I Became an Immortal in the Mountains

Has it always been Gu's routine of trying to be clean, and others dragging him into fights, coercing, luring and slandering him?🙂

I haven't been to the starting point for many years, and then I find that the only way to complete the book has disappeared, and you have written another book, with more than 700 chapters? I just read it, there are more than 100 chapters, I quite like Xianlu Fengyun The writing is not bad, although I rarely read online articles recently, sometimes I will listen to some. I really don't have time to read without listening to the books, but I can't listen to the original text after listening to dozens of chapters. Many of them are low-level and have poor writing skills, and many of them cannot write by themselves. It's just a few sentences to fool you around, and you don't feel anything when you read it. The description of cultivation is one of them. Because I haven't read much online articles recently, I don't know if you made up these realms yourself or got them from some book. Your writing is indeed very good, and the detailed descriptions are in place. You can feel it when you read it. This is one of the highlights of your book in my opinion! Even so, I think this aspect is described too much More than 100 chapters are still at home, right? ? Anyway, I can't stand it I don't like the main character either. He is also a selfish person who can only be lawless and unruly. He has lost his humanity after 2 years of cultivation. Why do you laugh at the poor people at the bottom? They are on the opposite side of you. If you don't help, you won't help. It doesn't matter if you kill them. Why humiliate others? I really don't believe how high-end and bottom-level people are in most online articles. They call others cowards. I think this protagonist is also a coward. Very, I am afraid before I am afraid, but I dare to shrink even if I am afraid. The poor bottom class who is humiliated can still think about fighting. What right does this protagonist have to laugh at him? In my opinion, this protagonist is not even as good as him. Ask others to speak properly. Have you said it properly from above? Shouldn't anyone else come? Reality has revealed that there is a danger in maintaining the order. I hope you will be so stubborn and continue to go your own way. Anyway, I am the protagonist, so you should not follow the rules and don't restrain me. I can do whatever I want and don't bother me. Is this what you call refreshing? From now on, it is better to write the opposite of the protagonist as a pure villain. Although I don't like this way of writing, it is better than just randomly choosing someone with a reason for a little conflict. If you want to mess with others, you still have to write that he has a legitimate reason, and it is very contradictory to bring the blame on yourself. What will happen if someone doesn't abide by the protagonist's rules? As a human being in the second life, the protagonist also has relatives in this world, right? ... Although I didn't write it, it was because the protagonist was not taken seriously because of his poor qualifications. It seems that he didn't mistreat the protagonist, right? There are also people who give gifts on birthdays, which is also the treatment of a small rich man! Why is it that when there is trouble in this world or there is danger in the city where his home is, the protagonist can act aloof and act like it has nothing to do with him, and give him a means as if he is giving a favor? ! Didn't this world give birth to you and raise you? Did the world of the protagonist pop out of a stone? It was raised by nature, so why isn't it human? Although Shenji's book also has many good descriptions of cultivation, the protagonist is not very human... Most people should not read this book It flashed, I quite like Xianlu Fengyun, wish you well

This name is wrong, I thought it was an invincible cool article🥱🥱

I have nothing to do, so I read a novel to pass the time. This book is well written, the plot is rich, delicate and vivid, and the villain is not forced to be smart. It is a rare good book in recent times. Good luck to the author👏.

In fact, overall it's quite watchable, with a lot of minor irritations, but it's still a pretty good way to pass the time. It's just that the author kind of wants to write one thing at a time, and it doesn't look like he wrote an outline.

It's too slow. Update once a day. At least two chapters a day.

What was written about Heaven and Earth Falling😡😡

If you think Dance of Swords and Flowers can appear together with Can't Let Him Strike First, then you can listen to it.

I have read more than 80 chapters. The writing is indeed good, the writing style is acceptable, and the plot is not too poisonous. However, I still want to say, why is there no description of the specific details of Beiquan Mountain? It feels like a small bag of dirt to me. I can go up and down the mountain in just one thought, and I know there is a secret room in the front mountain and the back mountain. I still know it now. There is an extra spiritual spring, and there is no geographical location at all. There is no explanation of what is around this mountain. It is as if there is only this mountain. There are so many details that can be counted in words. The author just doesn't write it, and the readers are confused because the protagonist's strength is really average. Most of the sources are with the help of the power of the mountain. Why don't you write more details about this source of power? You watch mountains every day. What do you watch? Don't you understand the southeast, northwest, and northwest? I was scratching my head and scratching my head when I saw it.

