Knife-Throwing

I think your biggest problem is that the world view is too big. In the middle and late stages, it involves various gods and gods from multiple worlds, and then the description of the macro background of the multiverse is foreshadowed, and the writing power cannot support it, and then it collapses. Pei Butu Gou also has the same problem. In the middle and late stages, there are so many different forces and roles involved, and the pig's feet have to be upgraded. If you have no idea, you can only limit the level of the pig's feet. Even if the gods are flying all over the sky, the realm is still small Karami. I was reading the Water Monkey recently, and it provided a new idea. It is quite interesting to directly promote in place to promote regional upgrades without changing the map.

The early stories about rural monsters are good, and the author has put in a lot of effort into them. The overall layout is very solid, but it is a bit lacking in the aura of a great online article. Evaluation of Tasty Food The story will develop in the future. First of all, I have to give credit to the author. It does not focus on Xiao Shuangwen's revenge and slap in the face, but the travel mode of three people working together. I feel that this is the author's attempt to break through the previous dry flat style, and there is some progress. To sum up, the rhythm of Realm is very solid without making readers too uncomfortable. It deserves applause for having put a lot of effort into it. But what I said before lacks a little bit of the aura of a master. This aura is not about how macroscopically you spread out and intuitively introduce the novel, nor how big or high-level you make the world. But it is a little less interesting. If you slap a person who persuades others to be generous, he will become stable and impatient. This is called persistence. Every little thing can support an interesting life, and a little thing can destroy countless futures worth looking forward to. Ask others to put it down, but don't pick it up yourself first. Can I survive the world of mortals if I only think about transcendence and make my own utilitarian calculations? (I feel like I am off topic, if I don't have the talent to write, haha)

It's really good-looking. It would be nice if there were more updates 😂

The writing style and skills are excellent, and the plot is also very good. The only thing is that the protagonist is stupid because he has a pig's head between his shoulders. It feels so frustrating to write, and it makes me uncomfortable to read it.

Why is there no live audio version?

