist is not strong enough in the early stage, you can get Yan Ruyan, Lian Feihua, Zhong Weiniang, Yuan Yao, Yanli, Fan Jingmei, Zhuo Ruting, Dong Xuan'er, etc. You can see if you can get some single female cultivators Hehuan Zong Hongfen, Huang Maple Valley Dong Hongfu, Yanyue Zong Zhou Nishang, Miaoyinmen Zhou Xu, Huadaowu Hanmengying, etc.

I can't stand the Five Spiritual Roots. After all, the original book says that only when the Five Spiritual Roots are in the spirit can you practice normally. You, the author, can't even write about spiritual bodies. Spiritual roots are the basic setting. It's useless for you to be clever like this. You might as well write about three spiritual roots. Luan Xinghai arranges two supporting actors to replenish spiritual roots for the protagonist. It turns out that Han found a supporting actor to do it. The cultivation is still too slow, and the plot is not satisfying. It is better to arrange a method to deprive the physique, go to Xiaoyin to peel off the physique, and then capture Yan Ruyan and Lian Feihua to cultivate their spiritual roots these days. This will be much faster.

There are many settings in Mortal Cultivation of Immortality that may not seem worth mentioning, but once you accept them, you will become less and less able to read the novel. For example: 1. When encountering an enemy that is too strong, you should run away instead of bursting into a small universe, awakening mysterious power, having epiphanies and breakthroughs in battle. 2. When being chased by the enemy, you should remain anonymous and act in a low-key manner instead of continuing to take high-profile murderous risks. 3. Killing people, seizing treasures, mutilating corpses, and eradicating traces to avoid being approached by enemies or even harming relatives and friends should be the basic IQ of the protagonist. 4. Make good use of your own talents/cheats/plug-ins, which should be based on the protagonist's basic IQ. 5. It should be the protagonist's basic IQ to hide one's cheats/plug-ins, avoid being discovered, kill people and seize treasures. 6. Do not mock others in person for no reason, including the protagonist. It should be based on the basic IQ of the villain, supporting characters and passers-by. 7. If you work for others, including women, you should negotiate the remuneration in advance. 8. Talking in a battle will make both sides look stupid. The more words there are, the more stupid they will be. 9. Taking risks requires sufficient reasons. 10. Realm division is the cornerstone of the combat power system. If you casually cross large realms to kill enemies, the combat power system will soon collapse. 11. Being able to take care of oneself without the protagonist needing to save lives frequently should be the basic IQ of the protagonist's relatives and friends. 12. Monks will not be slaves to mortals. 13. Being free and unrestrained is a fairy. 14. Tell more stories and less reasoning.​

This is the most rigorous and careful fan author I have ever seen. He must have read the original work carefully. All the magical weapons, formations, and characters can match the original work, and he can even calculate the time of the demonic invasion. And many things are foreshadowed, unlike many books where what you want suddenly appears. Wu Feng obviously did not follow the same path as Han Li. Han Li was cautious, but Wu Feng was able to show his abilities after he was strong enough, which is what an elite disciple of the sect should be like. If you are like Han Li, you might as well read the original work. The most important point is that the author obviously wanted to write about the harem at the beginning, but Xin Ruyin did not become the star slave of the protagonist. In those harem stories, all the female characters were written as Chunshuitang dolls! Not interesting. Now it seems that the author doesn't want to write a harem story, but I guess Xin Ruyin and Yan Ruyan still can't escape. Wu Feng is really devoted to the Tao! He loves practicing so much!

Author, you should write harem stories. I think your writing about training and fighting is not good. It doesn't bring out the excitement at all. Overall, it seems to overwhelm the protagonist. It can be seen that you are really not good at describing. This eunuch training route is really not suitable for you. I will just brush it up now. It is boring and boring, and I have no interest in reading it.

The more I write, the more I can't control it. In the late stage of pill formation in Xutian Temple, I brought so many people with me and controlled the scene so much. 1. I didn't have the original work to survive until the end. 2. I didn't have the strength to protect others. 3. How to grab things. 4. The cheats or strength cannot highlight the protagonist. The treasure was given to the protagonist inexplicably. It's too intellectual.

The protagonist wants everything, and the gold-eating insect is completely incompatible with the protagonist. Isn't it a Dharma cultivator? Can you write less about things outside yourself? Goldfinger has been opened so much, and it keeps weakening Han Li.

1. A lot of things are unclear. The techniques and materials are just talked about in general terms and made up. 2. Many fights are just mentioned in one stroke 3. The connection between each chapter is completely unconnected 4. It is completely written in nonsense. The protagonist himself has 6-8 times the magic power of ordinary people, and he still needs to strengthen it? Wouldn't that much mana explode? Can you physically handle it? 5. The author repeatedly emphasizes that it is not necessary to strengthen the physical body, nor to practice both law and body. How can one strengthen the physical body and violate the taboo? Without a strong physical body, can your exaggerated magic power and exaggerated spiritual consciousness be able to withstand it? 6. Forget about changing Han Li's natal magic weapon materials, I actually changed Han Li's major martial arts. 7. Many things can no longer be justified. If they are updated intermittently, they will inevitably be unfinished. Let's cut them off.

