Seek Immortality Starting from the Blessed Land

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Some novel authors are born with a street-fighting look. Originally, I thought that the setting of your book was quite innovative, and the results should not be so bad. But after reading your second chapter, I think I found the reason. Originally, it was a simple background introduction of the main character, but you had to do nothing but entertain the readers. I feel that the protagonist's time travel is the result of manipulation by the mastermind behind the scenes (the protagonist's body becomes smaller after the time travel, and he still wears the watch before the time travel), which makes readers unhappy. Secondly, it must emphasize the setting of the protagonist's parents, loving husband and wife, and children before the time travel. It's so good. You can wear a gay to time travel. Isn't it good to write about double penetration? After the protagonist travels through time, will there be people who live in the protagonist's house, play with the protagonist's wife, beat the protagonist's children, and will his parents die in depression? If you write it like this, how can readers be involved in the plot? It's okay to make yourself uncomfortable, you deserve it

After reading Chapter 50, the protagonist has a mid-eighth-level sneaky general and three thousand immortal eighth-level early-stage sneaky soldiers. As a result, a mid-level eighth-level commander was so frightened that he broke into cold sweat and felt guilty. All the difficult and fatal tasks are given to the protagonist, and the protagonist happily obeys. After being treated like a dog for so long, people have become stupid, right?

The first time I talked about how privately consecrating gods violated the laws of heaven and how dangerous they were, and then treated me like shit and was solved by a small town. The second time he said that the Celestial Empire strictly prohibits controlling people's hearts. Anyone who violates it will do whatever they want. Then he treated it like shit and it will be done at the state and county level.

The writing is too boring. It's obvious that the author's knowledge of the organization is very short-sighted and relies entirely on hysteria. To give a counterexample, it is full of holes. The plot of killing the water god is a complete failure. There is no evidence and he just kills the water god with the breath of a spell. Then the water god is too rich. According to this, if you want to kill the god, you only need to steal a person. Just make a family talisman, just make a case, and then leave the breath of that talisman, and immediately a bunch of people will start to use every opportunity to eradicate dissidents. You dare to write a plot with such obvious logical errors. It is obvious that the author has not written it carefully at all, and is just mindlessly copying the Ruozhi Gongdou routine on the Internet, and you can't make money. I hope the author will improve in the new year.

Join the military camp. But the protagonist is stupid again and again. Where did the previous reflections of the crafty ship go? He also made stupid mistakes during the war. The author did not die because he was cheating.

Why do you need to time travel with your identity? You have a happy family, a happy life, and even the main god's dimension doesn't want people like you😦

Because of his clone, the protagonist had to protect the blessed land of the gods, so he had to obey the orders of the court. However, the blessed land was saved, the soldiers and horses became stronger, and the protagonist became a white servant again. Why didn't he look like a monk at all? This was just looking for trouble.

The prefect had the power and courage to poison the captain, and the city god killed the water god. I mentioned before that the entire world system is profound and strict, and the world view is described in a large and rigorous way. It is still the extraordinary world and the imperial court, so I just slapped myself in the face so quickly.

How to put it, the bigger the world view, the more brilliant the civilization of cultivating immortals, the more you need to join the big forces, otherwise it will not develop and the channels will not work. Your family is still competing with so many other big forces in the universe for resources. Not only do other big forces have a fixed share, but those ancestors have already developed other worlds, and their collection power is different. What you call golden fingers of rules, others open a small world. I just collected it casually. At that time, when we went out to fight, it was also a group fight. There was no way to go alone or to compete with each other. The world view was the same. Once the multi-dimensional world in the book was spread out, the size of the forces was very different. There were also various cultivation methods of small forces in the early stage, which were too far away from the big forces. The small forces dreamed of treasures, which were standard equipment for other disciples, and there were all kinds of things you had never seen before. There are major ancestors leading the continuous intake of resources from other worlds. To grab resources, several ancestors must join forces. Because the world is too big, the development of other worlds and the confrontation with this world to snatch resources are all discussed above. Eight hundred side doors, three thousand heresy and so on, they are all running errands for others. The above mentioned can be replaced, so the main If you are in this side sect, you won't be able to get along no matter how you do it. Only the more backward civilizations are suitable for that kind. The protagonist works alone, or rises from a small force, because then one person's power can intimidate the entire world. But in your worldview, such a brilliant civilization has been estimated to have been developed by the heavens, otherwise it cannot accommodate so many forces. There are not so many cultivation routes that can be developed. If you still don't understand, just look at the world and the United Nations and you will know. The world's resources and food have long been enough to supply all mankind, but the United States alone accounts for one-fifth of the world's resources. Americans can eat and throw them away, while many Africans are still chewing tree bark. The Wuchang is the Taoist palace, Africa is the heresy, and the undeveloped savages are those mortals.