It's hard to find such a good novel

Is it true that people who are lost in the mortal world cannot imagine things they have not seen? As a reader of author Zhang, I like what he writes the most. I like his thoughtful writing style! Dig into yourself and treat most of the readers who are chasing books as readers. If he wanted to cater to some readers and win the praise they spread word for word, he would just "clean the manuscript" and update the content of the story, and there would never be a "tiger head" in the early stage of the book and a "snake tail" in the later stage. For readers who are stuck in fictional and fantasy plots, you have a manuscript to wash, so feel free to write it down! Everyone is happy, right? He sees who wants what plot, can't he write flowers and brocades in his writings, pile up huge "candy" in the "sons" Xumijie, and spread all over the world with extreme "freedom"? We also make great efforts to let readers see the projection of themselves with imaginary "wings" in the world of "Spiritual Creation", drinking dragon blood wine and eating phoenix gall banquet in secret in the world of "Spiritual Creation" until they are so tired that they can't help but spit it out! For me, "I am willing to continue eating until I vomit it out." The fantasy plot that opens and closes at every turn is just to be different from real life! ○Assuming that Li Yan had read "The Eight Parts of the Dragon", he certainly did not have the leisure of Mr. Fan to write "The Eight Parts of the Dragon" from memory and publish it in his "present life". Because Li Yan's world is far more "vast" and "lively" than one person's world. Should we change Duan Yanqing's name and surname and call him the number one "down-and-out beggar"? If the beggar "Wuyi" achieves Duan Yanqing's level, he is a "god" among beggars. Other beggars think of "freedom and happiness", he thinks of the throne. Who can imagine what he will do next after he really gets the throne? Other authors don't know, but Author Zhang will "demonstrate" the most likely ending of Duan Yanqing in the article! I think he is someone who has some challenges in the writing process. I think some people are boring, such as Duan Yanqing. What's there to write about when he went to bed in court? The imperial commander personally conquers Zhengga, which is a very convenient ending. I wonder how author Zhang will flesh out his character? ○Some moviegoers wrote this review of "The Promise" - Wu Huan's neglect and Kunlun's unreasonable cheating are the two main points of criticism for "The Promise". But in fact, the character design of Kunlun is not only very self-consistent, it can even be said to be very clever, and it can also redeem some of the failures of Wu Huan's character design. For example, the existence of Kunlun points out a fatal flaw in Wu Huan's logic. In "Wu Huan||The Secret of Wu Ji", we once summarized that one of Wu Huan's trump cards is "Only slaves are one's own." ←(Original excerpt) The Kunlun slave played by Zhang Dongjian said to the general Guangming: "Follow you, there will be meat to eat!" Wu Huan's explanation for everything he did to Qingcheng: "You lied to me, you made me lose the opportunity to be a good person." Wu Huan said to Guangming: "You have always been my idol!" The slave leader said to Guangming: "Slaves can't walk, they can only crawl!" / / For the values of ancient Chinese people, Kunlun is Kunlun, and Kunlun slaves are Kunlun slaves. The Kunlun slave in "The Promise" should not have any "hidden promise" meaning that symbolizes Kunlun. Wu Huan never regarded Kunlun slaves as human beings, let alone one of his own! The person who designed Wu Huan in the script did not imagine "Kunlun" as a "person"! So, when moviegoers' reviews pick out the core of "The Promise", how can they confuse Kunlun with Kunlun Slave? The moviegoer called this Kunlun slave Kunlun in the original text. Later, his "beautiful qualities" were compared to the towering mountain Kunlun. In the story of "The Promise", such a Kunlun slave is named after Kunlun, which is really far-fetched. Commonly known as, overthinking. What is wrapped in the armor of flowers is not General Guangming. Wu Huan is superficial and cruel. What the movie criticizes is Guangming and Wu Huan! What did Kunlun slave do to be compared to "Kunlun" by moviegoers? His timely appearance saved Qingcheng whose vain dream was shattered? Then, as a slave with absolutely nothing, what else did he do that could be compared to the famous Chinese mountain "Kunlun"? "The Promise" is obviously a romance film based on the morbid love concept with broken glass inside the bloody buns. Li Yan did not write "The Eight Parts of the Dragon" for people to appreciate. Even the leader of the Beggar Clan still doesn't know who "Duan Yanqing" is and what his experience and origins are. Watching the sword while drunk, I dreamed back... ...... ▼ Shopkeeper Wu said solemnly: "With Xiangzhu's skills and techniques, as long as he is not surrounded by the masters of Taixuan Orthodox Sect, he will not be able to go anywhere in the world." "Kang And there is a Cockscomb Snake God protecting him. No matter how many knife bandits there are on the mountain, they can all be killed in one night. " " I guess they were held back by something." "You are right." The woman nodded, but her eyes were still full of worry. "The promotion of the leader failed. The sect is torn apart, and several incense masters have different ideas. If this continues, they may be defeated by the imperial court. Shopkeeper Wu shook his head firmly and said, "Huh, let them be free for a while. As long as the incense master is promoted successfully, the cult will be integrated and the rebellion will be eliminated." ... ... ... "Don't worry." A fierce light flashed in Shopkeeper Wu's eyes, "Originally, I was helpless, but now Xianyang City's rivers and lakes are in chaos, it's time to fish in troubled waters!" ......... The night is getting darker, and the candlelight in the side room of the Taoist Pavilion is bright. "Come on, let's go!" Shali Fei picked up the wine in the bowl and drank it in a few sips. He wiped his lips and said, "The man named Wu is really rich, and he is willing to use this old Xifeng wine." Wang Daoxuan also drank a sip. He opened his mouth and squinted his eyes and said: "Yes, it is sour but not astringent, sweet but not greasy, bitter but not sticky, spicy but not irritating to the throat, and fragrant but not pungent. It is indeed the 'five specialties'." ... ... ... Poisonous scorpions are also crawling everywhere. "Ah——!" "Hurry up!" Screams rang out, and several evil beggars endured the pain and ran away. At Li Yan's signal, Sha Lifei did not chase him out, but stood in the courtyard and laughed, "You are so young, you dare to trouble your Grandpa Sha, you deserve it!" After that, the three of them prepared to return to the room. They know this is just a small episode. Although the Beggar Clan has a large number of people, it is a mixed bag of good and bad, good and bad. Only those core members are the ones who really take action. And they also have the biggest hidden danger, which is the Beggar's Den itself. Quoted from Chapter 50 Night Attack, Storm and Storm

