World Planner: Blue Star Just Got Another Version Update!

(This post only reflects my personal, somewhat superficial, thoughts. The author may decide whether to adopt it. If you disagree with the viewpoint, just laugh it off and treat it as entertainment. The actual book's quality depends on the physical book. The armor stacking is successful. The main text follows.)

The idea is good, but the premise is a bit weak. The name "God's Studio" is just awful. Why not just create a cold, emotionless system panel? Calling it "God's Studio" is really low-class. The later version was clearly well-written and then updated, which was fine as it didn't speed up the process. However, the person who passed on the skills acted like a real person and even punished others.

It's also quite abstract. Around chapter 150, there were ten chapters of filler dedicated to Ling Yanchen, who supposedly broke through the limits of BYD. I subscribed to the entire book, and now I instantly regret it. I should have just used a gacha pull to see the latest chapter directly. 😥😅

It felt unappealing. The protagonist's scope was too narrow, and the updates were infrequent, just minor skirmishes. There was no real reshuffling of power among different social classes; everyone just went about their business as usual… and it didn't change the world much… They claimed to be afraid of disrupting the established order, but they never considered rewriting the rules themselves…

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First, it definitely lacks a sense of immersion; second, the protagonist is described too little, just a few sentences. But the book itself is fine; let's see how it develops.

This is utterly boring. It doesn't break down class barriers at all. Cattle are still cattle, dogs are still dogs, and nobles are still the same people. So-called martial artists still bow and scrape before the police, just because they have skins. Do dogs even deserve to be called martial artists? Do they even deserve to be called masters of qi and blood?

I just went back and took a look. In your underground version, the protagonist wanted to see humanity shine like stars, breaking down class barriers, and then what happened? All the deaths were of ordinary people! It's like raising a monster, right? Raising a martial artist whose power can sweep across the world, right? It feels like the author has lost control of the plot.

Over 200 chapters are nonsensical. Someone is just passing by, digging up a rock, not even knowing what use it is, and suddenly they're a wanted criminal. To give an analogy, if I pass by a mountain and see a gold mine, and I casually dig up a piece, although theoretically illegal, how could I possibly be wanted nationwide?

Chapter 450 is still about blood and qi power, which is terrifying. The initial synopsis was about martial artists and the revival of spiritual energy. I initially thought it would be a satisfying read, but looking back, it's nothing special. It's quite padded. It probably intended to be an ensemble piece, but it wasn't well-controlled. Some characters have very long chapters, and with so many characters, the structure feels somewhat scattered.