Path of the Celestial Spirit Official, Beginning as a Dao Soldier

After being convinced, the fiancée broke off the engagement. The protagonist did not feel embarrassed and even gave her a set of gifts and prepared a bunch of gifts for her. Awesome

Just say that the children of the family in your house have been servants for generations and are very loyal. Can't you focus on nurturing them? If that doesn't work, just use resources to pile up. A large number of 2nd turns can still be piled up. It is illogical to cultivate someone who is the number one beauty.

I can see, but I have diaphragm. The advantage is that the subject matter is better and the story coherence is okay. I saw the abandonment in Chapter 54. I see some people complaining about breaking off the engagement, but I don't think it's a bad point. After all, the manpower is not enough to support it, and the characters of the uncle's family that are created later are also okay. But the problem is that you want to throw Fangshi out, and later because the enemy attacks the Fangshi that you have sent out, you run to help again. That is no different from not sending it out, and you can also return funds; of course, I can also give you a round. It is because you want to avoid the Ying family from using you as a swordsman. However, you should also know that others attacked Fangshi because of you, but you were still so arrogant when you went out for a parade, and the fight lasted for a long time. You waited until one or two of your men were dead before using the Manado Pot. You didn't have enough manpower, but you were so showy at the same time. When Zhou Mu comes back later, he won't take advantage of others and accuse them. It's best if he can cry and complain. You say the beauty of a gentleman will be killed in five lifetimes. But don't worry about whether to kill or not. It's best if it's effective, and it doesn't matter if it's ineffective. It's not impressive. Not to mention that based on your background, you think the Xun family may not occupy the stage for you, but Zhou Mu will definitely not dare to kill you. Another one wants level 3 people from your family. You don't have level 3 people. If you don't say it, they may not ask for your rampant soldiers afterwards. If you say it, they will definitely want it! Okay, I'm rounding it up for you. You want to develop a wave there, as an excuse to change the development map. But the mage who is about to reach level 3 and is the eldest son of the Xun family at level 3 later greeted Zhou Mu. Zhou Mu may not necessarily treat you like a biological father, but he will definitely I won't refuse you. Zhou Mu only needs to mention something, and it works. In modern times, let alone feudal society, there should be no unpleasant things, but the result is the old-fashioned plot of pretending to slap people in the face, and still using Zhou Mu and the eldest son of the Xun family to suppress others. The other thing is that someone gave you the Waidan method, but you still picked it up, and the character didn't like it. In short, it is a pity to throw away the food if it is tasteless and tasteless.

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you watch the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you watch the fifth update, readers' support spontaneously forms, and the voices of praise become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updating may not solve all difficulties, but more than 90% of the problems come from insufficient updates. So how long has it been and you are still fishing without updating? Are you worthy of everyone?

Do you think there is a future for working hard?

The protagonist is too crazy. The emperor takes the protagonist to go to the ancient history. The protagonist not only frees his subordinates, but also participates in the journey to the west. He has caused huge karma. How can he pay it back in the future? Besides, you are already so crazy that you are a half-immortal killing a true immortal, and then you use a true immortal to defeat the upper immortal. How powerful you introduced the upper immortal to you in the beginning, and how much you will pull your crotch later!        ，，，，，，，！ Crossing two levels to point out the Immortal Ancestor's mistakes is really exciting. The strict laws in front of you are all nonsense. Several Taoist palace officials have offended you, and you are killing three tribes! Besides, the character of the Left-behind Immortal Ancestor is a small-minded person. He would snatch every opportunity for his own daughter to become an immortal. Do you really think he wouldn't dare to cut the protagonist alive? His own family has been in charge of the Taoist court for thousands of years, doesn't he understand how powerful it is? Also, Dugu Sword Immortal did not obey military orders and ran to the main battlefield to grab credit, which almost led to the annihilation of the entire army below the True Immortal. He was not punished, refused to do anything, and received a huge amount of merit. It is outrageous. After all, the impartial law enforcement of the two Immortal Ancestors is still the same as that of aristocratic families, and even the disrespect for the emperor on the battlefield seems to have never happened. It is too serious! What I hate the most is the journey to Ancient History. The bosses in Journey to the West are at least Daluo Jinxian who is plotting this situation. The protagonist is still playing tricks and showing off his superiority. To be honest, I feel that the protagonist's combat power is not even as good as that of Ruyi Zhenxian. When the protagonist entered the Emperor Universe, he said that Taoism is different and his strength cannot be used. There is no such restriction when entering Ancient History. It's really funny! It's still the kind of keyboard warrior mentality. If you are below yourself, the laws are strict; above yourself, everyone is equal!

Poison Point 1: No excitement, the content jumps forward, the perspective is confused, the content is not whitened, and the description cannot be transformed into a scene in the mind. Poison point 2: The transition is abrupt and the content is indifferent, which is very dramatic. There is no link to the plot, just write whatever comes to mind. Poison Point 3: The combat power is confused, the characteristics are not obvious, and the fighting scenes are simply written in a jumping style. Poisonous Point 4: When describing the protagonist's aura, there is an inexplicable and strange intellect. It feels very awkward and disconnected from the previous description. Poison Point 5: The grand scene described has no feeling at all, the details are insufficient, incomplete, and mechanically applied. It feels like you know that I won't write everything, which is really outrageous.

I wrote a lot of foreshadowing before, but suddenly I found a half-demon subordinate to be my wife, and then I got another half-demon? ? ? It's really poisonous. , I really can't stand it anymore. Farewell.

Damn it, I really can't stand it anymore Chapter 29 Damn it, you're just an idiot. Damn it. If you can't beat me, just run away. If you can beat me, then beat me. Damn it. If you can't beat me, you've killed so many people by pretending. Damn it. You're still blaming people for asking for help.

It was okay before Chapter 20, but after Chapter 20 it was too discouraging, forced to reduce intelligence, and the more you write, the more poisonous it becomes. Other authors become more deified as they go to the back, but you become more poisonous as you go to the back 😰