Let me summarize the events in this chapter of Chapter 55, which was updated on June 2, and express it as follows: The result of a person mistaking a "bandit". It is even the result of people making bad friends by mistake. After all, whichever of your "bad friends" probably doesn't want you to have your eyeballs gouged out or skinned alive! Maybe it's just... A friend of your friend... An "accident"... Don't feel sorry for and cherish it as a "friendship-like" binding factor between the two of you! The tragic situation of the people in the book, what I call "light and airy", is it because of my cold heart? Everyone knows that people have two skins, and they are very free to say whatever they like. What does it mean to be stupid? People who talk about "King's Law" in places where there is no "King's Law" must be stupid! So, whether in the real reincarnation or in the summary of the story chapter, it is very important whether people have the "King's Law" in their hearts, right? After a few days of research, I, Xiao Xu, came to the conclusion that the synopsis of "Eternal Life Eyes" by author Zhang may have a congenital defect! According to my observation, if the five elements clearly lack the "king law" of the world, the official "rules" of Qidian are required to try their best to "extinguish" the small flames, right? Everyone is like a miniature Golden Crow Divine Dynasty. Regardless of the fact that a story with the theme of "ignoring the king's laws" is still managed and arranged by a person like him. I think the author Zhang has always been a master of writing who cares more about the survival of the "King's Law" in his works and devotes himself to preaching the "King's Law". "Eternal Life Eyes" begins in a world where "the king's law is corrupted", right? In the middle and late stages of writing, when he reached the "realm" of Xuanhuang and the "realm" of Buddhism and Taotie, he no longer knew what the "King's Dharma" was, right? Because the author Zhang no longer knows the "King's Law", once he breaks away from the category of "the world has King's Law", the "King's Law" gradually disappears in their world in the book. Without laws and regulations, the world will return to barbarism and chaos! If it becomes painful for him to fill in the gaps when writing stories, and it becomes painful for readers to read, then they are not too far away from 'abandoning books'! If there is a cause, there must be an effect. The end of the result is the "answer"! From what I can see so far in writing this book, author Zhang wants to overcome his own random thoughts that affect the quality of his work. This is a very correct attitude! Chapter 64 updated on June 6th. Yuan Qu thought so, and the author wrote it this way. I think the writing is quite exciting! I think it doesn't matter if what he wrote is really connected with "local atmosphere" or falsely connected with "local atmosphere", the Jianghu style revealed here is very strong. There may be other book friends who have different feedback from me. They feel that what the author "explains" in a continuous line of ink is just his "experience" gained from "being a philistine" in reality, and it is not like the "heroic world" that many book friends, including me, hope to see in their hearts? Does "everyone understand the truth"? Because they understand, do many people who read this story choose "silence"? Old man Zhou Pan doesn't write much at the moment. If I were the author, his "character" would still have some room for "detours" on the stage of this book. The thousands of endings before he receives his lunch and takes the curtain call still depend on author Zhang's arrangement. No matter what else, it is absolutely true that Yuan Qu is a "bandit", an "incident" that Li Yan met in his youth, and a "harmful friend". Zhou Pan and Yuan Qu were temporary "cronies" who pulled each other into the "abyss". The reason why they can choose to be bound to each other for a long time is because they once thought that each other was the "best shortcut" to each other! However, as many years as the bad people have caused trouble in the "township", the good people have suffered disaster for as many years. Isn't it? Why did author Zhang insist on writing about 'painful' things again? I am also confused, why can good guys never defeat bad guys? Asking others, readers who want to know how the author "picks up" bad guys, why? Some people are so nice that people can't help but feel disgusting emotions in their hearts. Life is like a new chess game. What are the advantages of those good people in many books? This time, I was unwilling to face my "weakness". Is it because good people neither have the capital nor the courage to be "martyrs"? Is pain different from pain? It's the same. Currently, author Zhang has something to say about "Jiang Hu". He expressed