Douluo Dalu: Starting with Forging Zanpakuto

My experience is that no matter how powerful or extraordinary an item is, such as the Tai Chi Diagram, Pangu Axe, Qiongqi Chaos, or Golden Crow and Moon Goddess, once it becomes a Martial Soul, it gives off a feeling of "Which Dou Di dares to dismount and fight?"

It's too artsy. Even with the Douluo Continent system, it's still incredibly boring. If you like artsy writing, you should write your own original works. 😥

Snowflakes, weak? It's best not to include that in the description.

Your writing style is flawed and completely unsuitable for fanfiction.

For the first ten chapters, I don't understand what I read?

It's been diagnosed as a case of "intellectualism"; I didn't see any meaningful plot in the first ten chapters.

It left me confused. I wanted to write something unique, but it turned out to be like a riddle, with a touch of pretentious intellectualism.

It's well-written, are you not going to continue?

Today Chad played a bunch of Yhwach 🙂.

Dear author, your new book is great! I've joined the new book investment group, please update!