I'm 15 years old, but I don't understand the introduction to this novel.

To be honest, the protagonist's setting should be of a management type, slowly transforming the world from point to point, and leading the world to upgrade. Those who are good at writing can challenge group portraits. What is shown so far is just an earthbound spirit. In the future, I guess the "resident" will continue to upgrade, and then at a certain moment it will be integrated with the world, and then it will go to the so-called upper world and continue to follow this process. In essence, it is no different from ordinary fantasy, except that the plug-in becomes an item. There is also the setting of this invincible flow. The pretense and slap in the face still remain in the villain NC who insists on looking for trouble, and then is beaten up by the protagonist. If I want to spice up the plot, I'll add someone who beats the young and then the old. Big brother, times have changed, and if you don't change this book, you will definitely fail Now it's about showing off invisibly, rather than relying on the villain to come to the door to cause trouble. Write more about the impact of something the protagonist does, instead of wasting time writing about how the protagonist upgrades. The routine is too old Of course I have to follow up with better settings. I think these two points I said are insignificant and just treat me as fart. To put it bluntly, this book was okay ten years ago. Nowadays, some people's writing skills are not good, but the settings are better than the previous ones.

Anyone who writes about princess at the beginning is a loser.

What the hell, the princess was kidnapped, she was imprisoned in the mountains, and then why did the emperor bring the child to find you? . . .

Author, why don't you explain what it means to become an immortal instantly?

I still had a question in the first chapter, why didn't the princess die after sleeping with her?

The biggest problem with this book is that the system flow has attracted too many trolls. I don't feel like it when I read it. However, many of the chapter derivation is forced on. To be honest, it doesn't matter. But the biggest problem is that the protagonist almost never comes out. How does the plot come about? It can only be made up like this. If you can accept it, you can read it. If you can't accept it, maybe you really can't accept it. There is no way.

The eldest princess of the royal family is still a master, and she was kidnapped? Are you serious? Even if he is in a weak stage, why is there no one else in the royal family? All I can say about you is that you are quite abstract at the beginning.

There are so many books on the homepage, but none of them cost more than 500,000 yuan?

It's obviously the enemy, but it's still stained with ink for a long time, so just slap him to death and that's it.

Ah? In the first ten chapters, it was said that the royal family wiped out a sect in the grandmaster realm. How could it be so awesome? Ten chapters later, a love rival came to seek revenge and brought his elders who were not in the grandmaster realm. He was still the kind of person who broke into the royal forbidden area. Was he afraid that the royal family could not destroy their family or that his sect had lived too long? What do you think?

In the story, there will be a battle with the Taikoo Shen Sect and the spiritual world in less than 20 years Maybe there will be a fight with the big demon to check whether the male protagonist can rush into the immortal realm 😡 Cultivation world: Open the Qingping Cave and take advantage of the opportunities that may exist inside. After opening it, the turtle will probably go to the spiritual world. The two sides will not be taken into account. If Taikoo does not handle it well, it will probably not open, except Fei is really in a hurry to break through the realm of immortality Linglong World, Ancient World, and the Land of Divine Ruins: The male protagonist's current weakness is the divine soul. Both the Ancient World and the Ancient Divine Sect have desolate-level divine soul elixirs, let's see how the author will arrange it The Taixu Creation Wheel confirms one's own path and can also help enlightenment Demon Realm, Catacomb Demonic Realm: Lie Shanhan's ransom is all a matter of chance, especially the Ten Thousand Demon Pills, and later the Demon Fighting Court. If you have the opportunity, you can get good things like the Nine-tasseled Grain Seed. Otherwise, those big demons can also make elixirs, occupy and loot the Ape Demon Cave, and you should be able to make great progress after understanding the Fire of Nirvana The paint in the underground cave demon realm The Ancient Black Sword should also have a great chance to be as good as the Demon-Suppressing Sword Gu Yuanqing's own abilities and possessions: the power to destroy Jingjing's clone. After thorough research, it should be of great help. The Master of the Demon Sword The same goes for the body. After the black energy is purified, the golden ball may be something with immortal power that can also help The Huntian Yuanhuo in the Jinqueqi Huangdan Sutra directly burns the souls of others and then feeds it back to itself. In the future, the enemies will become Gu Yuanqing's soul elixir ————————Separation————————- Can the Taichu Heavenly Furnace that the heroine is suspected of possessing still be able to keep up? Are there enough demons to kill? In the future, maybe Gu will protect Li Miaoxuan when she comes back to open Mount Taichu Speaking of a very irrelevant point, the Qianyuan Realm traitor Xu Tianjing can be reborn after breaking his arms, so the Eunuch Xu who is following the father-in-law (?) Of the male protagonist should also be able to... Then it would be inappropriate to call him an uncle 🤭

Wouldn't today's authors be able to write without a system?