it through Sha Lifei and Yuan Qu's mouth and tone. This is exactly why I was too lazy to argue or argue after reading certain chapters of some novels, and did not want to cause "disputes and debates". It seems that author Zhang and I have almost the same "conditioned reflex" towards this kind of thing? The vast majority of "Zhou Pan" or simply "princes and generals" in the past, must have chosen "blood relatives" as successors to their careers, such as sons, nephews, brothers, mothers of children, or sons-in-law if their daughters are not good enough. As for the apprentices who feel "close" in their hearts, their first choice is to become the apprentice who has become the son-in-law and do the training and training accordingly. Why is human nature so "different"? Yuan Qu in the previous chapter already knew that he would not be able to "normally inherit" the business of their old Zhou family! It's not just because he himself is a person who has no compromise on strength and moral integrity. Otherwise, those who oppose, those who protest, and those who resist are not only the many relatives and friends who have various "concerns", but also the "iron followers" of the "old guys" who need to be handed over to the "next boss" in their business industries, business "partners", new and old subordinates, and even "servants" within the family. Why and what reason do they have for not opposing and resisting the pseudo-successor who is "not trusted and accepted by everyone"? Many examples. The person who is "in charge" of a big family is different from the so-called "head of the family" on the "home page" of a family of three, six, eight and ten. How can a person with no roots, no career, no achievements, take away the power of a "family business" that supports hundreds of people, including those with and without deeds, inside and outside? What are you making a fuss about? It's not like it's a joke, it's just a joke! When you were a kid, you never got tired of playing "play house" with little girls, boys and friends! "Commander Zhao" mistakenly believed in the thugs and bandits, and colluded with them in order to obtain the property of the "master" family. As expected by the "old rivers and lakes in the upper reaches" who came and went one after another, he was "tricked to death" by a swarm of people without any surprise? If you want to rely on others and then cling to the "powerful people", it is really impossible if you don't have a certain amount of "brain" or a "luck" that is as vast as the sky! If it were not difficult to "get along with others", everyone would be the president, incense owner, vice-president, gang leader, gambling house owner, or worse, Shali Fei, or the rich man Lu who died in the "sex calamity". ▼ However, Shali Fei was stunned: "Commander Zhao!" ... The only living person in the village was Zhao Cheng. This eldest disciple of the Zhao Family Quan and the leader of the Lu Family Guardian Academy has had his eyes gouged out and his legs chopped off, and he lives alone in the village like an evil ghost. Wang Daoxuan and Li Yan both looked at each other. Didn't Commander Zhao become a traitor? He hooked up with the concubine in red. Before leaving, he swindled a sum of money and ran away with the money? Why did you appear here again? ... "Cuilan and I were both forced!" When Commander Zhao knew the identities of Li Yan and others, he was first shocked that they had escaped the disaster, and then told the whole story angrily in a hoarse voice. ... ... ... Seeing that this once high-spirited man was forced to become a human being, a ghost or a ghost, everyone felt sad. /Quoted from (Updated on June 2) Chapter 55 The Truth of the Tragedy ▼ What a fool. If I had known better, I would have ignored him. Yuan Qu felt extremely regretful. Throughout the years, he had Zhou Pan's backing, and everything went smoothly. Coupled with the flattery of the people around him, he always thought that he had unparalleled tricks, but he never thought that many things were just because others didn't dare to offend Zhou Pan, so they pretended to be ignorant and suffered losses. Of course, Yuan Qu himself doesn't think so. He quickly left the secret passage, exited the cave entrance, and jumped on his horse. I was about to leave, but there was a trace of hesitation in my eyes. Following Chen Fapup, he would definitely have to hide in Tibet. Besides, he didn't even have time to take away all the belongings he had accumulated in his life, so he had nothing. But escaping alone is equally risky. Thinking of the people he had offended over the years, Yuan Qu couldn't help but feel fear in his heart. Only then did he realize that in the vast world, without Xianyang City, without Zhou Pan and the White Ape Gang, he was nothing! /Quoted from (Updated on June 6) Chapter 64: It's your own fault