Cultivation of immortality is not cultivation of immortality, and fantasy is not fantasy. If you write a fairy tale about war, it doesn't matter if the protagonist has strength. If a novice is involved, what else can he do besides opening up the halo of the protagonist? Which immortal writing doesn't take time to develop, you just hit it back and forth, what do you think? ?

I feel like the protagonist is so stupid, big things are unclear, and small things make mistakes constantly. Why is it written like this?

When I saw Blessed Land, I thought it was about farming, but the author was confused. That's outrageous

The introduction is indeed attractive, but the author's writing style is too difficult to pronounce, it makes my head hurt to read it, and there are also problems with the layout. . . But these are not the point. The point is that you start to throw out a lot of settings, and it feels like reading a manual, so I can only say goodbye.

In fact, it is no longer popular to suppress the state. The popular state crushes the game. The author can refer to it.

It slipped away, the creative subject matter was good, and the previous problems were not too big, but in the forty or so chapters, I was poisoned, and what you wrote, I wasted so much power, I almost died, I got such a powerful and rare first-class inheritance, and then I didn't use it, I sent it to the battlefield myself! Others have dangerous clones, and the main body develops quickly. You are doing the opposite. The clone is already in the divine court and can be exchanged for merit resources, and then your main body runs to the battlefield to die. Do you think there are not enough restrictions and you die not fast enough? Your main body is not strong, but your clones are strong enough and you still have a lot of powerful troops. If your main body doesn't become stronger quickly, and you don't help your clones to exchange resources to become stronger, you insist on running to the battlefield. Others are hiding, but you are rushing to send them away?

The name is too awkward, and Dimension Slash also appears. Is it a fairy tale fantasy, or a cartoon animation fantasy? ? ?

Those of you who have read it, Shen Nong, said, "What about this book? I will judge the situation and make a decision as appropriate."

The combat power system is in a mess, I can't stand it even if I pinch my nose. Thousands of eighth-level ones can't beat one seventh-level one, and it will take a bunch of subordinates to do nothing. One time, the ninth level attacked the eighth level, and the next time, the sixth level forced a seventh level city with formations and defensive weapons to almost perish. Since this cultivation system is to attribute great power to oneself, a system of ass soldiers is established.

The setting is good, but the plot is inexplicable. Things are not explained clearly. There is no beginning or end. You have to guess by yourself. Is this the foreshadowing?

After reading a few chapters, I didn't talk about the other poisonous points. I just wanted to talk about whether there are too many people eating official meals in the court today. In addition, there are various forces, local gentry and aristocratic families, various gods in the world, demons and ghosts. Can the common people afford to support them? What kind of misery will it be? After reading a few chapters, I feel that I am tired and panicked and crowded.

The world view is very vast, I like the setting of Blessed Land

The writing is pretty good, and the background setting is pretty good, but the story isn't exciting enough.

I think it's pretty good. The world view feels complete and grand.

Two months😭😭😭

Okay, okay, come on, author, give me your monthly ticket

I also read the recommendation from station B, and it turned out it was a eunuch article? 😅🤔🤔🤔

What about you, the author? You're not leaving, are you? If it doesn't go away, give it a squeak. . . . . . . . . . . . . …  …  … .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .........

I feel that the protagonist is not only drifting but also indecisive. As the author, don't you also want the protagonist to stay in one place? His thinking is still confused! The protagonist is not as decisive as a good old lady if she is not decisive at all!