Path of the Celestial Spirit Official, Beginning as a Dao Soldier

Wow, the protagonist isn't ashamed at all that his fiancée broke off the engagement; he even gave her a market town and a bunch of other gifts. Impressive!

Why can't we focus on cultivating the servants in our own household who have served the master for generations and are extremely loyal? If that doesn't work, just use resources to build up a large number of second-tier characters. It doesn't make sense to insist on cultivating a number one beauty.

It's watchable, but there are some unsettling aspects. Its strengths are the good subject matter and decent story coherence. I dropped it after chapter 54. I've seen some people complaining about the annulment of the engagement, but I don't think it's a major flaw.

When you update once, minor flaws will be magnified, and your writing style will be criticized. When you're up two hours in a row, a little patience is born, and the plot's progress becomes more important. When you're up past midnight, small praises begin to emerge, and the number of dead harvests begins to decline.

The protagonist is too arrogant. When the Emperor took him on a journey to ancient history, the protagonist not only released his subordinates but also got involved in the Journey to the West, creating a huge karmic debt. How will he repay it in the future? Besides, you, a half-immortal, killed a true immortal, which was already incredibly arrogant.

Do you think working hard will lead to a future?

Flaw 1: No satisfying moments, content jumps around in a disjointed manner, perspectives are confusing, content is not presented clearly, and descriptions cannot be visualized in the mind. Flaw 2: Abrupt transitions and unengaging content are very distracting. The plot lacks coherence and feels disjointed, written as if just random thoughts.

After all that buildup, suddenly he finds a half-demon subordinate to be his wife, and then they have another half-demon?! This is truly horrifying. I can't bear to watch any longer. Goodbye.

Damn it, I can't take it anymore! Chapter 29 Damn it, you're a complete idiot! If you can't beat them, run away; if you can, fight! Damn it, if you can't beat them, you act all high and mighty, killing so many people and then blaming them for asking for help!

The first 20 chapters were okay, but after 20 they became too discouraging. It felt like the author was deliberately making the story less intelligent, and it got increasingly toxic. Other authors become more legendary as they progress, but yours just gets worse. 😰