The author decides what to do😒

I like the author Zhang's books because of his charming writing, the layered progression of plots, and the outstanding sense of narration! His foreshadowing strokes are becoming more and more "advanced"! Foreshadowing here, I try to explain the logic that appears in this book. 1. Explain some aspects and foundations of the profound existence of the royal family as the background of the times to the "government and the public", to "Jianghu" and "Xuanmen". Why is the royal family not "weak" at this time? This world is not a pure survival rule in the "Xianxia World". It is different from the multiple worlds in Zhang's "Eternal Life Eyes". Making "firearms" still relies on "side door" skills. In fact, it is detrimental to the human race's pursuit of immortality and the cultivation of gods. 2. Author Zhang said that the Vulcan Spear Team of the Prince of Shu's Palace could "scare away" trapped dragons. Instead of besieging the Jiao, rather than cooking the Jiao. The trapped dragon was able to successfully break through the siege, and it also escaped from the siege of the Vulcan Spear Team. After that, if the Vulcan Spear Team wants to surround the trapped dragon, it may not be as easy as chasing and escaping. There may also be multiple "defeats" in which everyone will be injured, the gunman, the trapped dragon, and the people along the way! 3. The old woman Baoqin tried her best to hide the matter of "catching insects", just like the Shu Palace did not want more people to know that he had a Vulcan Spear Team. Not to mention showing up to help catch Jiao, even if the palace is under siege, the Emperor will not throw "evidence" in the face of the Shu Palace to force him to drink. The Shu Palace will not come forward and let the gun team show up to "King Qin" outside the palace. 4. Explain that the world in author Zhang's book is very rich, built-in 😡 (The foreshadowing set here lists questions) ▼After saying this, the old woman holding the piano turned around and disappeared into the darkness. And the weird man with the facial makeup cursed, "What are you doing standing around stupidly? Come and work quickly." With an order, dozens of people walked out of the darkness, all wearing armor and carrying Vulcan guns... /Quoted from Chapter 471 The mantis stalks the cicada, and the oriole follows behind ▼ If you want to get the gunpowder quota, you have to have someone in the middle. Li Yan and the others were fortunate to have a good relationship with Momen, who was in charge of the Ministry of Industry, so they did not face difficulties in purchasing gunpowder. And these people in front of them all carry Vulcan Spears on their backs. Counting carefully, there were twenty or thirty people. ... ... This power is extremely terrifying. Dozens of divine fire guns fired volleys, and even the troublemaker in Shennongjia had to flee. The Duwei Division is the emperor's personal army. A guard station can only be equipped with two or three guns at most. How can it be such a luxury. These people were well-trained. After cleaning up the debris on the ground and erasing all traces, they quickly led the carriage away. /Quoted from Chapter 472 The Murder Case at Wuhou Temple 😡 (The foreshadowing of the previous article has begun to be filled in here. Explain the question) ▼ A fierce light flashed in Tang Ling's eyes, "Senior Pei has taken refuge in the Prince of Shu's palace. Since he is a key criminal of the imperial court, why not send more people to encircle and suppress him?" The old woman glanced at it and said, "The matter of the 'Qin Insect', I don't want too many people to know that there are many masters hidden in the Chengdu Mansion, and there are too many people here, so that thing can't be mine." /Quoted from Chapter 473 of "The Sword Fighter" The Sidemen Gathered

Okay, the information is detailed and self-explanatory! A good writer, the work is excellent and is considered to be of the highest quality.

A very unique book with a martial arts theme, a combination of Chinese martial arts and folk customs, which is quite innovative. Li Yan, a young swordsman from Guanzhong, encountered a strange incident and entered the world. He met his companions, traveled across the land of China, and experienced various folklore and fantasy stories. The author has collected a large amount of information about Chinese martial arts and folk customs, and also presented intangible cultural heritage such as boxing, drumming, shadow puppetry, Taoism, and iron flowers. Even if there are no huge fairy scenes, it will not affect the sense of enjoyment. The author uses solid writing to present a pure Chinese fantasy style.