It is very contradictory from the first chapter. I feel that the author of this book has a problem with his writing ability, and this is true for a series of subsequent questions. There is no sense of taking it for granted in what I write, but rather it feels a bit contradictory. For example, the protagonist should be blessed by cheats and have superior understanding, but he is blinded without follow-up cheats, and then after getting the cheats, he says that the protagonist's secret realm cannot be understood without annotations? Isn't this contradictory? The protagonist, a prince, has a family that has been cultivating for many years. Doesn't he even understand the terminology of cultivation? It's as funny as me saying you don't know the 99 multiplication table after I've already graduated from elementary school. So the details are very complicated. I didn't watch it after that. I feel that if a novel is not about whether the writing is good or not, it should at least be clearly expressed and not contradict itself. If you can't do this, I really feel like you're not suitable for this line of work.

It makes my balls ache. The protagonist knows the name of the princess and knows that the princess is a grandmaster. Then there comes a person with an extraordinary status. He comes to the forbidden area whenever he wants. He is also very strong and has the same name as the princess, but the protagonist cannot guess that this is the princess...

What is this introduction? What, she is a princess. . . . . I originally wanted to see the results of those who became immortals in the mountains. This introduction told what the mountains were like. . . .

After reading it, it is quite novel. Although it has some shortcomings, it is still good enough. A little bit of perspective! The theme of this book should be to take the path of world promotion, which can be the path from Mountain Lord → Territory Lord → Realm Lord. Beiquan Mountain has become the ancestral mountain of this world, but you can consider changing its name. Beiquan is a label of predecessors, which is not suitable for today's times. We need a suitable name, such as Buzhou Mountain, Qingshan? Yuan Qingshan? Beiquan doesn't sound good, but it has a lot of charm like Kunlun and Emei. The author can think of a mountain name related to the protagonist's journey! So far, the specific concept of mountains has not been revealed. For example, how high is a mountain? How many feet wide? How much space does it occupy? It doesn't say how wide it is from east to west, how long it is from north to south, and it's unclear what's on the mountain! It feels so small now, like a straight lonely peak. Since the mountain is growing, it can be lifted at one stage! The growth of Houji Mountain can be enriched. The three cliffs remain unchanged, but there are mountains, water, plains, rivers, lakes, craters, various animals, etc. In the mountain. The three cliffs can also be used to develop things like going to the sea and raising dragons and beasts. As the world grows, the protagonist can be the behind-the-scenes operator. He must have: The three realms are complete, I am the Taoist (this realm), and the people, beasts, and things that come out of the mountains change the world! People, civilization, modern trends of thought, the combination of spiritual cultivation, a fresh and vigorous world Beasts: diverse species, various collisions, conflicts, etc., Representing rich stories Objects: spiritual sources, spiritual seeds, spiritual books, etc., Spiritual sources: spiritual energy source stones, taken out to plant mountains and seas to form spiritual veins, which is also the anchor for the protagonist to control the world. Spiritual seeds: Spiritual seeds nourish people and things, so that the world can be transformed from the mortal world, and people and spirits can be like dragons. Spiritual books: writing books and establishing theories. After being carried forward, the ideas that have been circulated come back and collide, including Confucianism, Taoism, Buddhism, demons, demons, spirits, etc. You can also join the real body to sit on the mountain and watch the vicissitudes of world affairs, avatar into the demon world, or climb the road to heaven, go to ghosts, etc., To acquire knowledge and pass it on. The three realms of this world develop. There is a son in the human world, who forges a holy dynasty in the mortal world, and then becomes the emperor of the heaven, the underworld and other protagonists realize reincarnation, choose the son of the Yin emperor, and so on. The above is purely personal opinion, please forgive me.

In recent chapters, every chapter has a "dumb smile", so embarrassing 😅

There are too few chapter reviews. This is a good book. The writing and content are 90% worthy of sharing.

This book is full of typos and omissions, so I don't want to read the original version.

Practical action support! Come on!