Lord: Start with a Book of Water Margin

The writing is very good, keep up the good work

The introduction alone is very tempting... The author seems to have set the stage correctly... Only with richer content can it attract readers.

A group of people talking about Liangshan are a group of bandits and so on. There are not many good people. It is annoying to watch. If according to what they said, there is no need to read historical documents in the future. By the same standard, taking Ji Han as an example, Liu Bei suppressed the Yellow Turban Uprising, stabbed Liu Zhang in the back, and seized the foundations of his allies and brothers (Liu Zhang had nothing to do with Liu Bei). How much better than those who bullied orphans and widowed mothers? Zhang Fei and Zhao Yun were convicted of bandits, especially Zhang Fei. His wife Xiahou was not only snatched away from her, but she was also cruel to his subordinates, so much so that she was stabbed in the back by his subordinates. I wonder how a group of people can still sympathize with Zhang Fei when they have to curse each other even after 996. A group of people scolded Wu Yong for earning people to go to the mountain, and his methods were cruel. I was wondering why no one scolded Zhuge Liang when he was trying to earn money from Jiang Wei. Why didn't they consider Jiang Wei's family? Was Jiang Wei not separated from Jiang Wei? Ma Chao brought up a filial son and massacred the city. When Ma Chao came to surrender, I thought Liu Bei didn't refuse. Why didn't anyone accuse Liu Bei of harboring evil? There are also people like Zhang Song who eat inside and outside. Why is criticizing princes, generals and prime ministers such forgivable behavior?

The style of writing is sometimes ancient and sometimes modern. Maybe you want to show off your skills, but I feel a little embarrassed.

More and more people are reading this book with their own eyes😁

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No, just accept it if it's a woman. It's true that you're lustful. If a cast-iron King Kong is neither a Tiangang, earthly evil nor a thunder general, just accept my daughter as a gift to you. The woman also agreed with so many conditions. A runaway. It's so difficult to get settled. There are so many things going on. I don't know, but I thought it was because the protagonist had reached a higher position. I still can't figure out the reason why they accepted the two sumo wrestlers. Isn't it embarrassing for a Bailihou to marry two meat sellers on the street? I don't know how many people have seen it and want it. After a good sleep, I felt ashamed and then gave up. Brother, are you, a strong man in a feudal society, ashamed of such a thing? Are you a native, not a time traveler?

They are all classical Chinese, and I am too tired to read them. The subject matter is quite good, but I cannot finish reading it at all. I read novels mainly to kill time and relax, not to learn classical Chinese. 🙂 My grades will be much better if I write this book in vernacular Chinese.

It's well written, but I suggest you pay attention to the length of the notes. In a previous novel, after the first hundred chapters, all the items and sources were introduced, which was like a eunuch.

Have you written "Lords of the Three Kingdoms: Beginning in the Mouth of a Giant Python"? ? ? The style, writing, and subject matter are all similar.

Before this book became a hit, it ranked first on the book friends list

How should I put it? The writing style makes people feel impatient, but you can't say that the plot is bad. Anyway, I am too lazy to read it.

1. What's the use of writing so many general skills apart from the word count? Whether it is the main world or the fantasy world, we have fought several battles, and there have been so many daily training and battles. Is there even one description of the role of this general's skill? If not, then why did you write it? Moreover, everyone who conquers must write about these skills. Your chapter is only about 2,000 words, and almost one or two hundred words are written about these completely useless things. What's the point? 2. The plot of this book is uneventful. It has hundreds of chapters. It can be summarized in just a few words. It's about collecting people and selling things, interspersed with fighting. That's it! Moreover, the largest part of the entire book is recruiting people. However, once you collect people, they have no other use, just like an NPC. 3. The characters are highly homogeneous and have basically no role in promoting the plot. And what is your plot? It's been hundreds of chapters and I'm still repeating the rhythm of accepting people and selling things Author, please think about it yourself, I hope you can write better and better, I'm withdrawing it

After seeing the 210 photos, I felt that this book was a waste of a good idea. The beginning was good, the plot was okay in the middle, and the narrative was interesting. Later, when I wrote about Lu Zhishen recommending Zhang Qing and his wife, it became a bit disgusting. In the end, the two ogres were killed by others. The person sent by the protagonist to recruit brought back the two cubs, and there were still people shouting for revenge? What did the author think? Is this screening readers?

I was fine after just three hundred chapters at the beginning, but suddenly I saw that Yuanyuan Yanyan had been taken away for no reason, and I was very nervous... I couldn't watch anymore.

If you have the style of Water Margin, you should never be a eunuch.

It's fully ordered, but what can I say? I've been getting irritated lately, as if I'm reading a manual.

Let me give you a suggestion. There are a lot of rubbish among the original Tiangang Disha Liangshan heroes. Those people can be discarded. Fang Latianhu has many very fierce characters under his command. They can be used to replace those rubbish in Liangshan. Now that the Tiangang Disha Order is in your hands, whoever you want to be canonized as Tiangang Disha.

It's tasteless to eat, but it's a pity to throw it away After watching this period of time, the image left in me is to find a woman, accept the subordinates, and keep repeating the same routine. There is no passion or waves, and it is extremely dull.

Concubine

When reading this book, you cannot bring modern moral concepts into it. Originally, there were a bunch of bad guys among the heroes of Liangshan. They were originally the devil from the sky who came to the world and brought disasters to the world. The few moral ones in it were all really different. The protagonist recruits them. Some of them are recruited before they die. They can use the reason that their nature is not bad and they can be changed. But for those who have begun to eat human flesh and enjoy killing people, I don't know how the author will recruit them. You can't say that they are loyal, right?

Your first book, even if it ends hastily, is better than The Eunuch... The first book is The Eunuch. If you open a new book, how many people are willing to waste money to follow it?😒😒😒😒😒😒

I didn't expect that the author could still remember this book. I was so touched.

Author, the magic weapons and props you got for the protagonist are basically useless. I feel that the protagonist basically doesn't use them. The content is too routine and a bit boring. In addition, you entertain every time you recruit a hero. The content is too repetitive.

The author writes that the protagonist has the book Water Margin, but the characters in it don't understand anything about their temperament and are a bit mentally retarded. Otherwise, they should not write the book with the Water Margin, and just write about the Tiangang Earthly Order.

The protagonist also accepted Song Jiang. If he accepted General Song, it would be a bit poisonous. Now that I see Chapter 103, I want to ask first.

After Pig's Foot took over Song Jiang, the protagonist made a wedding dress for Song Jiang, and Song Jiang took away all his property. After that, Pig's Foot died and the end

One chapter will be updated on the 15th, and another chapter will be updated on the 21st. With this frequency, it is difficult to give you a monthly ticket.

After reading the first half, I always felt like it was tasteless and a pity to abandon. Of course, I have only seen the thirty or forty chapters after paying for it. Just watch it first and see what changes happen later.

The writing is pretty good