Isn't it sensible?

Update!

Talking to people like Shopkeeper Wu has both advantages and disadvantages. The truth is that this old man Wu usually only has two purposes when talking to people. If Namba Wan doesn't want to know what he wants to know, the other purpose is to establish "friendship". When someone offends someone, it is rare for them to be straight-talking. If you have some friendship and are not "enemies", you will know how people say "harmony brings wealth"! The big disadvantage is that you may not feel anything when he tries to trick you. Do things to him, and if you don't look for trouble, trouble will come to you. At this time, he was just a man-eating jackal, tiger, and leopard. Whether you have sinned against Him or not. He has chosen not to cheat you, but only because "profit comes first", this is it! Ordinary people really don't dare to have "friendship" with him. This is a piece of wisdom, not a piece of history. Presumably many people, including gamblers who have no "little friendship" with him, cannot clearly see his face in this life. From the beginning, as the owner of a casino, he would not have a true relationship with any gambler. At that time, he was friendly and popular because the gamblers had "net worth" and could go to great lengths to cheat the game. Ye Qingmei and Shali Fei will not tell you how many pits there are, how big the pits are, the scale of the game, and all kinds of "brutal" methods. It may be because it is "inconvenient to get involved" in business matters, or maybe they just don't know. It's not an expert who wouldn't say, "In everything, remember, there is no love without reason, and there is no hatred without reason." It's okay to be uncertain about "Shopkeeper Wu"'s character, he can trick you not for nothing! Whose person? For whom? There is no need for "Party A" and "Party B" to know and "connect" with each other for no reason! As for this kind of people, their "smart qualities" have been spreading and spreading since they were young, and they have been selected by the "owner" to use resources to cultivate them for a long time! ▼ They are not enthusiastic, and most of them don't even know Shali Fei at all. They just join in the fun, strike up a conversation, and become familiar with each other. When you talk to people about this from now on, you can directly say that Shali Fei and them are old friends. When Li Yan meets them, he has to call him uncle. Just like some people Li Yan knew in his previous life, they would go to the rich people in a hurry, take pictures, say a few words, and then go out and say that they were the ones they were dating, thereby defrauding them of money. Shali Fei naturally knew the secret, and said with a worried look on his face: "Everyone, we have something important to do today. Let's talk about it some other time. I hope you can forgive me." "That's it. Sha Daxia is busy first." Everyone saw his appearance and already had some guesses in their hearts. Although he won't say it in front of his face, he will definitely discuss it behind his back. The news of Li Yan's serious injury is expected to spread throughout Xianyang City tonight. Shali Fei stopped paying attention to these people. He took the gambling ticket and came to the wooden counter at the back. Just as he was about to exchange it, he saw the casino boy respectfully cupped his hands and said: "Master Sha, please move, our shop owner wants to see you." ... ... ... How could Shali Fei believe this nonsense. Everyone who runs a casino is more sinister than the other, and if they are trying to show off their hospitality for nothing, there must be something wrong with them. Although he didn't know the reason, Shali Fei still shook his head and said: "Thank you very much, Shopkeeper Wu, for your kindness, but I have other things to do. I will go to the pharmacy after taking the money." "Oh?" Shopkeeper Wu frowned, "Mr. Li was seriously injured?" /Quoted from Chapter 49 The aftermath

The protagonist upgrades too slowly, and the level of participation is too high. The protagonist in the previous book participated in battles in the Mahayana period during the foundation building period. The same is true for the protagonist in this book. The level is getting higher and higher, but the strength is not increasing, which is a bit outrageous.