The kind of practice I want to see is to raise your hand to call for wind, wave your hand to call for rain, and understand the artistic conception and laws of the five elements... Instead of following the original plot all the time, and in the end I feel that nothing is easy to beat.

The plot is really disgusting brainless. No logic

Looking at the recent plot of Xutian Palace, Zi Ling and her mother are not dead yet, and they even enter Xutian Palace together, and they also want to hook up with Han Li. Is this kind of plot about letting Zi Ling recommend herself as a pillow? Is Zi Ling useful for hair? Pure green tea bitch! She will only take the benefits you give her for granted, and she may not give them to you after she takes them! In the original work, she brought Ling Gou into the Xutian Temple. Ling Gou finally broke through the ghost mist, but she still looked uncomfortable. Later, he accidentally revealed his true face several times and was captured alive. Who the hell would believe this? Chen Qiaoqian is a love brain, Nangong Wan has good qualifications, and Yuan Yao Yanli values ​​love and justice. Where is Zi Ling? Useless! Old Monster Chihuo and Ancestor Jiyin pushed her over each other, which shows that they did not take the so-called most beautiful woman to heart at all, they just regarded her as a plaything.

It's not fun at all and feels like a waste of time. The protagonist has five spiritual roots, and he has no resources. How long does it take to grab this? Tiannan's resources are all in the sects and families. How many sects and cultivator families have to be killed to get enough? When people explode, do you think there are no bloodline secrets and skills to come to you? Can Huang Maple Valley protect you? If I were the elder of Huang Maple Valley, you would be cold by now. Five Spiritual Roots can be cultivated so quickly. As long as you know the secret sect, you can prosper. No matter what, you will die. The harem has no interaction at all, no description, then you write a simple story about raising a cat and having to pet it to get close to it. It only has a few words compared to the original novel. Even the adopted girls don't know how to practice dual cultivation, which is worse than the native monks. They even know how to buy a furnace and practice.

I thought it was an academic research-type cultivating immortality, which was a bit of a show-off. It said how powerful the spells were, but I still didn't write them down.

This author didn't describe Dharma cultivation in his book. The exercises are very complicated, and Dharma cultivation is not visible.

The writing in the first few dozen chapters was okay, but as it went on, it became more and more outrageous. He was simply a saint. He was directly used as a licking dog for Old Demon Han. He used thousand-year-old medicinal materials casually and was not afraid of death. He was awesome, so awesome.

The problem with this book is that the harem is not a harem, the eunuch is not a eunuch, and both reader factions are offended. If you want to go the harem route, don't leave out any details about the women, but also add details, so that people can read it. When you write about a harem with many women and not all of them, the details are too few and overwhelming. It's strange that readers can't run away. If you want to take the path of eunuch cultivation, don't write about female cultivators. It would be disappointing to write about it in one stroke. Just focus on practicing and practicing, but what you wrote is too boring, and it seems to overwhelm the protagonist. Overall, it is not interesting at all, and it is not interesting at all. After reading the table of contents, I want to skip it directly. You need to think of ways to improve the enjoyment quickly.

What fan authors like to do most is to carve patterns on shit or carve it over and over again. There are even more poisonous ones, such as eating your own shit. If you take it, you can't get anything fresh. For example, Scientific Cultivation of Immortality talks about the logic of cultivation, Imitation of Heavenly Spiritual Treasures talks about mythical magic weapons, Amap directly connects technology seamlessly, and Portable World talks about the laws of the Great Way. Even if these are shit, they are still fresh and hot.

No new ideas have been written, and the role of Yujue Golden Finger has not been fully exerted. Everything I have practiced and learned is the legacy of my predecessors, and is miscellaneous and unsystematic. The spells are composed of spiritual texts. Why not develop, reorganize, and innovate to form my own things. In terms of women, the underground palace has not happened. I thought I was dedicated to the Tao. The good guy will arrange for Bai Jiao to do it all over again later. Later, it was also a talent to use hands and feet when Nangong Wan was refining the weapons. I can't stand it here.

This book is more like Plato than talking about the harem. It says that Xin Ruyin, Yuan Yao, and Yanli have taken concubines, and they are all in the stage of integration. There is no description of the relationship with these three, and there is no mention of Shuang Xiu. The four of them, Chen Qiaoqian, basically had to reach a certain level when they were approaching their longevity. The protagonists had already transformed into gods, and these four only formed elixirs, and they only thought of arranging for a baby after they were over 400 years old. Chen Qiaoqian is even more like this. She had to fail once to form the elixir, and she was stuck at 180 years old before she could break through. Yanli Yuanyao calls the protagonist Pavilion Master, while Xin Ruyin is called Senior by the entire human world.

There are a lot of poison points, mid-grade spiritual stones are needed to refine Qi and build foundations, and many plots jump too quickly into the plot, making it inexplicable.

Every time I want to watch it, I can't. It's so disgusting. It's written and it's so upright. I don't think other mortals have this problem There are so many books in this book, it seems they all have the same ideas

The emotional scenes are not well written either. The plug-in is too low and not good to watch?

Just started, subscribed, but the author stopped updating again

The book is pretty good, but I just can't accept some scenes that disgust me.

Likes to change other things, the style of mortals is to ignore things that have nothing to do with oneself and forget about others. There are certain factors in this style that mortals can live by.

No more writing? Don't have to watch anymore? So long