Legacy of the Past: Solar Wars

In an era where cool articles are everywhere, few people tell a story as carefully as you do. The details are handled very well. The person in front said it right, there are many "boomerangs". Come on, don't give up.

Let's talk about the shortcomings first, that is, the protagonist's appearance rate is low and the villain's position is not clear enough. Although you say it is because of the talent of the [protagonist], readers will most likely not have the patience to listen to your explanation later. Your handling of the structure is indeed poor. Let's talk about the advantages. Every change in the plot was beyond my expectation, but it was within logic. This was also the key to enduring the shortcomings and reading it. Especially the echoes before and after, it really surprised me. You don't know what to do at work. You should have strong logical thinking. (The setting of [Protagonist] as a talent is even more eye-catching.) Then the writing is okay. Finally, I can see that you have great ambitions. If the book does not collapse and you keep updating it, you should have great stamina.

"What he killed was not extraordinary!" "But the only remaining order in our world!" The author's discussion of human nature really shocked me! !

I've read more than a dozen chapters and I don't know who the protagonist is. You're making me very irritated.

The ideas and settings are very good. The only problem is that the character creation is indescribably weird. It feels like different variants of the same person.

The writing is good, the plot is exciting, and it's a masterpiece.

Brother, you can't stop the structure at the beginning, otherwise you will lose a lot of readers. If you revise the front a little, your writing style will definitely improve. It's important to protect readers

It feels like most of the characters share a personality. .

The first collection, just like this eunuch 🙂

Wow wow wow, it looks good, and the imagination is very good, but it's so tiring to watch, I don't know why I feel like I have to stretch my mind 😢 I can't imagine how it will end.

Depending on how far the author can go, 300,000 and 1 million are the two major difficulties.

I won't stop updating. Come on, author.

Great book, I read it in one night