Ever since the emperor published his article, he has been boasting about his great talents, his thoughtfulness, and his master of balance. The kings of the feudal lords everywhere were trembling, and the major religions were so frightened that they dared not disobey him. Let's take a look at the specific performance. 1. There are no emperor's chess pieces in the palaces of the major feudal princes. At the same time, the violent institutions directly under the emperor have no secrets and no regular reports. The local guards who are now present have either rebelled or are using their power for personal gain. The local supervisory agencies are in name only. Almost all major news comes from either the protagonist or the major leaders. 99% Of local officials are suffering from lung cancer, that is, It is said that the emperor's control over local areas and vassal kings is almost zero; 2. The emperor can command only one of the top ten masters in high-end combat power. He has no royal background and no training team. The firearms organization he relies on is penetrated like a sieve. The official high-end combat power on the scene has been stretching the hips, and the status of firearms has been directly raised. The top ten masters can only produce 200 muskets per second. What is funny is that most of the firearms that appear are in the hands of villains. To sum up, the emperor is a disabled child who cannot see or hear. He wields a high-end firearm as a fire stick and tries to intimidate the miscreants who come forward. At best, he is the emperor. At worst, he is just a puppet chosen by major sects and villains. To be honest, no matter how much you brag about the counterinsurgency in the Southwest and Southeast in the later stage, my feeling is that without the major religions and protagonists, your official army will be defeated at a stroke. The official army has no way to arrange the villains. They will only use human lives to fill in the gaps. If there are not enough people, they will kill the leader and replace the wave to continue filling in. Without the protagonist, the progress cannot be pushed a little, just like the stupid NPCs in low-energy online games ten years ago.

The author writes very well at the beginning of each book, well, there is no back part. If the author can write the latter part well, at least he can become a god without collapse. It can be seen that the author will not write the later plot at all. As long as the protagonist's strength reaches the peak of the initial map, the subsequent plot will be like riding a rocket and quickly enter the finale. There are several common ways to deal with it: 1. Just make a map with a fixed upper limit. Explain the upper limit at the beginning, and then write the middle part deeper and thinner. For example, in the fantasy rebirth novels that were common in the past, the protagonist was the strongest and invincible existence in his previous life, and he was only one step away from reaching the highest realm and being reincarnated. 2. Keep changing maps. Every new map you get is basically at the lowest level, and then you work your way up step by step, without changing the medicine. This is also a very common old routine, such as the perfect world and countless others. 3. Set the flow. The highlight of this kind of book is not the protagonist, but the setting. For example, the original world view depicts the world view, and the profound and detailed description makes people feel as if they are actually there. It has a strong sense of picture and allows readers to directly enter the novel. Most of the novels that started a genre are highly regarded, even if they have major flaws. (Setting flow is the easiest way to become a god. A good setting is worth tens of millions of strokes)

Some people have opinions on this, indicating that there is something wrong with it. But the core point is that it is not an issue of age difference or character design, but that no one wants to watch the supporting characters work together for CP, and no one wants to watch the emotional drama of the supporting characters! ! This thing can be said to be one of the poisonous points of Internet literature. Of course you can quote what is written in Jin Yong's martial arts novels about group portraits, but we read online articles. In online articles, it is always right for you to write about the main character filling the cup, the main character lying drunk on the beauty's lap, and the main character taking first place. Your enrichment of the supporting characters' lives may not necessarily conform to the fast food aesthetic.

The characters are not vivid enough. To be specific, the characters are not very consistent, including the three main characters. It is stated at the beginning of the chapter that the protagonist is a "difficult ghost". He is fierce and calm when killing wolves, and does not suffer any loss afterward to ask for benefits. As a result, the following text is less, and the difficulty is rarely mentioned. In the introduction, the protagonist should be a character who is afraid of ghosts and gods, and is ruthless and vicious. There should be some dangerous qualities, but they are not reflected at all. He has become a positive character. He is a little bit poisonous in avenging his father. The previous chapters have all kinds of intense, foreshadowing, and mini-boss characters. In the end, he is killed by others, and the protagonist stands aside stupidly. The male supporting actor, Lao Sha Nei, starts off as a passerby who talks nonsense, is greedy for petty gains, and has no ability. However, he is suddenly promoted to a supporting actor. He becomes smarter, more witty, and more affectionate. He has knowledge and means and constantly adds characters, which is a bit fragmented. The Taoist priest is a little better, but not much, because there is too little written. Being with the protagonist is closely related to blessings and misfortunes. Every blessing must be accompanied by disaster. Logically speaking, the Taoist priest should have some ideas. If he follows the protagonist, why he follows and why he insists so much can actually be written down. The plot promotes the protagonist more like a butterfly, with less promotion and more like an introduction. There are various coincidences and accidents, and the most important thing is the lack of a main line. The golden finger is a bit weak, and now it's mainly about recovery in the later stage. I can't let go when recovering from injuries in a fight, so I'm a bit timid. I hope to upgrade it to a higher level and add automatic recovery in the later stage. (Test.) Otherwise, the protagonist's advantage is really not obvious. He has martial arts talent, but is not unparalleled in the world, cannot suppress the enemy, and the opponent is generally old and advanced, and the protagonist has no advantage. The protagonist should be given an advantage against the enemy that can be used as a common method.

