There’s Something Wrong with the Narration of My Adventures!

Shennong is dead, 😰 it exploded. After reading dozens of chapters, all I can say is that it's completely stream-of-consciousness writing. 1. The main plot is completely unclear. The known protagonist, Xia Ya, is from a typical Western fantasy village with a sword saint uncle and a witch princess as his starting point.

Shennong is here! The writing is terrible, the plot reads like an ancient Western story collection, many symbols are missing, and overall it just doesn't click and the development is inexplicable.

I'm completely confused. It doesn't feel like a novel, a first-person meeting record, nor does it resemble the ending of other novels where the protagonist goes through a process while everyone else goes to fight the final boss.

"There are very few women in the world more beautiful than you." Seeing this sentence left me utterly speechless. What is it that makes men nowadays insist on comparing their appearance with women? They're just plain sissies, ha! It's hard to understand what's going on in the minds of authors writing male-oriented novels these days.

You're trying to write Western fantasy like Gu Long, but your writing is terrible, just pure filler. It's so cringeworthy, it feels like watching Ximen Chuixue from "The Forbidden City" introducing weapons—but he's not even as good at it!

It's not good; it's stream-of-consciousness writing, and the author's writing is mediocre—just pure imitation.

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Overall, the technique is quite good and it's a pleasant read, deserving an above-average rating. However, the content is lacking, and I hope the author will be more careful with the content when releasing a new book.

To put it simply, the first chapter had too many foreshadowing elements and incomplete information, along with numerous changes in pronouns, which caused reading fatigue. Consequently, it was difficult to grasp the main plot. By the end of the first volume, all I had was a guess about the protagonist's code of conduct. Even a one-sentence summary would have been much better.

Why write the ending before the beginning? Reading the second volume after finishing the first is tedious. 😰