The pace and style of the author's book changes drastically in the middle period of the book. The dangers and disasters that foreshadow the destruction of civilization at every turn are always skipped abruptly in the beginning, and the ship starts sailing after jumping over it. The tension and sense of crisis accumulated by the readers in the early and middle periods of the book are gone in an instant. After the style is seriously torn, it becomes a tasteless "tasteless" for the readers.

I almost want to give up. The writing in Shu and the capital is a mess. Halfway through the book, the protagonist is still wandering around on the fourth floor. Every time he faces the master among the masters, he relies on shady tactics. Every time he follows the enemy, he gets ashes. It's okay once or twice, but you become addicted to writing every time. , Chapters and chapters all talk about what happened to Emperor Daxuan. The Daxuan Dynasty was extremely tyrannical. Every time a demon did evil, the country and the emperor were like trash and couldn't do anything. The same is true for Taixuan Orthodox Church. Every time, they were slapped in the face before they concentrated their efforts. In the end, they had to rely on the little shrimp of the protagonist to end the fight.

It's a bit disgusting to force someone to marry him😓. Just because the author doesn't despise Long Yan'er and is not worthy of the protagonist, he just leaves it to Lao Sha to be his wife. The relationship between the two is also inexplicable. And Long Yan'er shouldn't be too young, so he just rations it to a middle-aged uncle? Can't we portray Long Yan'er alone and have her join the gang as Lao Sha's wife? Isn't it possible to write an independent supporting character? Do you have to add some inexplicable emotional lines, so that after writing half a chapter, the two of them fall in love? 🤮

Just like the previous book, I have no ability and always participate in high-end copies.

The most stupid thing about this book is here. The main characters, the young Karami, are involved in all kinds of shocking rebellion plots organized by villains. They not only want to overthrow the imperial court, but also the heaven and the underworld. There are a bunch of so-called big guys, big sects, and imperial officials who are slow to respond, insensitive, and basically just sit back and watch. The enemy's conspiracy was launched before they came out to join in. The supporting characters in the whole process of decency are basically dispensable. Basically, it depends on the protagonist to discover the conspiracy and turn the tide. Alas, it was very frustrating to watch. Afterwards, the protagonist was given three melons and two dates to send him away, and then the decency continued to collect various resources and practice comfortably. Haha, readers, do you think this is the case?

The writing was a bit boring, especially the fights, which didn't give a sense of the scene. I kept writing explanations, which was annoying to read. There are only a few people who can understand the knowledge about boxing. The point is that the writing is too profound and unnecessary.

Lao Zhang is awesome

I feel like the more I write, the worse it becomes, and it's boring. I can't read it without any impact. It's a long and stinky road document for handling cases. Except for the protagonist, everyone is written as useless waste. Seriously, if you write it this way, wouldn't the protagonist be tired? Anyway, I'm tired of watching

It is already very unreasonable. When a prosperous dynasty faces subversive forces, it can only turn the tide with its protagonist. So far, the Orthodox Church and the government have said that frontal supervision has no role at all, and it has been corroded into a sieve. Without the protagonist, it feels like the country is about to perish. This is the prosperous age.

It's boring to pursue, but it's a pity to abandon The author starts to get sick in the middle of each book, and will no longer support the next book.